Friday, December 29, 2006

This is the first chapter of my story:
Chapter one

“Hannah! Get off the computer and come eat!” yelled the mother of a twelve year-old girl.
“Okay, just a minute! Let me finish watching this AMV!” the young girl replied.
She was watching an AMV (anime music video) about Naruto and Sasuke’s last fight, to determine whether or not Sasuke went to Orochimaru. Hannah was fiddling with her hands trying to do all of the right hand signs for a jutsu from the anime. She fit her hands together, forming the tiger hand sign. While listening to the music from the AMV, she pretended that she was a new genin trying to concentrate all of the chakra threw her whole body. She opened her eyes sharply and concentrated even more, while thinking nothing would happen. A blue glow appeared around her hands without her knowing. She stared at the computer, concentrating even more than before. The glow spread down her chest, still without her knowing anything was going on. The AMV was almost over. She concentrated so hard she thought she would explode. Then with the last seen on the AMV, her whole body lit up. She struggled to obtain the power that she had unleashed but before she knew it, she was in a world of only darkness. She looked around her only to see nothing. She tried to call for help but nothing came out of her mouth. All she could do was plead with silent cries. All of a sudden a bright light appeared. The curious girl put her hand up to her eyes to shield the light and walked forwards. She came into view of a huge waterfall and two stone shinobi staring at each other with their hands forming a hand sign. She looked around, and gasped at the sight upon her. To the right of her was the kyuubi Naruto from the AMV and to the left of her she saw Sasuke transforming into a monster that the cursed seal had chosen for him. Hannah’s eyes widened as she watched the first hand pop out of Sasuke’s shoulder. She stopped thinking about that for a second and looked down wondering what she was standing on. She stared at her reflection for a bit before realizing it was water. She freaked out for a second and lost balance. She fell in to the water but before her whole body was engulfed my the huge body of water she grabbed on to the surface with chakra on her hands. She climbed back on to the surface and concentrated more chakra to her feet so she wouldn’t lose her balance again. She stared in an awe as she watched the second hand come into view. She wasn’t very surprised because she had watched this episode fifty million times before so she knew what was gonna happen. Sasuke looked at Naruto as if he was gonna kill him.
“STOP!! Stop it!!” Hannah spoke up trying to stop the fight knowing that Sasuke would win.
Both of the boys looked at her wondering who she was and where she had come from. Hannah was a little relieved knowing that they had forgotten about each other for at least a little while. The boys ignored her and resumed their fight. Sasuke had created chidori in his hand and at the same moment Naruto had began to form rasengan.
“No! Stop! Nothing good will come of this!! STOP!!” the girl pleaded.
“I can’t stop now!” Naruto exclaimed.
Hannah began to cry recognizing what would happen if they went threw with this. The two boys leaped up into the air and headed towards each other. Hannah’s eyes were so fogy by the tears that were escaping her body that she could hardly see them. Then in an instant a bright glow appeared around her and her whole body changed. She looked as if she was an angel, she was even floating but she didn’t have any wings. It wasn’t the same glow from before, this one was white and she could feel ten times more power than she had before. Suddenly the tears stopped pouring out of her and she looked up. The two boys were almost within grasp of each other. Hannah leaped off of the ground with an impressive force and came into reach of Sasuke. She grabbed Sasuke’s arm and swung him to the opposite side of where he was once facing. She moved quickly out of the way of Naruto’s arm, remembering he still had rasengan. Sasuke had lost the form of the cursed seal and now looked of the old Sasuke. Hannah leaped down to where he had recovered. She stood firmly on the ground. Her eyes could see all of Sasuke’s chakra points and all of his movements. It was as if she had byakugan (sp?). Sasuke went to punch her but he was too slow, she moved behind him and elbowed him powerfully in the middle of his back. Sasuke spit up blood because of the hit. Hannah didn’t stop after that. She hit him over and over again and didn’t stop until he had fallen to the ground, unconscious. She was panting by the time she was done. She looked at her arms and legs and they still had the glow surrounding them. She created a hand sign and locked the power inside of her. She looked back on her arms and legs and gasped. They didn’t have even the tiniest scuff of dirt. She looked behind her too see Naruto staring at the body laying on the ground, and then looked up at the girl who had done the damage.
“W-Who are you?” Naruto asked astonished by her power.
“Uh…,” She didn’t want to tell him her real name so she had to think of something else, “M-my name’s…uh…Akari!”
“Akari?”
Hannah nodded her head. She had remembered that her friend had once called her that.
“Well Akari, should we take him back to konoha?” Naruto asked.
