Monday, January 29, 2007

my fanfic!XDDDDDD
Chapter 1
Jocelyn meets the Akatsuki
It was a dark and stormy night,a few hours after the rest of the Akatsuki had brought Deidara to the Hospital Wing. A young girl named Jocelyn lay woundedin hte forest."Itachi!",yelled the Leader,"Go search the area for anyone who might be trying to ambush us." "yes sir."replied Itacki.
Jocelyn lay there breathing heavily."I can't move...,"she thought weakly,"i'm going to die." As the rain pounded on from the sky, Itachi spotted her under some Oak trees. He walked hesitantly over to her. Jocelyn looked up and saw him peering down at her curiosly."who are you?" she asked. "None of your buisness."he answered.
Deidara was sitting in bed as Kazuku reattached both of his arms."So, how are you going to kill me now?"asked Tobi. "I'll strangle you in a comical fasion using my feet...yeah."said Deidara. "Hmmm. I'm suprised you didn't get killed instead of Sasori." said Hidan. "Well, art IS a bang, but, art lasting for ever is another."replied Deidara," After all, take Sasori no Danna for an example:he was art that would last forever, and he got killed straight off...yeah!"
They all jumped when they heard Itachi's voice. "This little girl was in the woods wounded all by herself."said Itachi with sarcastic sympathy. "who's she?"asked Deidara. "Her name is Jocelyn and she's 16. Also, she was in a fight with 11 shinobi." He replied. "How bad is the wound?" cmae Kabuto's voice. "Fatal if not treated, a deep gash in her back." said Itachi.
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"where am I?" asked Jocelyn. "In the akatsuki cave...yeah."answered Deidara. "Deidara! Is she awake yet?"said the Leader's dangerously soft voice. "Yeah."answered Deidara. "Good."
"Who are you, and why were you in a battle with 11 shinobi where it was inevetible that you would lose?"pondered the Leader. "I'm Jocelyn of the Sound.The 11 tool my little sister,Kiima. I was trying to get her back." She replied. "Unfortunate.Well it seems you have no other choice than to join me, or die and your sister will never be rescued." he threatened. "I'll join." said Jocelyn.
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