Saturday, November 17, 2007

.:Reowar:. ~How do you do it; that thing you do? ~Can you explain, because without you my wold is blue. ~Won't you show me your charm? ~Don't be afraid my dear, I won't be alarmed. ~Just open my eyes with your frozen hands so I can see. ~What's that, my dear? You won't comply with me? ~I'd love to open my eyes, but I'm afraid if I did I would only see black. ~I wish your warm breath, your soft touch, and rosey red lips would bring me back. ~I will wait under this heavy earth and wait for time's demise. ~But in the end, my dear, when you come see me, you'll be in for a surprise. ~No heaven awaits for me -- Nor a Hell. ~Only this tight wooden box I call, "my cell." ~I wait eternally for your love again and to hold you close, dear. ~I lay alone and cold forever without you, is my only fear. ~"Help me!" I cry and cry. ~But yet again -- no reply. ~Do you not miss you beloved; miss your one and true? ~For the day you leave me, my dear, for another is the one you'll rue. ~The sands of time slowly pass in the hourglass, grain by grain. ~Whilest you hold my tombstone, with your heart in pain. ~End I think it's a bit dark for me but I think it's well done. Tell me what you guys think. Wouldja? I'm going to give it to Tasha on Monday with a drawing, and by the way Tasha is like a year younger than me so no worries. Not a pedophile! <3 I just need to work on the drawing now and some more poetry. Think I have a knack for it? You tell me. Please critique! ~RW

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