Tuesday, August 9, 2005

   WHYYYYYYY????!!!!!
Sigh... turns out only people in the school area can get the laptop... *cry* ah well.... I HAVE MORE IMPORTANT THINGS THAT I NEED TO WORK OUT!!! i entered myself in the site competition rinoasquall4ever was talking about.... i'm trying to get a picture of a chocobo but it just doesent work.... see??





any how i'm REALLY busy so i cant put the next chapter up today sry ^.^; anyways if you have any tips that u can offer pleses help meeee!!!! okie dokie gotta go!! ttyl!!
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Monday, August 8, 2005

   TAKAKOS GOIN TO JAPAN!! (eventually)
Well Takakos goin to japan after high school i'm getting a $50 laptop and i'm getting FINAL FANTASY XI ONLINE!!!!! could this get any better? well i'm almost done with my book report so yay! ok heres chapter 6!!! its kinda short but enjoy!!! ^.^


Chapter 6

*On that day the Charr found a way around the great wall, a way to bring it down...*

*The charr had preformed a special cerimony that made meoters fall from the sky on the city and kingdom of asclon, the whole city was destroyed within minuets, Sheeva Takako and Aditurru ran every which way dodgeing a few meoters, the trees were on fire the buildings burned, and dead bodies layed every which way. Takako Aditurru and Sheeva all got seperated as a few more meteors fell between them and a burning tree fell down. After 5 minuets the meoters stoped falling and the charr invasion began. The story begins 2 years later...*

Well thats it... i gotta go ttyl!!!!
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Sunday, August 7, 2005

   YAY!!!!!
I"M SO HAPPY I"M GETTING A LAPTOP!!! WOOT WOOT!! Well it may be a year or two old but its only for 50$!!!!! I have said too much... AND ITS IN VIRGINIA!! TAKAKO ADITURRU NOWS YOUR CHANCE!! ahem ok! I'm not gonna be able to buy FFXI until the 16th... T.T thats about it. OH! heres chapter 5 i think... ah well...

Chapter 5

*Sheeva moved back away from the wall....*

Aditurru: Yes thats exactly why hes down here... you ok Sheeva?

Sheeva: I think we should run...

Takako: errr... *Takako hears some noises comeing from the other side of the wall...* I agree!!!! O.O

Aditurru: um yea.... lets go!

*Sheeva and Aditurru run back down the hall, Takako grabs the charr horn from Valid and runs after saying a quick...*

Takako: Thank You!!!

Valid: My plesure... *Disapears*

*Takako Sheeva and Aditurru ran to the end of the hall and stoped for a second an looked around..*

Takako: Are they comeing?

Aditurru: Yea... but their not that fast.. The real problem is if they awaken the nightmares....

Sheeva: NIGHTMARES?!

Aditurru: they rise from the ground in numbers.. their pitch black and are really fast..

Takako and Sheeva: *gulp*

Aditurru: lets hurry...

*Takako Sheeva and Aditurru ran as fast as they could after 30 minuets of running and being very tired.. they reached the entrance to the outside...*

Sheeva: W...we...finnaly...made..it...

Takako: ya...yay!....

Aditurru: g...good...job...we...didnt...wake...the night...mares....

*The three friends walked out into the sunlight and sat down to catch their breaths..*

Takako: its kinda weird tho... why didnt the nightmares show up? i mean theyre soposed to attack all types of liveing things as they pass...

Aditurru: It is rather strange...

Sheeva: yea really strange... (what are they talking about?)

* The 3 friends gave the horn to the soldier who said...*

Soldier: You may return home...

Sheeva Takako and Aditurru: Yay!!

*They were walking back to Asclon as they were talking about family friends and how proud their parents would be....*

Aditurru:We've got a little brother around 11 years old..

Takako: yea! hes a pain in the but some times but we love him all the same cause hes family! ^.^

Aditurru: *mutters* and if he wasn't family i'd probably clobber him....

Takako: i hope our mom will make us some apple pie...

Aditurru: mmmm.... apple pie...

Sheeva: I can't wait to see mr moa!!

Takako and Aditurru: eh?!!??

Sheeva: hes my moa bird! my pet! ^.^ and hes sooo cute!!!!!!!!!

Aditurru: dang girl! thies are really big birds... you could probably ride on em..

