myOtaku.com: Shadow Strike

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Birthday
• 1991-02-26
Gender
• Male
Location
• United States
Member Since
• 2007-11-08
Occupation
• Village Idiot (duh!)
Real Name
• Devon (my friends call me Doom)

Personal

Achievements
• I ate 67 bowls of ramen in a row!
Anime Fan Since
• forever
Favorite Anime
• .hack// Legend of the Twilight, Naruto, Gundam Wing, Gin Tama, Inuyasha, Full Metal Alchemist, One Piece, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, Shaman King
Goals
• Be a comedian.(And rule the world! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!)
Hobbies
• practical jokes and making stupid stunt videos and occassionally poetry and experimenting in the shamanic arts(don't ask)
Talents
• I make other people feel smart.(^_^

myOtaku.com: Shadow Strike

Tuesday, February 12, 2008

I'm doing something out of the ordinary for me, so DON'T LAUGH!!!
As it says in my hobbies, I do write some poetry. And I want all my fellow myOtaku users to critique my poetry. (Critique is the biggest word I've used today. I'm so happy!)

Here's a sample:
SHADOW OF ETERNITY
by Shadow Strike

I often wonder who I'll be.
The places I'll go, the people I'll see.
The battles I'd win, and the one's I flee.
Either way, it confuses me.

But none of that matters, now that I'm here.
I talk to my friends, with nothing to fear.
I'll just enjoy life, and not shed a tear.
Until I am struck with one of Death's spears.

But now I think I sound like a fool.
Some people laugh; I think that that's cruel.
I know one person that thinks that I'm cool.
And now I'll go eat our school's awful gruel.

Well? What do you think? I wrote it as I thought of it, so there is a chance it might suck. But I'll leave that up to you.
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