Saturday, December 27, 2003

Help #2
Question #1: What type of demon is Kuronue in YYH?

Request: I need a last name made up for Genkai and her father. Here is the first chapter for my new YYH story dealing with this question and request.

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Darling Chii: Hello and welcome to my second YYH fic, starring my all time favorite YYH character (and my sensei), Genkai.

Genkai: Don’t start causing trouble.

DC (wide innocent eyes): Who me?

Genkai: Evidently you don’t remember that time you ate 75 pixie sticks in one setting during choir retreat.

DC: Ah the good old days.

Genkai: *sigh*

DC: This story may seem rather confusing (Genkai: It is), so I’ll explain a little bit about it in each chapter. I’m kinda nervous about it, though. It’s rather dark, compared to my other stories. It’s rated for violence (I think), maybe some language (I think), and future chapters (if I get there). No real sexual situations, I think.

Genkai: Get on with it!

DC: Fine. As noted in all fics, I don’t own nothing; not YYH or any of its characters. I own the story line. That’s it. So people who like to sue, go sue other people who like to sue. It’s probably legal to sue someone who’s trying to sue you. Like a person who can sue because coffee’s hot (really stupid person), and I’m rambling…

Genkai: I’ll start the start the story, my god. We begin somewhere in the Spirit World. This takes place after the Dark Tournament, like a year or so.

DC *whispers*: But I have some surprises, haha.

Genkai: what did you say?

DC: Nothing!

Genkai *sighs again*: Enjoy the story.

To Be An Immortal

~*~*~*~ Ch. 1~*~*~*~


Thump, thump.

Thump, Thump.

Her heart was beating faster every second. She had to get there in time. She had to save him.

Thump, Thump.

“Argh!” shouted a demon, coming at her. “Don’t get in my way!” She growled, punching him in the face, then kneeing him. She ran faster. “Please be safe… father.” She thought.

Thump, THUMP!

THUMP, THUMP!

She finally got to the clearing. Bodies littered the ground. A kitsune and a bat demon were fighting demons that seemed to come up from the very ground.

The young woman ignored everything but the Topless Tower. She still had time. Her hopes were lifted. A small smile graced her lips, then slipped away. A young man appeared, holding a older male, and a head in another hand.

“Hello there, dear sister,” he said, sneering. “I am not your sister,” the young woman said, her amber eyes holding rage and hatred, her soft pink hair blowing gently in the wind. “All right, step-sister.” The younger man said. “Oh, and mother sends her condolences.” He threw the head; a woman’s head; the head of his mother, her step mother.

She balled her hands into fists. “How could you, you… monster!?!” “Well, she stood in my way. And now it’s your father’s turn.” He replied, grinning evilly.

“Noooooo!” She screamed, but it was too late. The man drew a knife and stuck it in the back of the woman’s father, then threw him off the tower.

She ran and caught him. Taking the knife out, she rolled him over. He was dying; the blade had been covered in poison. The man moved. “Don’t,” she said, silent tears falling from her eyes, “don’t move.”

The man chuckled softly, his dark blue eyes opening. “My grace, my angel, my light,” he said, his hand touching her face, “you must leave…” “No!” “… leave and fulfill your destiny. You must – protect – the crystals…” he coughed, spurting blood.

“Don’t talk. You must rest. You have to get help.” The girl cried. “My time has come.” The man interrupted. “But remember that I’m with you always.” And with that, he closed his eyes for the last time. King Phelios ____________ was dead.

“No. Don’t leave me. No!” the girl wept openly.

“We must leave,” the kitsune said, coming to stand beside the girl, tail swishing, her golden eyes darting. “I agree with Botan, we must leave,” the bat demon said, coming over.

“Leave me be.” The girl mumbled. “Don’t make me carry you.” The male demon said. The girl’s head shot up and glared. She stood up and glanced at her father’s body. She turned away and waved her hand; a portal appeared.

The wo demons went through first. The girl paused. “Come on Genkai!” “Kuronue, give her a break!” The girl went through the portal.

Genkai ______________, daughter of King Phelios and Queen Kaleen, last of the immortal psychics, was now orphaned.

“I swear, upon my father’s grave, I will kill all three of you,” whispered Genkai, closing the portal, leaving behind the body wasted land.

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DC (crying): What hardships I’m putting you through.

Genkai: I think you’ve lost it.

DC *cheery disposition returning*: Not quite yet.

Genkai: So that my student here will stay busy and happy, please review.

DC: And if you have a title idea, tell me, ‘kay?

DC and Genkai: Ja ne!

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Well, did you like it?

The spaces after Phelios and Genkai's name are for their last name. Please help me and think up one. Pwetty pwease? With sugar on top?
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