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Sunday, September 24, 2006


   Question of the century
I've been writing a story (other then the search For Ramen) called "Forever In Spirit"
I'm on the first book in the 5 book series and It’s called "Forever in Spirit; A Debt to be Repaid" It's about a boy and a girl Daisuke and Hakura who around the age of 17. After a tragic accident Daisuke was killed at the hands of the 'silent slayers' (a group of assassins who specialize in silent killing.) Daisuke died trying to protect Hakura (his lover) thinking that the Silent Slayers were after him, when they were actually after Hakura. They had mistaken Hakura for her twin sister Sakura who is wanted for numerous crimes against the government and the dark forces. Once they realize that they’ve made a mistake they try to make up for it but the only thing that Hakura wanted is for Daisuke to come back. They said that they couldn’t bring him back in flesh but they could summon his spirit and place in her body along side hers. Of course Hakura chose this over never being him again. But this still wasn’t enough so the Silent Slayers gave her a task and if she could finish it in her appointed time they would find someone to bring back her love…
So Hakura and her ‘voice of reason’ Daisuke must fulfill a task for the Slayers in order to possibly get Daisuke’s body back…

Would you like to read this is if I posted it?

Here’s an excerpt…
“Come on! There’s got to be a way out of this mess.” Hakura yelled against the wind as her long brown hair flew in the direction of the forceful wind. Her green eyes were glazed over with tears because of the dirt flying in them.
“We can’t stop, just trust me!” Daisuke yelled back as his fiery red hair whipped around with the constant changes in direction. He had his hand wrapped tightly; protectively around Hakura’s wrist. His hazel eyes darting from left to right, looking for a place to hide while he pulled Elizabeth along as they ran for their lives.
“Why are we running?” Hakura yelled against the wind in Daisuke’s direction, “You never run!” Hakura stated as hervoice became very soft; she was remembering when they first met.

well please tell me what you think. and If you don't wanna read about tell me, constructive critism only makes a writer to become stronger.
-Kaori Rae-

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