Monday, August 1, 2005

   First Chapter
Well today i'm gonna write my first chapter in my story. I hope everyone will enjoy it! ^.^ As a notice dont be alarmed if you dont show up in the first chapter, i was thinking this over the last few days and put everyone in different places in different parts of the story to make it more intresting. Anyways you prably want your first chapter so... Ta Da!

PROLOUGE
*The last day dawned on the kingdom of Asclon. It arrived with no fanfair, no tolling of alarms. Thoes who will remember will speak fondly of the warm morning breeze. Unaware that in a short whial, everything that they ever known will come to an end..*


*Asclon was a perfect place to live, the grass was green, the waters pure, everything perfect, and a giant city in the north east was at the foot of the great wall. This wall was as long and large as you could imagine, and it was the only thing keeping thoes horrible monsters called the Charr away from tatal destruction... and so the story begins with an elementalist named Sheeva as she was recruited to help asclon in the fight against the charr...*

Squire: Now thoes of you standing before me have been recruited to push back the charr in order to keep tis kingdom save.... Now, i shall call up your name and you come come get this paper, written on this paper is the area and group you will be in... That is all... Lest start.... Takako?

*Takako who also looked like an elementalist walked up to the scribe smiled and turned off..*

Scribe:Aiturru!

*Aiturru looked almost just like the first one, except there seemed to be a certain sadness as she took the paper and apeared to be a necromancer..*

Scribe: Kitsune!

*She was red haired, and seemed to be a necromancer with alot of life in her, walked boldly to the front snatched the pice of paper from the scribes hands and scattered off after a quick glance at it...*

Scribe:ahem! alright next is... Sheeva!

*Sheeva steped quickley foward grabed the paper and started off just a ways on the outer rim of the crowd when she read her letter...*

Sheeva:area: 8A group: 5 mission:Eliminate.... *gulp*

*Sheeva turned around to see if anyone else got the word eliminate when she saw the weirdest thing ever....*

Scribe: Rinoa!!

*Rinoa a girl with jet black hair walked fowared, with a weird type of sword swung over her shoulder... it was very weird.. and aperently other people thought so too as everyone had looked up from their paperes to see Rinoa happly take the letter and walk with a bounce in her shoes off into the distance...*

*Sheeva was about to walk off as well when the scribe said...*

Scribe: Before any more of you run off i would like to say a few words of encouragement, you are blessed with good luck to thoes of you who have "guard" written on your papers, and thoes who don't i wish you good luck and, try to reach your destination by nightfall, you dont want any more trouble than your set up for....

END OF CHAPTER 1

So what did ya think? huh? huh? i'll try my best to make the story parfect ^.^ tata
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