Wednesday, October 13, 2004

my book th last war.
this is chapters 1-2 in my newest story

Chapter 1
Raziel stood at the edge of the cliff, was this the end he though to himself. The war between man and demon was over and only he and 14 others are left of the human race. They had lost the war now the world was run by the demons.
"What will happen to us now?" asked a solder by Raziel.
"I dont know, maby this is just the begining for us." replied Raziel, "maby we still need to shape our stories to finish them." One of the women fell to her knees sobbing.
"Why, how could we lose to them." she asked out loud.
"Ariel, honey its not that, we were out numbered 10 to 1 theres no way we could have won." Raziel replied to Ariel.
"Raziel, sir what will we do now." asked a solder from sector D.
Find shelter, food, protection. We'll need those to survive this new world." Raziel replied. As the others walk away Raziel and Ariel stay and look at the bloodshed battleground were the war was held. They both embrace and Raziel tells here "We'll find a way to live darling I promise." she begins to cry again, "I promise." The group of 15 find camp in a cave were they set up a soft place to sleep for the women. The men were to take gaurd around the cave. What will we do now though Raziel, I have no idea. The world is run the most foul of creatures only us and millions of them he though again, Raziel was a 4th level general of C block he couldnt belive it an entire block, the 8 other solders were from D block and E block, and along with them was the 6 women wich also consisted of his wife Ariel. Raziel walked back inside having another solder take his place he went inside his tent where Ariel already had fallen asleap. Raziel placed his sword by his bed undressed and got in bed next to Ariel and fell asleap.

Chapter 2

The next morning Raziel ordered an extra area to be build so they could make a small town. By the end of the day they were ready to build houses, but there where many times when they had to stop there oporation because of demons cheking out the caves. They didnt want to fight yet they needed fortification first. They would also need weponry; they still had bows, spears, knives, and there swords. There houses would be made out of rock and demon skin wich would prove hard to get. Raziel and two other solders went out and found 2 demons walking by, they where masive the size of two full grown men. Raziel and the solders jumped from the bush and struck there swords in to the demons legs only Raziels sword perced the skin of the demon. In retaliation the Demon swung its tree trunk size arm and slamed one of the solders into a tree craking his skull and the other demon swung the other arm at Raziel but Raziel was to quick he jumped on the demons arm and struck a knive into the demons eyes. The demon lumbered around in agony blood pouring from his now open socetts witch once held his eyes. The solder who had not been hit launched an arow into the second demons mouth. The arow went strait throgh the weaker inside skin and the second demon dropped dead a pool of blood gathering around him. The demon with cut eyes ran at random and fell lodging a sword in his chest also killing him. Raziel and the still living solder solder ignored there open wounds and skined the demons seeing how they where to heavy to carry. They left leaving the dead solders sword loged in his chest it was a sign of a worthy death. Now only 14 they began coating the outer walls of the buildings with the hide and soon enough they where completed. That night the party celebrated the completed work with a fire and dancing. During the dances Raziel saw Ariel head toward there home Raziel followed where he found Ariel in bed. She asked,
"Are you comming in." and Raziel and Ariel stayed in there home untill morning.

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