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Saturday, April 26, 2008


please read the poem
Yo fellow otakus how are you all doing, well i hope. I have poem i would like for you all to read. i would greatly apperated it if you could answer the questions i left below the poem.

Regretful Dreamer
A girl walks out
on a dream
now dead.
With her head held high,
she never looks back.
But as time passes,
the girl finds herself
watching her dead dream.
A single tesr escapes
as the dream takes
a breath

1. what does it mean?
2.Who do you think im talking about?
3.Whats your take on the poem?How does it make you feel?
4.Is it a Ballad or Lyric?

This poem is important so please respect it. I wrote it for the propose to help a problem. Please having your your opinions in the matter the matter could really help me out. some might wonder why i came to you in poem its because as a writer I simply prefer it this way.

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