Sunday, October 30, 2005

   (Some story) i wrote hope ya like...so far i have 3 chapters...
CHAPTER ONE: The Accident


She stood outside her house as she bid farewell to her parents. They were leaving to go on a trip to Egypt for an archeological dig. They were famous for the artifacts they discovered on their explorations and were very busy most of the time, but during their free time off of work, they spent with their fifteen year old daughter Reyna catching up on the things they missed while they were gone.
They lived in an old three story brick colonial house back in the woods with a long, paved, black, driveway that led to a rod iron gate. They were somewhat rich, but they didn’t have time to spend any of it. Reyna watched her parents drive away and waved good-bye watching the car disappear from sight not knowing it would be the last time she’d see them again.
She went back in the house to help out the maids who enjoyed seeing a smile back on her pale and lonesome face. Only two years ago did her older brother die in a tragic accident. He was on his way home to visit when a drunk driver ran a stop sign and hit him head on. He never made it home for his after graduation party his parents were throwing him. When the family found out, they were devastated. Everyone was heartbroken especially Reyna. Reyna and her brother were very close, and it hurt her deeply to find out that he was dead. After the accident she only frowned, but lately she would smile on occasion. No one dared to ask why all of a sudden she started smiling, because if she was smiling and happy again, they did not want to get in the way of what was making her happy once more.
“Miss Reyna, could you come here a second?” one of the maids called out from the living quarters, “The news is on and I think you should see this.”
“Yes?” Reyna asked walking in the room, then froze, staring at the television and that displayed the horrible, disturbing scene before her.
“Earlier today a husband and wife were killed in a hit and run accident. We have only recently discovered their identity. Mr. Joseph Scott Marshall and Mrs. Mary Kathren Elizabeth Marshall were famous archeologists heading to a dig in Egypt…” Reyna muted the TV and ran out of the room. She ran all the way up to the attic and leaned against the windowsill and stared out the window at the rain pouring down. She opened the window and stuck out her hand and let the drops splatter. The attic was silent and serene with an almost eerie feeling, and the thunder only added to it. As the lightening flashed, it cast shadows on the wall and made them seem to dance every time.
“This can’t happen. Not again.” She said as she began to cry, “Why?!!”
“Because it was their time.” a deep voice answered calmly.
“Daiven?” her fragile, ice blue eyes looked up at him with cold tears falling down her pale, delicate cheeks. “Is that you?”
“Yes.” He said as he slowly made his way over to her. His hand moved to her wet cheeks and went through her face. He held his hand up and looked at it amazed.
“I’m a spirit. I can’t touch living things. Pity to leave someone so lonely crying all by herself; not being able to hold them whilst they mourn for the loss of their loved ones.”
“But Daiven, I’m not alone. I have you.” She said wiping her tears away.
“That’s just the thing, I’m not here. Not physically.” He said shaking his head, as he looked into his sisters’ eyes.
“But you are. Even though your dead, your still here with me in spirit. Doesn’t that count?” she asked as she started to cry again and looked away not being able to maintain eye contact for very long.
“My dear, precious, little sister, I wish I could be here again physically. I wish I could see you smile for real, instead of hiding your tears until you get to your room. I see you when you hide, huddled up in a corner crying because I’m not here for you anymore to make you laugh and smile, to tickle you and make funny noises and to poke you. I want you to be happy. I wish I was here again to make that so. It’s my fault.”
“No it’s not your fault Daiven! It’s not your fault that you got hit by that drunk driver the day you were coming to see me. It’s not your fault.” The tears flooded her eyes making her vision blurry. She blinked several times to try to stop them but they came and washed down her face. The thunder roared and could be heard throughout the entire house. The lightening flashed and showed the fear in his eyes as he slowly backed up, and in a panic said. “I have to go.”
“Why? Where are you going?” she asked confused at his sudden change of emotion.
“I can’t stay, but remember I’m always here for you when you need me.” And he slowly faded away, she ran to where he was. “No! You can’t leave me again!” she fell to the ground and cried harder. “Please! I don’t want to be alone again!”
Then there was a knock at the door. She quickly looked up.
“Who is it?”
Through the locked door a maids’ voice called for her to come out.
“Everything is going to be ok. Just give it time.”
“No! No it won’t! Leave me alone!” she yelled and then she heard the maids’ footsteps returning downstairs. She sat in a dark corner of the attic sobbing.
“Why is everyone leaving me? What did I do to deserve such a terrible, cruel fate as to be left all by myself with no one to care for me?”
The thunder roared once more and she looked up as a tear fell. The storm was making her feel disquiet.
“Something doesn’t feel right.” She said to herself, “I can’t place my finger on it, but something feels different. What is it?” she stood up, walked over to the window as a chill ran down her spine and she looked outside. Down on the ground was someone she did not expect to see. She inhaled sharply and whispered… “Is that you?”


