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Sunday, January 23, 2005

   here it is.
well here is my poem. not as good as i expected but eh?

Eternity

Shall I listen to Eternity?
Following it's rules
Using it's stupid tools'
Not listening to faith
Acting like a mother fucking Saint
Begging for Happyness
Given stress and Sadness
Driven by stupid Illusions
Plagued by Fucking Intrusions


Shall I listen to Eternity?
Filled with the lies of Humanity
Losing all my fucking Sanity
Destroying the weak and feeble
Being truly Evil
Wishing for acceptance
Forced to see remnants
Being loved by no one
Being loathed by everyone

Shall I listen to Eternity?
Dancing with the dead
With a fucking severed head
Being lost and confused
Being used and abused
Reaching the limit
Taking my spirit
Willfully giving up my soul
For the ultimate control

Shall i listen to Eternity?
Given the Dark power
Hatred and Sadness will i shower
Returning the fucking favor
That i will truly savor
Darkness will be my essence
Everyone will cower at my presence
Not wanting this fate
Sadly it is already too late...

Shall I listen to Eternity??

By: Alan

well this poem came out way darker than intended. I wanted a sad poem but instead I made an Evil/Dark poem. lol. ok well i need some helpful critique on it. like give me a rating from 1-10. and be truthful ok?
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