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Sunday, October 14, 2007


Hi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Song I'm listening to : Black Hole Sun by Soundgarden

Hi everyone , how are you guys ? I'm alright a bit pissed off cause I accidently deleted a bunch of shit I had typed up to post ..... oh well guess I'll need to type it up again.
Anyway, I started working on my FMA fanfic some more it's awesome. My friend Kera is helping me out with it. She added her charcter Sara into my story..... here's what I've got so far. I hope you enjoy.
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Part ----------6

The door swung open with a bang ...........Bella staggered backward several feet , knocking over a nearby lamp which shattered to the floor.
There was no other light source in the room, smoke wafted out towards Edward and Alphonse.
The room was bare except for a bed in one corner. There were markings on the floor .......the markings formed a circle. A trail of blood led from the center of the circle to Bella. There was a deep gash on her left arm. Blood oozed from her shoulder down to her finger tips.
"A transmutation circle," Edward stated.
Bella nodded.
" You tried to perform a human transmutation..."
Bella nodded again ," I tried ....a little blood is worth it......when I can bring back the dead. Not what I was expecting but with a little work .........it could become more human." She clapped her hands........something moved in the shadows.
As it came closer , Edward and Alphonse realized what the thing was .......a skeleton.
Edward's eyes grew large with shock and something else.....he turned to Bella anger written all over is face. "You created that thing ?!? What the hell were you thinking !?! Transmutation on human souls is forbidden alchemy!"
"Bella is that a skeleton in your room?" asked a girl standing behind Ed and Al.
"Yes," Bella said as Edward was then lifted of the ground several inches from behind.
"You finally got here took you long enough, " Bella said looking past Edward to the girl behind him.
"Yeah , yeah.... like I could have gotten here any faster. " She answered.
"PUT ME DOWN ! NOW ! DAMN IT !" Edward said thrashing about." AL , GET ME DOWN !"
"Sorry ," Al said as the girl fell to the ground. Which caused Edward to fall also. Ed stood up and dusted himself off. The girl did the same then walked over to Bella . " Bella you should have waited for me ... because then you wouldn't have gotten hurt; that skeleton would be a human; and these two wouldn't know anything about this." She said. The girl clapped her hands , and the gash on Bella's arm was nothing but a scratch, almost completely healed. She turned to look at the skeleton, snapped her fingers , and the skeleton collapsed into a pile of motionless bones.
Ed and Al looked shocked. "Who are you ?" Al asked. Ed and Al stared at the girl. She and Bella looked some what alike. The girl's outfit was similar to that of a military uniform. Although her outfit was red instead of the usual blue. Very different from the sleeveless black shirt and black pants that Bella was wearing. Her hair was the same length of Bella's reaching the middle of her back.Most of the girl's hair was black , her bangs were a shade of red that matched her clothing perfectly.
"I'm Sara Mustang , cousin of Bella and Ro--" the girl began to say.
"Don't tell then that !" Bella interrupted.
"Bella ,come on, he is your brother and my cousin. I don't care if you like Roy or not. He's still your brother !!!" Sara yelled back at Bella.
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So what do you think? Is it ok ? Please post comments and tell me what i can do to make it better .

The Dark Princess of Halloween ,
Misa

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