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Wednesday, March 9, 2005


Hey!
Well yeah in gym when we play dodgeball instead of throwing balls at the other team i use eather kage bushin, chidori, or neji's 64 points of defenity on my own teammates and skip around like a lunatic. It's so much fun ^^ Anyways im gonna start putting up my fan fic here so there!! It's long so sorry 0.o I'm currently wrinting chapter 33 so yeah... Ok laters everyone.

The Bloody Mist Outcast, The Demon who only cares for Himself, and Demonic Water Bloodline

*Author’s Notes: Yeah this is my first fan fic. You can kind of tell huh? Yeah it sucks. Oh well yeah pretty much this is based of an anime/manga called Naruto. Characters like Haku, Gaara, Kankuro, and Temari where from the original anime/manga series and characters with names like Rena and Kiyoko where based off of real people that I know. Also this story is based off of Japanese Customs because the original Naruto was written and drawn in Japan. So yeah enjoy. (Heh love the title. Pure Genus on my part. ^^)

First Chapter~ A Monster or a Girl?

Rena heard yelling from downstairs that quickly woke her up. Her brown hair fell in three wisps one bigger on her left side of her face and two smaller ones on the other. Her Mist Forehead Protector shined in the moonlight. She stood up, fully clothed from yesterday’s clothing, a very short kimono that was very loosely tied with slits in the sleeves. Underneath that she wore a pair of dark teal pants and a dark teal long sleeved shirt. She also wore a pair of standard blue sandals that most of the ninjas wore. She sneaked downstairs and stood by a wall near the kitchen where her parents where arguing.
“I won’t allow a monster to become a ninja!” She heard her father bellow.
“But…” Her mother tried to reason,
“No! I won’t allow it! She will die! And if you try to stop me you will die as well!”
“Then kill me.”
Rena heard the plunging of the knife. She ran out from her hiding place to her mother’s side. She was already dead.
“No!” Rena cried out “Why…. Why!”
“She supported a monster’s ambition so I killed her.” Her father said calmly.
“I’m not a monster! I’m a ninja of Mist Village!” She screamed
“Not for long” He said drawing out another blade
Rena took a step back.
“Please, Father I don’t want to kill…” She said
Her father ignored her, Stepping in closer.
“KAGE BUNSHIN NO JUSTU!” Rena yelled
She multiplied herself into many copies. Without thinking all of her copies attacked her father with many kunaies, killing him.

She returned to her normal state. Suddenly she realized that she had killed her own father. Tears started to run down her face. She knew there was only one thing to do, run to the only person that could help her, Haku.

She ran out of her home. The cold breeze hit her face but she didn’t care much. The moon was her only means of sight as she ran down the dirt road. She stopped at Haku’s home and knocked on the door, sobbing heavily. Haku answered. He looked much like a female and dressed as one also. He looked at Rena and saw her sobbing. Then he noticed her bloodstained hands, grabbed her wrists, and pulled her to the side of his home.
“What is this Rena?!” He yelled at her.
“I killed him…” Rena said “He killed Kasan so I killed him…” (Kasan= mother in Jap)
“Rena… How could you…” Haku whispered
“I’m sorry I just… it’s almost like I didn’t realize that he was dead…” She said sobbing
“Listen, you can’t stay here Rena” Haku said “As soon as the Mizukage realizes that he is dead they will come after you. You’re an outcast now.”
“But where should I go?” Rena said
“Run to Rainbow Village. Its north of here but you must hurry it will be a long trip. They’ll adopt you as part of there Village if you say your and outcast here. But don’t tell them that you killed anyone or else they will kill you.” Haku said
He released her wrists and gave her a loaf of bread.
“Your going to have to kill something to eat but that will feed you for a couple of days. Now hurry, get out of here!”
“Haku,” Rena said, almost whispering “Will I ever see you again?”
“Most likely. Now hurry up and get out of here!” Haku replied.
“Ok” Rena said.
She ran out of the Village, never turning back she continued on until daybreak at which point she was physically and mentally exhausted. She fell to her knees and painted. She took out the loaf of bread and bit into it. The bread was dry and stale but it tasted great. The sun was pounding down on her back and the sand was unbarring. She was guessing she was near Suna (or Sand) Village. She fell down and closed her eyes. She slept until something woke her up. Some sort of Voices.

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