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Friday, December 26, 2003

   Help!
Help! I need a duel written for my YGO fic, Destiny Foretold It. Here's the first chapter:

Destiny Foretold It

Chapter 1

She stepped off the plane, looking for her grandfather's friend, who she would be staying with for the summer. If she recalled, he had a two grandsons that looked alike, but one was older. Both were master duelists. She sighed. The reason she accepted the invitation to Seto Kaiba's new tournament still eluded her.

She was a pretty girl, with long gold hair that shone nicely in the sun. Her crystal blue eyes held a feeling of power and wisdom. She was tall, thin, with the right curves. She had very light skin, which was surprising for all the time she spent in Egypt.

"Lorene!"

The 16-year-old turned around. She knew she wasn't hard to spot. Black leather pants, black high-heeled boots, and a black tank top that hung comfortably on her showed off her figure. A gold choker and a gold armband were her only jewelry.

She saw a grey spikey haired man and two boys who looked the same at first glance but she saw that the taller, older one had narrower eyes and a more - dark - presence.

Lorene smiled, "Hello Mr. Motou."

"Yugi, Yami, this is Lorene Friedman." Grandpa said, smiling at Lorene "And call me Grandpa."

"Hi!" Yugi said in his always chipper attitude, shaking Lorene's hand. Yami also shook her hand and smiled.

"Do you have anymore bags?" Grandpa noticed Lorene's small duffel bag.

"No, I plan on going shopping."

"Tea and Mai will love that." Yugi said, as the group moved towards the exit. They were passing the arcade on the way to the game shop when they heard, "Yugi! Yami! Grandpa!" They turned and saw Tea, Tristan, Joey, Mai and Serenity.

"Hey guys!" Yugi said. "So," Joey said, looking Lorene over, "who's the babe?" "Joey!" Mai and Tea slapped him. Lorene smiled. "This is Lorene Friedman. She'll be a competitor in the tournament." Grandpa said, introducing Lorene.

"That's great! You can hang out with us!" Tea said. They all looked at Grandpa. He laughed. Taking Lorene's bag he said, "Be back by dinner." "Thanks Grandpa!"

"So Lorene," Serenity started to talk, "where do you come from?" "America. My parents died when I was young, so I lived with foster parents till I was 14. Then I made some friends." "Who?" Joey asked. "Ah, confidential." Lorene said, smirking.

"So, how good a duelist are you?" asked Yami. "I'm undefeated," came the casual reply. "Really?" he said. The group stopped. Lorene and Yami stood facing each other. "Do you want me to prove it?" Lorene asked a glint in her eye. Yami grinned, "I appreciate proof."

"Well then Yami Motou," she said, "I challenge you to a duel!"

~*~*~*~*~

I need someone to write the duel between Yami and Lorene. I would write it, but I don't know nothing. So, could I have some help? I'd really appreciate. Pwease? :C If I get multiple entries, I'll post each one, and let the people, the driving force of authors, give their opinions.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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