so...did ya like it? was it boring? was it too sad...or not sad enough? let me know....oh and there will be more chapters so far ive been workin on chapter three. hopefully i will be able to get em up soon, but only if i have people comment. ^^hehe
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   l33t
does any1 no how 2 write...er um...type l33t?
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   sleepy
ah...tired...so tired...zzzz....huh? oh sorry...hi, how is everyone? i hope youre all doing good. sorry if it takes me forever to gb entries and pms. i might not check my site or update as much as i used to, but i will most certainly try. ^^ promise!
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Tuesday, October 25, 2005

   SURPRISE!!!
im baaacckk!!!! yay!! im so happy. guess what...im back for good now. happy? you should be. i missed you guys. hehehe...no really i did...^^
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Monday, August 15, 2005

   yo
hey everyone, how are yoa'll!!??? ok, sorry. im beinng a little more stupiiid than usual. altho ii still can not use the inteeerneeet at MY ouuse i have found a way!! u dont need all the details, if u do, then screw you!! so...its great to be back here agiin but i wont be here for anotherr lonng time. so i will most deffinetly try my hardest. bye you guys, dont do anything i wouldnt do...which isnt saying much. oh by the way do be a dumbass either...some freakin guyy in my social studies class is a complete jerk. well, c u later. bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Tuesday, July 26, 2005

   im back...god it feels great to be back home...lol.
hey guys. sorry i dont have much to say except im in north carolina right now. ill be going back home tomorrow. i dont know how long ill be able to update, or even when ill be able to update, but for you guys ill most certainly try my hardest. k? well, have a wonderful day. bye ^_^
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Friday, July 8, 2005

   good bye
this might be my last time here for a while. ill try to find ways to keep in touch, but aol is being taken away. its too much to pay for right now. so good bye. ill miss u guys.


sincerly
nikki hilliard
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Thursday, July 7, 2005

   save the earth god dammit!!!
hey. im sure some of u guys have got to be with me on this. we NEED to help save our beloved earth.im sure u guys see construction workers diggin up the earth and tearin up trees.animals live in the trees too. do they fail to see that? bird, SQUIRRELS, umong a lot of other animals. they are continuously rippin the earth to shreads. doin so much damage.do u agree. do u agree we need to do somethin about this?

P.S. i know their is much more than this that is happening. we NEED to do something before this gets worse. we need to bring attention to this.
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Wednesday, July 6, 2005

   this is my favorite one:
My Chemical Romance-
"Helena"
Long ago
Just like the hearse you die to get in again
We are so far from you

Burning on just like a match you strike to incinerate
The lives of everyone you know
And what's the worst you take (worst you take)
from every heart you break (heart you break)
And like the blade you stain (blade you stain)
Well I've been holding on tonight

[Chorus]
What's the worst that I can say?
Things are better if I stay
So long and goodnight
So long and goodnight

Came a time
When every star fall brought you to tears again
We are the very hurt you sold
And what's the worst you take (worst you take)
from every heart you break (heart you break)
And like the blade you stain (blade you stain)
Well I've been holding on tonight

[Chorus]
What's the worst that I can say?
Things are better if I stay
So long and goodnight
So long and goodnight
And if you carry on this way
Things are better if I stay
So long and goodnight
So long and goodnight

Can you hear me?
Are you near me?
Can we pretend to leave and then
We'll meet again
When both our cars collide?

[Chorus]
What's the worst that I can say?
Things are better if I stay
So long and goodnight
So long and goodnight
And if you carry on this way
Things are better if I stay
So long and goodnight
So long and goodnight

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   quiz -which one do u like:
A)my chemical romance
B)good charlotte
C)green day
D)linkin park
E)50 cent
F)simple plan
G)korn

u can pick any of them. one or more.
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