Thursday, August 3, 2006

Guess what, im gonna try and draw the cover to my book tonight ^^. i decided that im gonna call it 'the treasure' i dont know what im gonna do for the cover yet though thats why i said im gonna TRY to draw it. my brothers are being idiots as usual. OMG!! my brother, the stupidest one of all just threw our kitten on to our couch! GRRRRR he's gonna get it tomorrow!! sry about that it's just he broke one o four cats legs before and we had to give him away and i wont let that happen again! once again, sry about that. at the end of this post im gonna put what i have done of my story. im not sure were i left off but i know that you get to meet a new character her name is Yaeko and she starts out evil but ends up practically saving the boy (i really need to figure out a name for him...) well here is a youtube of kohaku from inuyasha:

and here is my story, its around three pages now:
THE TREASURE
Chapter one

Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! A shriek came from the ally. I ran, but I don’t know where to. All I know is that I’ll end up…DEAD. Everywhere, anywhere people want me dead. See, I’m known as the treasure and supposedly I have magical powers but…I’ve never experienced any. Dead end, I can’t go any further. Another shriek, this time I follow it. I see them, a young girl screaming for her life, and a guy named Kabuto holding her with a knife to her neck. The young girl gripping his arm as tight as she could trying to get him off of her. Kabuto looks up with a pleased look on his face.
“finally, you’re here. You know a guy could die of old age waiting for you,” Kabuto said with an evil smirk.
“why do you do this?! I’m the one you’re after not innocent people!” I said, but I don’t think he heard or… he pretended not to hear.
Suddenly, he throws the girl to the side and goes after me. I watch as the girl leaves. I know I have time to because even though I’ve never experienced magical powers I’ve experienced extreme fighting skills. Before he was even half way towards me I was four feet to my left. And since he was going so fast and there was nothing in front of him to catch his fall he landed with a hard THUMP! He got up and looked at me, nobody knew about my fighting skills and he just found out.
“So I see my little experiment worked,” said Kabuto.
I had no clue what he was talking about. What experiment? And when did he do it? I knew I had to find out, but it would be to risky to ask now. Suddenly it was pitch black, I couldn’t see anything or hear anything. Then I felt a horrible pain on my side, then on my back and then I couldn’t feel anything.
* * *
“What happened? Where am I?” I awoke with confusion and a terrible head ache.
I tried to sit up but I couldn’t. I looked around only to see that I was in a hospital. Relief swept over my body, at least I knew that Kabuto wasn’t anywhere near here. A doctor was walking by my room when I fell off my bed. Once again everything went dark and I thought “oh boy, here we go again.”
* * *
Once again I awoke with a horrible head ache. I saw that I was still in a hospital but not the same one that I was in before. This one had more machines and the room was much larger. I could sit up this time and I felt a pain in my left arm and discovered that I had about six shots in my arm. A nurse walked in to my room.
“How are you feeling today?” she asked with a concerned look on her face.
“Fine, thanks. Where am I?” I finally asked.
“You’re in the King George Hospital. You were brought here because your injuries were to bad for the community hospital,” as she said this I could see here looking at my arm.
I looked closely at her name tag, and found out that her name was Yuki. As she examined my arm that had all of the shots in it I looked at her closely. She was truly beautiful, she had beautiful blue eyes and lovely green hair. She couldn’t have been any older than seventeen. I wonder if she was a real nurse or just a helper. I started to try to stand.
Yuki looked at me and immediately asked “What are you doing?!” her voice got shaky , “You’re not well enough to walk yet!”
I just ignored her, ripped out the shots on my arm, grabbed my clothes then walked away. She stood at the door way watching me walk away but surprisingly she didn’t try to stop me. I looked back and said, “See you around.” And then proceeded on walking away. She yelled for me to be careful, and for a second I considered that but then realized that if I was careful I’d be dead right now.

Chapter two

I was on my own again. All alone in the cold and dark streets. Not to mention that I have no clue where I am. As I was walking I felt an other presence was near and looking for me. I feared it was Kabuto but even if it was I would have to fight him or die trying.
I turned around and yelled, “Come out now or die!”
The person came out from hiding. I gasped, it was that nurse from the hospital!
“What the hell are you doing here?!” I tried to sound like I wished she wasn’t here but to be honest I was relieved.
“Um….I’m sorry, I was just worried about you. I brought some pills that will help you if you ever needed them.” she said as she casually handed over the pills.
“Thanks, for the concern but I don’t think I’ll be needing these,” I tried to say it as politely as possible because it took guts to come out here, especially the place that I wondered in to.
It looked like she was about to cry and her voice got shaky again, “Will you please just take them? It would make me feel a lot better.” she convinced me to take the pills and after words she went back to the hospital and I started walking again.
It was about an hour since I had spoken to the nurse and I had taken about five of the pills she gave me. Apparently they were pain pills. My body was hurting so bad I thought I would die. But that’s the consequence you have to take while fighting Kabuto. And when I use my extreme fighting skills I get sick for about two days.
* * *
It’s now been a day since I was in the hospital and I’m starting to feel a lot better. I still did not no where I was and the further I went the more dark and dangerous it became. A gust of wind suddenly went by and it was starting to get chilly. A girl, there was a girl sitting down by a garbage can. I stopped, I didn’t know what to do.
“Hello? Are you okay?” I ask.
Silence. She just looked my way and went back to just sitting there.
I asked again, “Are you alright?”
This time she got up and started walking my way. I stepped back about two steps, I wasn’t sure if I should be afraid or not. The whole time she walked toward me she just looked at the ground until she came a few steps away from me. She stared at me for a while. She had red eyes and a scar on her neck, all of a sudden I felt really uncomfortable like I was in danger. Unexpectedly she punched me with great force on my stomach. I was frozen with shock, all I could do was look at her.
In an other attempt to hit me she asked me, “What are you doing here?! This is no place for a person like you. Everyone here is looking for you.”
She started to calm down. While she did so I asked her, “What do you mean?”
“I mean, everyone here knows about the great treasure and what happens when you die. They’ll do anything to kill you.” she explained.
“Where am I anyways?!”
“You are in an unknown place called the Black city anyone who comes here never leaves alive.”
“Then why aren’t you dead?” I was starting to get inpatient with her.
“I had two choices: the first one was to live a life of misery and torture or to help kill everyone that comes in here and look for you and kill you.” she said as she turned away.
“If you are supposed to kill me then why am I still alive?” I asked with curiosity.
“Look, I don’t intend on killing you, I want to help you get out of here so just trust me and stay close,” she said.
Eventually we started walking and trying to find our way out of this place. I found out that her name was Yaeko and that she had no family anymore. I was surprised she was on her own because she was only about fourteen or fifteen. She had great fighting skills, almost as good as mine. I wonder what happened to her family, or how she ended up in a place like this. Most people don’t understand what it’s like to not have a family. But I’m not one of those people, my family got killed when I was nearly two years old. I guess that kind of created a bond between Yaeko and I.
“Hey! What are you doing?! You want to get killed??!!”
Maybe not. All day I was thinking about that nurse, Yuki. I wondered if she made it back alright. I hope she did, from hearing what happened to Yaeko I started worrying more and more. I figured that I would have to stop worrying so much and focus on getting out of this place alive.

to be continued.....
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