Sheeva: yep i can!! ^.^

Takako and Aditurru:.......

Takako: well we really dont have a pet but my lil brother wants one....

*All of a suddeb ther was a loud BOOM and the the city of asclon seemed to be filled with explosions......*

Sheeva Takako and Aditurru: WHAT THE HELL????!!!!

End of Chapter 5

I hope that was a good chapter.. well i gotta go ttyl! ^^
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Saturday, August 6, 2005

   Busy Buys....
Sorry, I can't write another chapter of the story today. My moms home today and has her mind set on cleaning.. O.o Oh well, I'll try and visit all your sites today... well thats about it.. ttyl
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Friday, August 5, 2005

   Happy!!!!
My site is finnaly comeing togeather!!! I've got a FF avitar, wallpaper, and music!!! Yay!!! ok you guys probably want that chapter so here ya go...


Chapter 5

*They had been walking for hours, and Sheeva was more alert than ever, attacking a few bugs on accident and blowing them up thinking they were another monster...*

Aditurru: Gosh calm down...

Takako: yea! You should be aware but not too aware.... ya know what i mean?

Sheeva: emm yea... (not really)

Aditurru: Alright were almost there!!! He's just down this hall!!

*A loong hall was up ahead, and it was covered in candles and a red substance...*

*as they started down the hall.. Sheeva, Aditurru, and Takako stoped...*

Sheeva: Do you guys...

Aditurru: Feel...

Takako: that?

*They all turned to the wall covered in red stuff...*

Aditurru: That looks like blood..

Takako and Sheeva: BLOOD?!

*Aditurru takes a step closer to the wall...*

Aditurru: yes........... We should hurry before they come...

Takako and Sheeva: COME??!!

Sheeva Wimpers: I DONT LIKE DEAD THINGS!!!

Takako: Sis... Do you think...

Aditurru: yea....

Sheeva: WHAT?! think what????!!

Aditurru: Lets hurry...

*Aditurru Takako and Sheeva ran off toward the other end of the hall, Sheeva's breath became short and it felt thst the pressure in the air was getting hevier, TAkako and Adituru seemed to notice as well as they had sped up the pace...*

* Finnaly they came to a large room with a pit in the middle.. and standing there was Valid Blackblood....*

Sheeva: Finnaly...

Aditurru: We have come to....

Valid: I know why you've come.. and i have the proof you need...

* He pulled out a horn that was usually found on a charr..*

Aditurru: so its true....

Takako: We shall report the findings imediatly!!

Valid: yes they have found a way through the catacombs..

Valid: but...

Valid Rest asured that the dead do not like anyone who ventures into the catacombs... they will kill who and what ever disturbes their resting place...

*Sheeva was not paying attention to the conversation, rather to a hall that was next to the hall they came from.. She walked slowly to the hall next door and peaked around the corner... Takako and aditurru were paying no attention to this..*

Sheeva: Hmm... wonder what was causeing all the blood on the wall...

*Sheeva stoped dead, in the hallway next to theirs were bleeding, rotting, dead, shadowdy, dead things.. about 50 of them cramped in the halway.. and they all turned to look at sheeva.....*

Sheeva: uhoh.....

End of Chapter 5

that really happened to me once when i was playing the game... lol i've gotta stop being so curious :P ttyl all
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Thursday, August 4, 2005

   Ok!
Yay i cant wait!! I've deciden to become a white mage so i can heal my friends! and later when i reach lvl 20 i'm gonna become a summoner!!! oooo just like yuna :P ok ok next chapter....Oh did anyone read the chapter down below? Read dat first!!!

Chapter 4

*Sheeva, Aditurru, and Takako entered the cold catacombs, each group took a seprate passage as to their jobs were all a little different, the first thing sheeva noticed was that she had steped on a skull...*

Sheeva: AHHH!!!

*The second thing she noticed was the open coffens on the sides of the wall...*

Sheeva: AHHHHHH!!!

*The third thing she noticed was the gohsts of asclon warriors floating around...*

Sheeva: *screams* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Aditurru: Aww shut it! Its not that scary.....

*Sheeva makes a break for the exit Aditurru grabs her by the colar of her robes and drags her deeper into the cattacombs...*

Aditurru: Don worry sheeva! This is my turf! I'm a necromancer remember? I had to spend hundreds of days down here training i know this place like the back of my hands!

