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ok so i wrote a new song and thats all i'm really posting for i want opinions on it its called sometimes and its my first actual slow song here it is
Sometimes
By: Massacre Rage
[Verse 1]
I'm thinking of tomorrow,
I"m dreaming of yesterday,
I'm here now with only sorrow,
I dont know if i can make another day,
[chorus 1]
Sometimes i get sad!
It seems like a hopeless cause,
Thinking of you makes me glad,
Now i know i'm the one with the flaws,
[verse 2]
I'm thinking of rain again,
I'm dreaming of thunderstorms,
I"m asking you to take my pain,
but now my hear is torn,
[chorus 2]
Sometimes i get mad!
I go into my silent rage,
Thinking of you makes me glad,
I wanna leave this day and turn the page,
[bridge]
I"m taking a beating,
My hope God is fleeting,
I need you to rescue me,
Open my eyes so i can see!
[chorus 3]
Sometimes i feel fine!
Speaking with you makes me glad,
I think of old times,
and suddenly i go back to sad,
[final chorus]
and sometimes..
and sometimes..
and sometimes i feel helpless,
and othertimes i feel i'm saved,
Sometimes i wonder why i felt this,
But i'll just continue on the path unpaved,
[solo]
and sometimes i get sad!
Sometimes i get mad!
and sometimes i feel fine!
and sometimes..
and sometimes i can see your glory shine!
thanks for reading the song leave comments on your opinion of it thanks again
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its all a matter of opinion...duh