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Thursday, April 1, 2004


   A scene from my comic


Here's a scene from part of the 2nd half and some of the 3rd half of Yoko(the comic I told you about earlier):Yoko,her friends,her brother,and Nanami(she used to be a villain) are in the Village of Light.Everyone is sleeping,and Yoko just woke up from having a bad dream about Makoto and Morikumo(he works for Makoto)
Yoko:*gasp*
Yoko:*pant,pant*
Yoko:Why am I dreaming about them?
Yoko:That's right...No one came to help me that night.
*as she's walking to Unozawa's room*
Yoko:Maybe Unozawa will let me sleep with him tonight.
*looks at his door*
Yoko:That's strange.The door's already open.
*as she walks in his room*
Yoko:Unozawa?
Yoko:Unozawa?
Yoko:Unoza...
Yoko:*gasp*
*sees Nanami in his room on top of him(no they're not doing anything)
Nanami:Unozawa,I'm...in love with you.
Unozawa:Nanami I...
Yoko:Unozawa...how...how...could you?
Unozawa:Yoko it's not what...
*Yoko runs off crying*
Unozawa:Yoko wait!
*Unozawa turns to Nanami*
Unozawa:I'm sorry Nanami,but I can't say the same to you.There's someone who I already love,and right now she's somewhere crying because of a misunderstanding.
*he runs off to chase Yoko*
*Yoko runs through a garden with Unozawa chasing after her*
Unozawa:Yoko!
Yoko:Go away!
Yoko:*pant,pant*
*Unozawa catches up to her and grabs her hand*
Yoko:Let go of me!!
Unozawa:Listen to me!
Yoko:No!!
*she scratches his face and runs off again*
*Unozawa just stands there shocked*
*Yoko's still running*
*she tripes over a vine*
Yoko:Whoa!
*falls into garden's lake*
*sploosh*
Yoko:*thinking to herself*I'm in the garden's lake.
Yoko:*thinking*Huh?Oh no!My leg!
*a vine is wrapped around her leg*
*the vine starts wrapping its self around Yoko*
Yoko:*thinking*The vine,it's wrapping its self around me!
*Nozumo(a half elf who lives in the Village of Light)comes out after hearing Yoko fall into the lake*
Nozumo:Is anyone out there?
*bubble,bubble*
Nozumo:Someone's in the water.
*Nozumo jumpes in the water*
*sploosh*
*as he's swimming toward the bottom*
Nozumo:*thinking*I'm comming whoever you are.
*he stops*
Nozumo:*thinking*It's Lady Yoko!
Nozumo:*thinking*Here's my chance to get Lady Yoko to like me!
Nozumo:*thinking*1st,I rescue her...
Nozumo:*thinking*Then,she wakes up and says(while she's hugging me):
Nozumo in high pitched voice:Oh Nozumo,I was so scared!Thank you for rescuing me.I love you more than I love Unozawa!
*a swimming monkey grabs Nozumo's headband and swims off*
Nozumo:Hey!Gimme back my headband!
Nozumo:*thinking*Forget that.I need to get these Death Vines off of her.
Nozumo:*thinking*And there's only one way.
Nozumo:O Nature and Water spirit I sum...
Nozumo:*thinking*Need air!
*swimming to the top*
Nozumo:Need air!Need air!Need air!
*reaches top of water*
*blsh*
Nozumo:*Gasp*
Nozumo:Now lets try again.
Nozumo:O Nature and Water spirit I summon thee...
*mark on his forehead glows*
*water and plant vines rise up*
Nozumo:Please give me the power to rescue Lady Yoko!
*water and plant vines turn into light then the light turns into braclets*
Nozumo:Braclets?Oh come on.Whatever happened to the magical sword or dagger?I'm not even a girl!
Nozumo:Well I guess I'll wear them.But they better work.
*looks around*
Nozumo:Where'd they go?
*looks at his hand and sees braclets*
Nozumo:Yaaa!
Nozumo:Well,saves me the time of having to put them on,at least.Okay time to go.
*takes deep breath*
*swims down toward Yoko*
*as he's swimming,braclets change*
Nozumo:*thinking*Hm?
Nozumo:*thinking*The braclets transformed!I could get used to this.
*Nozumo waves his hands over Death Vines and they unwrap Yoko*
I hope you liked that scene from my comic.Maybe I'll post some other scenes another time.^^


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