Sheeva: *sniff* I can deal with charr but NOT the undead....*regains herself* So where is this Valid Blackblood guy were soposed to find?

Aditurru: Hes deep in the catacombs but don worry i'll lead the way....

*Aditurru let go of sheevas colar, and they walked for a bit when the friends came to a bridge... they stoped Sheeva gasped, Aditarru looked ready, and Takako started murming a spell as three skeletons looked towards them and ran at them...*

Takako: FIRE BALL!!

*A large ball of fire went smashing into one of the skeletons, destroying it completly..*

Aditturru:I summon thee, come UNDEAD!!!

*Five undead looking things rose from the ground and started attacking the skeletons, one skeleton got by the rest and swung a sword at sheeva, Sheeva tried to dodge it but was unsucessful, as the sword made a deep cut into sheevas arm..*

Sheeva: F...FLARE!!!!

*A stream of fire shot into the skeleton burning it to peacies...Aditurru stomped angriley at the remains yelling...*

Aditturu:THERE HOW DO YOU FEEL WHEN SOMEONE ATTACKES YOU!!???

Takako: Calm down i can take care of this... I studied a few healing spells in my free time...

*Takako walked toward sheeva's bleeding arm put a hand a little over it and murmered something, Sheevas arm felt hot then cool ... When Takako lifted her hand Sheeva saw that her large cut was completly gone...*

Takako: There! ^.^

Aditurru: good job sis!

Takako Ty! Be more careful next time Sheeva ok?

Sheeva:

*Then they walked further into the catacombs as a dark shadow lingered behind them...*

End of Chapter 4

I hope it was good i've gotta hurry up so we can get to the searing!! YAY I"M SO EXCITED ABOUT FINAL FANTASY XI!!!!!
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Wednesday, August 3, 2005

   FINAL FANTASY ONLINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOOT WOOT!!!!!! TOMMOROW MY MOMS GONNA BUY ME FINAL FANTASY XI ONLINE!!!!!!!!!!! BOOYA!!!!! ok since i'm in such a happy mood i'm gonna write more to the story! YAY!!!!


Chapter 3

*Sheeva, Takako, and Aiturru talked for a long time that night. They talked of monsters, spells, gohsts, and Aiturru explained why to never eat her sisters cooking. At this comment Takako set the food on fire with her magic spells blowing it up in the process....*

Aiturru: WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR??!!

Takako: Well you shoudn't have said that about my cooking! Its not that bad!! You only puked once last time i fixed something for you!

Aiturru: Oh yea! A BIG improvement!

*This went on for awhial until they were so tired that they fell asleep...*

Takako: T..tha..that wasn't my ..*yawn*..fault....zzzzzzzzzzzzz....

*The next morning, the three friends got up, ate brefast put out the fire and got ready for battle. All of them weilded staffs, but Aiturru had one soaked in red, and it was smaller.*

*Whith the mission breifing over they struted toward the entrance. When they reached it a gust of wind hit them and shivers went down their spines...*

Aiturru: Now lets kick some ass!!!

End of Chapter 3

hmmm.... i'll be a whitemage.... oo i know a summoner... no mabey a ninja... Oh and takako i'm sure in real life you have great cooking skills! ttyl
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   Which one.....
Ok! I cant decide which one to play... Theres Final Fantasy XI, World of Warcraft, or Dark age of Camelot... I just dont know which one to pick..... anyone know? if you could just write it in my comment box that'd be great! ^.^; And sry i dont feel in a writeing mood today bb for now...
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Tuesday, August 2, 2005

   Chapter 2
Ok! Since my chapters are so short i'm going to try to write one each day. I hope you enjoy them haha their not perfect but i'll do my best! ty for reading ^.^


* Sheeva hurried off to her destination, attached to the pice of paper was a map that showed the coordinates, which Sheeva was stareing at intently!*

*After makeing her way out of the city she found her destination. Lots of trees and green grass surounded her, but far off into the distance she saw an opening in a darkly cramed rock. A shiver went down Sheevas spine as she gazed at it. She looked around to see other people as well all gathering around a soldier in armor holding a piece of paper....*

Soldier: Ahem, you have all been brought forth because we saw you fit for this job...

Sheeva: YAY!

