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Thursday, July 8, 2004


   A scene for a scary vampire movie
Acouple of days ago, I had a friend over and we came up with this scene for a scary vampire movie.
Okay, so here goes:

There are two girls sitting in a room. They're having a sleep over type thing. One of the girls is lying on her bed reading from a book of vampire short stories, while the other is lying on a sleeping bag on the floor.
Girl #1 (the one on the bed) reads from the book- "And there she saw a vampire hovering 20ft. in the air, its pale face visible in the window."
Girl #2 throws a pillow at the other girl- "Cut it out! You're creeping me out now!"
Girl #1- Ok, ok. Hey, be right back, I have to go to the bathroom." (She exits out the door.)
Girl #2 sits up and looks around the room. Then quickly she turns her head to look at the window, but she sees nothing. She then turns her head forward and notices a mirrow on the wall. She looks into the mirror and notices that she can see the window through the mirror. She stares at the mirror for awhile, but then it dawns on her that vampires don't have reflections. She then slowly turns to look at the window (which by the way is open, so if anyting did want to get into the room through the window, it could), and there she sees the face of a vampire. Just when she is about to scream, the scene changes to the girl in the bathroom, and the toilet flushes. Girl #1 washes her hands and heads back to the room.
She opens up the door, but doesn't enter the room. (The camera angle is so that it shows her standing in the doorway with the door acting as a wall between her and the vampire. Yes, the vampire is hiding behidn the door. I know that its not a very vampire like move, but it made sense to me and my friend at the time.)
She notices that her friend is gone.
Girl #1- "Hey, where are you? If your hiding your not going to scare me." She looks around the room but stays in the doorway and doesn't enter the room.
Finally she leaves and checks downstairs in the kitchen for her.

Okay, so thats the end of the scene. Now all I need to do is write out the rest of the movie. ^_^

p.s. the vampire hide girl #2 under the bed. its lame i know, but we came up with this scene at 3 in the morning.

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