She thought for a second, “No, Kakashi should be here soon. Let’s just wait for him,” she answered with a smile on her face.
“Kakashi-sensei’s coming?”
“Yup! We should probably do something so if Sasuke woke up he couldn’t get away, shouldn’t we?”
“Y-yeah!” Naruto said as his face brightened up.
Naruto took a rope out of his pocket and tied it around Sasuke’s wrists and ankles. Akari looked at Naruto with an awkward expression on her face. She walked up to Sasuke, put her hands between Sasuke’s wrists and the rope and pulled. The rope untangled and fell off.
The girl looked at Naruto again, “Shouldn’t we use something he absolutely can’t get out of?”
Naruto looked annoyed, “Yeah, what ever. But what are we gonna use?”
Akari thought for a moment, and then her face brightened up. She concentrated chakra to her right hand and pulled at the chakra with her left hand creating an unbreakable rope of chakra. Her eyes widened, she didn’t think it would actually work. She shrugged of the shock and tied the rope around Sasuke’s wrists and another one around his ankles.
“That works,” they both said in unison.
As they said that Kakashi appeared out of the trees.
“Who do we have here?” Kakashi asked as he looked at Akari.
“Hey Kakashi-sensei, this is Akari! She beat Sasuke for me,” Naruto said with a smile on his face.
Kakashi looked at the simple girl, “She beat Sasuke?” Kakashi asked knowing how powerful Sasuke was.
“I’m stronger than I look, you know,” Akari said with an annoyed tone in her voice.
“Okay, let’s get going back to Konoha while it’s still bright,” Kakashi said while picking up Sasuke.
All three of them leaped off of the ground and into the forest that Kakashi had come out of. It would be some what of a long trip back to the village. At first there was silence among the three. Eventually the silence was broken by Kakashi.
“So how could such a simple girl, as yourself, defeat Sasuke?” Kakashi still didn’t understand.
“I’m not to sure about that myself either. I just lit up and was able to knock him out,” Akari answered.
“Lit up?”
“Yeah, you should’ve seen it! It was like she was an angel or something! She knocked Sasuke straight to the ground.” Naruto explained.
“An angel…” Kakashi looked at her while whispering to himself, “could she be…?”
Akari jumped in front of Naruto, which made him jump a little, and started jump backwards on the trees.
“Be careful, you could fall real easily like that,” Kakashi warned.
“I’m fine. I can see every branch that I’m stepping on,” Akari said.
“So Naruto-kun, I hear you like Sakura, huh?”
“Wahh! How do you know that?!”
“Hehe, I have my ways. But you know, as long as Sasuke’s around, meaning alive, she won’t like anyone else. Not to burst your bubble or anything but I doubt she’ll ever really like you the way you want her too.”
Naruto looked depressed, “Yeah, I know.”
“But! Someone else does like you.”
“W-what?! Who?”
Akari got so close to Naruto that they were standing on the same branch each jump. She lightly kissed him on the cheek, “Hinata.”
Naruto had fallen off of the branch he was once standing on. Akari giggled to herself at first then starting laughing really hard.
“Someone’s got a crush on are little Naruto,” Kakashi said while looking at Akari.
“Who? Me? No, I don’t like him like that. He’s more of a friend.”
“Then why’d you kiss him?”
“I was just acting like a tease, it didn’t mean anything. Plus, I like someone else.”
“Who might that be? Sasuke-kun?” at this time Naruto caught up to them.
“No, I don’t like Sasuke. He’s too full of himself. I like Hyuuga Neji.”
Naruto’s eyes became wide, “You like Neji?!”
Akari nodded her head, “I know not many people like him, but I do. I kinda feel sorry for him. How his dad died and all. You know, in a way…he was lonely too. Like you, Sasuke, and Gaara were.”
“You even know about Gaara?”
“Of course! I love Gaara he’s so awesome! But…I wish I could’ve known him when he was littler so he could’ve known that someone loved him.”
Kakashi and Naruto stared at Akari with a blank face, “You know that’s how he became something like he did. When he was little no one loved him, they all called him a monster and ran away. He became to believe he existed to only kill and love only himself. It’s sad, why he had to think that, isn’t it?”
Kakashi and Naruto had an understanding look on their faces now, along with a kind of sad look.
“Anyways, enough of that. Kakashi, can I take Sasuke and go ahead?”
“Yeah, sure. We’re almost to Konoha.”
“I know, I can see the village.”
Akari took off and left the two boys to just stare at her in wonder.
“She’s pretty cool person, don’t you think?” Naruto asked Kakashi.
“Yeah, I guess.”
Kakashi stared at her, “Come on let’s go catch up.”
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