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Jushiro the level 90 Blaziken!
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Seikei Murasaki on GAIA
Okay this is the plot that she gave me:
Demons have ruled the world for over 300 years now, and all (insert name here) could do, was try to escape alive. (name) had been taken a prisoner, and was used for work around the house. (name) hated the work, and hated the demons, because the demons had killed both of her parents brutally in front of her. Most of the demons on earth, look like humans, for they hide their wings and horns. Can (name) escape? Or will she be caught, and punished for trying?
Here is my sample:
Kakaru had been held prisoner in the house that she was brought to for over 6 years now. Today was the anniversary of her parents death and sadly her birthday. She was now 16 and all she could think about was how she wanted out. She bent over the tub and turned on the hot and cold water getting it to the right temperature as her long raven black hair dipped into the water. She looked at her reflection. Her violet eyes were duller than normal due to this dreaded day.
“I wonder what it would be like if my parents hadn’t been killed….” Her voice trailed off as she ran steaming hot water for her so called ‘master‘. She walked over the towel cabinet and pulled out a soft terry cloth towel that she had washed today. She slowly set it one the side of the table. Kakaru’s thoughts began to trail back to the day that her parents were killed like they did every waking moment for her. The memories of that day began to flood back into mind. They were as vivid as the day that were created.
~Flash back~
“Mommy! Daddy! Please don’t die…. Please.”, Kakaru cried as she began to run towards them to only be cut off by the horrid demon that had kill her parents. His red eyes glowed as she stared at her. More tears began to well up in her eyes as she turned and ran as fast as she could. She hid under the porch that belonged to her now dead parents.
A couple of hours passed since what had happened and Kakrau came out of hiding and ran to her parents. Stepping in their blood she stopped. Her fear of blood set in she slumped over to her parents and began to shake them as to wake them. “Mom, dad… Please wake up. Please.” She begged when she was suddenly grabbed.
“You’re mother and father are not going to be waking up little girl.” the voice said as she felt consciousness fade from her. When she came to she was in a large almost mansion like house. She was in one of the bed rooms that was so clean and neat that it could be counted as a hospital clean. Kakaru slid out of the queen size bed that she was placed in.
“Where am I?” She whispered as she walked over to the mirror. She jumped at her image. She was neat and clean almost like a doll. Her short raven hair was in a braid and her blood stained clothes were gone. Now she was wearing a light blue night gown that reached to her ankles. She walked to the door and opened it to only find a young man standing there about to open it.
“I am the one who killed your parents.” the man smiled at her and pushed her back into the room and gave her maids outfit.
“You will be working in the house for now on little girl. If you do anything wrong or anything to disturb me. I will punish you in any manner I see fit.” with that he turned to leave then he stopped, “Ohh yes you are to call me Mr. Ashi.” he then left to let everything that he had said to her soak in.
When realization sank in Kakaru began to sob on her bed. She threw the clothes to the other side of the room and she curled up into the fetal position and cried herself to sleep.
~end of flash back~
She stomped her foot and gritted her teeth as tears began to form in her eyes. “I despised this house, everything, and everyone in it.”, she said out loud. There was a creak behind her and she whirled around thinking it was one of the many ’servants’ of the coming up behind her. She only turned to realize it was the master. She stuttered, “I-I’m sorry… I-I finished running your bath, Mr. Ashi.”
10 freaking paragraphs!!! She told me 8, but I didn't check and it ended up being 10. A lot, yes?
Well I am trying to get advance literate so that I can tell what I am in literacy and get in to an RP.
Well that is all that I wanted to post about seeing that I didn't post for 2 days.. -_-... Well I am outta here for now.
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I hope rethguals says is it is advanced Lit so that I can finally RP on Gaia.