Soldier: And when we have you sorted out into groups i shall begin the mission brefing... Now lets see, group one over here, two over there, three right up here, four in the back and five under the tree.

* Sheeva trotted over to the tree and looked around... There comeing at her were thoes two poeople she saw earlier, who looked just like each other, an elementalist and a necromancer i think, walking toward the tree...*

Sheeva: (Hmmm what were their names again...)

Takako:(To Aiturru) What do you think the mission will be sis?

Aiturru: (To Takako) Meh, who cares just as long as i get to kill stuff i'm happy.

*The both stopped at the tree and looked over at sheeva...*

Takako: Hiya!!! ^.^ I'm Takako!!!

Aiturru: Yo! I'm Aiturru!! : )

Sheeva: Hiyas! I'm Sheeva Monniel!^^

Takako: Another elementalist!! Yay!! Oooo Oooo What element do you think it da best.. to me its fire but....

*Takako was interupted in mid sentence when the soldier said..*

Soldier: Now that you know what groups you are in its time to begin the breifing. Ahem, you all know what were standing by yes? The catacombs reach farther beneath the great wall that protects Asclon from thoes wretched charr. *A few people squinched at hearing this..* So, there are some people who believe that the charr may find a way to go through the catacombs to reach our beloved asclon. No there was only one siteing of a charr wandering around this area...
* At this people gasped and a murmer of talk swept the area..*
Now!!! I want you people to indivestigate the catacombs and search for Valid Blackblood, the catacombs are his home so he should know better than anyone if a charr came through them. Now you should all get some rest, your gonna need your strength for tommorow...

~End of Chapter 2~

I hope it you enjoyed it! ^.^ ttyl!
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Monday, August 1, 2005

   First Chapter
Well today i'm gonna write my first chapter in my story. I hope everyone will enjoy it! ^.^ As a notice dont be alarmed if you dont show up in the first chapter, i was thinking this over the last few days and put everyone in different places in different parts of the story to make it more intresting. Anyways you prably want your first chapter so... Ta Da!

PROLOUGE
*The last day dawned on the kingdom of Asclon. It arrived with no fanfair, no tolling of alarms. Thoes who will remember will speak fondly of the warm morning breeze. Unaware that in a short whial, everything that they ever known will come to an end..*


*Asclon was a perfect place to live, the grass was green, the waters pure, everything perfect, and a giant city in the north east was at the foot of the great wall. This wall was as long and large as you could imagine, and it was the only thing keeping thoes horrible monsters called the Charr away from tatal destruction... and so the story begins with an elementalist named Sheeva as she was recruited to help asclon in the fight against the charr...*

Squire: Now thoes of you standing before me have been recruited to push back the charr in order to keep tis kingdom save.... Now, i shall call up your name and you come come get this paper, written on this paper is the area and group you will be in... That is all... Lest start.... Takako?

*Takako who also looked like an elementalist walked up to the scribe smiled and turned off..*

Scribe:Aiturru!

*Aiturru looked almost just like the first one, except there seemed to be a certain sadness as she took the paper and apeared to be a necromancer..*

Scribe: Kitsune!

*She was red haired, and seemed to be a necromancer with alot of life in her, walked boldly to the front snatched the pice of paper from the scribes hands and scattered off after a quick glance at it...*

Scribe:ahem! alright next is... Sheeva!

*Sheeva steped quickley foward grabed the paper and started off just a ways on the outer rim of the crowd when she read her letter...*

Sheeva:area: 8A group: 5 mission:Eliminate.... *gulp*

*Sheeva turned around to see if anyone else got the word eliminate when she saw the weirdest thing ever....*

Scribe: Rinoa!!

*Rinoa a girl with jet black hair walked fowared, with a weird type of sword swung over her shoulder... it was very weird.. and aperently other people thought so too as everyone had looked up from their paperes to see Rinoa happly take the letter and walk with a bounce in her shoes off into the distance...*

*Sheeva was about to walk off as well when the scribe said...*

Scribe: Before any more of you run off i would like to say a few words of encouragement, you are blessed with good luck to thoes of you who have "guard" written on your papers, and thoes who don't i wish you good luck and, try to reach your destination by nightfall, you dont want any more trouble than your set up for....

END OF CHAPTER 1

So what did ya think? huh? huh? i'll try my best to make the story parfect ^.^ tata
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