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Saturday, October 13, 2007


Parts 1 -5 of my FMA fanfic.
Part ------1
It was a rainy night in the small town. And the usual weekly commotion was happening outside the local inn.
A group of men and women gathered around a young woman . She looked about 15 or 16 . She had long black hair , that was messy and looked windswept.
And right now she was being held a few feet off the ground by the scruff of the neck.
"Do we have to do this every night?" the man holding her asked.
"Actually it's been a week since I came here," she answered.
"Alright smart ass," he said. " Why don't you go home to your parents." He then let go of the young woman.
"Oh that's right! You ain' t got none , do you Bella?" said another man in the crowd. The young women,called Bella, was then pushed from behind and landed in a mud puddle,several men and women laughed.
Two strangers stopped near the inn to watch the spectacle.
Bella wiped mud out of her eyes and said," You're all ass holes . And to answer your question ,Bart, yeah I don't have parents. My father is dead,and my mom is gone."
Bella turned, and walked away.
The crowd shuffled back inside the inn.
" Hey, you ,is this the only inn in the entire town?" asked one of the strangers, calling toward Bella.
She turned and walked towards him." Yeah it is ," she looked at the two strangers one was dressed entirely in a suit of armor . The other stranger looked about 15 and was what you might call short. He had long blond hair that was tied back it what looked like a braid. He wore white gloves. His shirt and pants were black and we wore a long red jacket over it all. Bella noticed a sliver chain hanging out of his pocket. "Your a State- Alchemist ?"
He nodded.
"Cool. I'm an alchemist too. No official title or anything but still I am. Oh, you should just forget about the inn , they hate alchemists. "
He nodded.
"By the way , I'm Bella , what's your name ?"
" We're the Elric Brothers." he said." I'm Edward Elric and this-" he pointed toward the one in the suit of armor." is my brother Alphonse Elric."
Alphonse waved," Hi " he said.
Seriously , you're the Full Metal Alchemist?"
" Yeah. I am." Edward answered.
"Cool, your like a legend .....I'm a bit of a fan. Hey if you want you and your brother can stay at my house if you like."
Ed and Al looked at one another." Sure, " Ed answered.
Bella smiled. "Great, my house is this way." she said walking away , Ed and Al following in her wake.


FMA Fanfic------ part 2

"Oh ,I forgot to mention , feel free to explore any room in the house," Bella began. " Except mine. Don't go anywhere near my room."
"Why ?" Edward asked rather suspiciously.
" Do I need a reason?" " She asked. " Because if I do here's one: My house my rules."
They continued walking in silence.
Bella stopped suddenly ,so suddenly, that Ed and Al almost bumped into her. She had stopped in front of
a large house. It was more like a mansion then a house.
"Well ,here we are ," Bella said, opening the door and walking inside.
Ed and Al stopped outside the threshold," Al, there's a reason she doesn't want us in her room and I'm going to find out what it is. "
" Big Brother, isn't possible she just wants privacy?"
" Maybe," Edward muttered.
"Hey are you guys going to come inside or what?" Bella asked , calling from somewhere inside the house.


Part -----------4
Ed and Al walked inside shutting the door behind them.
hey were standing in a brightly lit hallway . Doors lined either side of the hall. " Are you hungry?" Bella asked her head popping into view from behind a nearby door.
Ed nodded.
"Alright, it might take awhile , go ahead and look around if you want." Bella said, as she disappeared behind the door.
"Come on, Al" Edward said.
Ed and Al walked through the house. Ed was determined to find Bella's room. He opened the door closest to him .
There was a large rectangular table in the center of the room, five chairs were seated around it.
There was nothing else in the room except several shelves filled with books.
" Look at this ,Brother ," Al said as he handed Edward a book.
He flipped through the book's pages . Here and there sentences were circled in red as if they were of some great importance. " Human transmutation ?!? Why would ---" Ed began before he was interrupted......
" I was wondering were you guys went. Foods done. " Bella said entering the room. "Nice , library isn't it?"
" Yeah it's great, " He said still looking at the book.
"Oh you found it ," Bella said recognizing the book he was holding. "In case your wondering , the book was like that when I got it. I swear."
Edward nodded , by the expression on his face it was easy to see that he didn't believe her.
"Fine don't believe me," Bella said looking at Ed.
Part --------5
"Your rooms here." Bella said to Ed and Al , two hours later.
She opened the door.
The room was bare ,except for two beds and a door that probably led to a closet.
"Well goodnight, if you need anything just call." Bella said walking out the door.
" Right," Edward said.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
It was a quiet morning . Ed and Al were still in their rooms . Suddenly, there was a loud ear-splitting screech........
"What the hell?" Edward asked abruptly.
"Bella," Al answered already on his feet.
Ed and Al quickly left the room.
There was another scream." Over there," Edward said.
He began to pound on the nearest door .
It opened a sliver, a pair of eyes were the only things visible. They had a look of pain in them but also ...happiness. " S- sorry I just fell." Bella said as she tried to close the door in both Ed and Al's faces......but Edward stuck his right arm in between the door and doorframe." Cut the crap , Bella, let us in." Edward said.
"No," Bella answered trying to close the door, as Ed tried to force it open.
The door swung open with aloud bang ... Bella staggered backward several feet.



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