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Wednesday, June 16, 2004

Here is a story that I wrote by myself.
Rating:R for action/adventure/some language and violence.

summary:After Kaoru’s parents had died at age 3 she was sent to an orphanage to stay. 7 years later a man adopts Kaoru and treats her like a personal slave and now 7 ˝ years later a man by the name pf Kenshin Himura comes along. Will she fall in love with him or be treated like how her adopter treated her.

Chapter 1: The beginning

3 years Kaoru’s parents had died in a fire trying to save her. They took her to a nearby orphanage since nobody could take care of her. 7 years later a man by the name of Hirohito comes and adopts Kaoru but she thinks that he will treat her right… But Kaoru is in a big surprise of her life.


A hut outside of a near by village. About 13 miles to be

“Now get over there and clean it up!” He says as he slaps Kaoru down to the ground. “Your worthless!” “You can’t do anything right with out me having to beat you down to the ground!”

Hiro walks out of the room. Kaoru struggles as she tries to lift herself off the ground and then she puts he hand on her face where he had slapped her. She still struggles to get up after he had beaten he and quickly got started doing what he told her to do.

“So what happened in there Hiro?” Taku asked, “She is just being a stubborn slut that’s all.” “So are you going into town to get things cus we are running low on things.

“Yeah I have been meaning to go but she just keeps me back with her annoying whining.” Hiro goes in to the hut to tell her to come along with him to the market. Reluctantly she has to accept or else she will get tortured and beaten like the very first time she came into his household.

Kaoru and her master leave the hut and walk down the pebbled road to the market.
Today the Market is busy with people since it’s almost Christmas.

Kaoru and her master come into the village and people start to stare at the both of them. They stared at them since Hiro was a con man and how Kaoru had bruises on her and her swollen cheek.
Meanwhile a man by the name of Kenshin Himura walks onto the bustling crowd of villagers. He walks along the people and they stare at him until someone calls out to him.

“Hey!” Kenshin turns around to see who is calling him. “You talking to me?’ he asked. “Yeah you, come here.” Kenshin walks over the merchant and he asks. ‘What do you want sir?” ‘Didn’t you know that it’s illegal to carry that sword around?” Kenshin takes this sword and show it to him. “This sword protects me and others.” “I took a vow not to ever kill again.” “Well you better keep that promise cause people take swords seriously around here.” “Well thanks for telling me that.”

Kenshin leaves the merchant but then he calls out to him. “Hey!” “I didn’t get your name!” Kenshin walks back over to him and tells him his name. “My name is… Ken… Before he could finish he sees the badly bruised girl Kaoru, but no matter how badly beaten and bruised he still saw the wonderfulness that was inside this girl.

“Hey… Helloooo111” “Is anyone there?” “What are you looking at?” Kenshin snaps back to his self. “Huh?” “Welcome back you dosed off when I wanted to get your name. Kenshin knew that he couldn’t say his full name for they will know that he is the ruthless battousai of the revolution. “Call me Ken for short.’

“Ok, my name is Jo.” “ People call me that because they just do.” ‘Oh yeah if you need for anything don’t be a stranger ok.” After he finishes talking Kenshin isn’t paying any attention to him but he is looking at the wonderful Kaoru.

“Hey!” ‘What are you looking at?” Jo asks. Kenhsin turns around to ask him a question. “Who is that girl over there?” He asks. “You mean Kaoru.” “I feel sorry for that girl.” He sighs. ‘Why?” ‘That girl has be en abused ever since she lived with the man.

“A man?” “Yeah he has been working her for the pass 7 ˝ years and all she has are marks and bruises on her.’ Every week she either has another bruise or something on her.” “If you want to get near her your just asking for trouble.

“I see.” Kenshin walks off to see Kaoru. “Hey Idiot where are you going!?” “I warned youse but you didn’t listen.” He goes back in side the shop where he has a shrine and prays for him. “I hope that he knows what he’s doing.”

Sorry that it had to be soooo long. It was just so good that i couldn't stop writing the 1 chapter. And here's a picture to go with it.



Kawaii! ^_^. By the way I came up with this when i saw this movie. Chapter 2 will be up in a few! Ja!
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