Monday, October 18, 2004

I know it's long
I have to write any kind of summary for this otherwise I will never write a single story in my life.

So the stage is set in the first scene where ehhhh...Christian(Hero) is drinking coffee with his girlfriend Valerie(Damsel). They talk about the recent death of a professor. Valerie used to help him out with his studies, so she seems a little bit off. A bully character comes in, lets call him Joe. Joe is attracted to Valerie. The damsel and Hero leave, Christian wants to avoid the fight, despite Joe's taunts.

Anyways. Christian works in a science lab, where the old professor used to work. It's Valerie's connection's with him that gave him the job. Valerie is still in college or university. during an experiment he is hit by unknown kind of radiation that the lab was trying to culture. Besides an unusually high level of some harmless substance and tiredness, the doctor can't find anything wrong with Christian so he is aloud to go home in less than a weak. Couple of days drift by. Christian drinks coffee and goes to work every morning. Nothing seriously weird happens, until one day coming back from his work as usual he hears screams of his girlfriend. He run's into a side alleyway where the screams are coming from and see Joe trying to rape Valerie. Christians sees white.

He wakes up next morning and finds out how an angel surrounded in white lightning saved Valerie from Joe. Slowly Christian realizes he has powers, he starts developing and he ends up using them for cause of good looking for a fight in night time, all dressed in white.

Eventually this leads him to him finding “Bob” a drug dealer. Eventually Christian end’s up chasing Bob, who runs into the lab where unbeknown to him, Christian originally got his super-powers. Barron red, the guy who owns the building, has just gone into the lab too for some late night inspection. Fearing the worst Christian speeds up, but he does not reach it in time. Something even worse than he feared has happened. A man in covered in rosy lightning comes out.

Apparently Bob got the same, though sooped-up, powers as Christian from the same process. The Red man’s single pink (well pinkish red colour) blast destroys the whole corridor they’re in and blast’s Christian through the wall. Fight continues outside in the air. Christian puny white blast do nothing to the far more powerful version of himself. The White man runs and hides with his life.

The next day Christian gets the news that Baron Red has survived the “weird explosion” in the lab, he is in hospital, but otherwise he is fine. Christian goes to visit the Baron, as he feels it was partly his fault and also because Baron took interest in him when he was in bed after the original accident in the lab. They talk a bit, about current affairs, Christian shows him a picture of his girlfriend. They discuss Christian’s accident , Baron’s accident. Baron tells Christian that he feels that he was harmed by the person tabloid’s refer to as “The Ghost”, aka Christian. This doesn’t help Christian’s self esteem. He starts looking for Bob at night, patrolling the streets. Having more free time as his girlfriend, Valerie has left to visit her parent in the country. Finally one night he find Bob. Christian is surprised by the stuff Bob knows about his true identity. In a fit of rage, Christian challenges Bob, yet what is more surprising is that Bob does not use his super power’s. Something clicks in Christian’s mind. He hurries to the hospital and finds that Baron Red has signed out. Not knowing what to do, Christian Decides that his girl so just in case, he hurries at full speed defying couple of physics and biological laws, to were he knows he can find Valerie. He finds her driving through highway in the middle of the fields. There are no other cars because it’s night time. Before he is able to explain everything, the Red man arrives. Christian now identifies him as Baron Red. Apparently Bob is his drug dealer, as Baron Red transports drugs through his building using science lab for cover. He knew how to get the powers since he took special interest in Christians case. Well after he figured out that he is one and the same man. I haven’t made that one up yet I guess. ^_^;

They have a long fight and Christian wins. However that is not the end.
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