Saturday, February 19, 2005

The rewriten Part of the story
Chie I also made a few changes to the prolog, mostly grammar though.

U.C. 50, on the dark side of the moon near Lunar Military Base 117 “Kubasa”, an alien machine was found; it’s robotic human like shape was 18 meters tall and looked like it was wearing ancient Samurai armor. From this machine two prototypes were built, their codenames where Rx-189 Mk2 “Loki” and Rx-189 Mk3 “Shadow” But only after a few months the artifact and the two prototypes disappeared and all memory of them erased. Almost two decades later, using the little data that was left scientists from the colonies L3 finished building M.S.-05 the first “Zaku” Mobile Suit.

Four centuries later in U.C. 0479, “one month after the Great War”, because of massive damage caused by mobile suits and gundams, the Earth Sphere ordered all mobile suits including the gundams to be destroyed, to prevent another war that might destroy the earth.

The year is now U.C. 0489; all battles are now fought in a fighting competition called “Rumbling” with strict rules, and pilot five-meter tall mechs called scoobies. Though most of the mobile suits and gundams were destroyed a few survived and were used by outlaws and gangs, and there were few who would stand against them. After five years of turmoil, a secret government called, G.D.A.M. finished their search for the prototype called “Shadow”.


Episode 1

Hi, I’m Bit Winner


Old Tokyo in the Shenjuku Battle Arena, a two on one Scoobie battle is underway, between Allan and Jack Race, of team Wolf against Bit winner. A missile fired from Bit’s crimson red S.V. (Scoobie) hits its mark on Allen’s light gray S.V. causing the S.V. to malfunction. Allen yells out in frustration and pounds his fits onto the control panel.
Bit pulling up beside him says mockingly “Better luck next time, Allen.”
Allen getting out of the cockpit exclaims, “I’ll get you Bit Winner!”
Bit’s S.V. A.I named ZERO whispers loudly ennuf that Allen could hear “I doubt that.”
Bit laughs and says, “You got that right. We can beat you any day Allen.”
ZERO shouts “Warning, missile lock-on! It’s behind us.”
Bit looks at the rear monitor and pilots the S.V. to the right, between two destroyed buildings. The missile narrowly misses Bit’s S.V, and crashes into the ground and explodes creating a cloud of dust.
Bit letting out a sigh of relief “That was way too close. Hey ZERO Activate the O.C. (Optical Camouflage)”
“Rodger. Activating now.”
Then the Scoobie Bit and ZERO are in almost completely disappear, only leaving a slight rippled outline.
Jack Race over the radio says “Nice move Bit. But I won’t miss next time.”
Bit sneaking up on Jack from behind stats “There won’t be a next time.”
Jack questions, “What do you mean?”
Bit rushing forward “Just look behind you and find out!”
Jack turning his head exclaims “What!”
Jack starts to turn around his S.V. but it’s too late, Bit hits him with his drill causing a command system freeze.
An air horn can be herd throughout the battlefield, signifying that the battle is over. The robotic judge states “Fight 10569, Bit Winner Vs Team Wolf. Winner,” then the judge points his left arm towards Bit, and announces “Bit Winner!”
Jack still inside his Scoobie “I can’t believe we lost! Oh well that was a good mach anyway.”
Bit opening the cockpit and laying his right arm on the outside of the hatch remarks, “Not really, you two are only worth 15,000Ny(Neo Yen).” After yawning bit continues saying “Normally I wouldn’t fight class B fighters, but I needed some easy money to get a new hoverboard.”
The Race brothers angrily shout “What!”
Bit “Anyway, I think you guys should change your name. How about Team “Slow Turtles” or “Fuzzy Pandas”?”

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