Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Chapter 1
This is a Gaara Fanfiction by: Shukaku Luver Oh I will put stuff in like a comment and it’ll say SL: and then I’ll say a comment and you better know who Naruto characters are or you’ll have to imagine them ur self cuz I’m not gonna describe them at all, unless they r otaku people.

Chapter 1
The wind howled as the sand shifted in the village. Peace. The village spoke not once this night; it just slept and waited to wake. Finally, as the sun moved towards the top of the Earth the village woke with loud voices and big smiles. The clouds moved the sand to form a storm. Whirls of sand flew up and drove people back to their homes for a while. Some tried to walk them off and went about getting chores done or opening the shops. After a while the storm soothed into a blow. About everyone galloped outside to start they day, even though they were starting late.
Sweet scents drifted from a small window hooked onto a house that is faded to fit all the other houses. A girl stood in the middle of a small room, dough caked on her face. She had blue eyes and light brown hair that stretched to the middle of her back. A grey apron tied around her waist covering a red tanktop with no sleeves and black shorts. She cleaned her face and got on her shoes and…a ninja headband! (SL: I wonder how good she is…oh wait that’s me!!)
The streets where covered with sand but the wind didn’t pick it up; so the sand slept. She walked up to a building exactly the same as the others but much bigger, “Kazekage Mansion” a plate on the door said. She opened the golden door and walked in. An old woman, saggy and grey, was at a desk infront of some stairs (SL: I have no clue if Kazekage really has a secretary but right now he does so.), “May I help you?” She looked up from her reading and their eyes locked, “I would like to see Kazekage for a mission.”
The old woman sighed, “alright. Head on up,” she pressed a button on a speaker thing (SL: Again, have no clue if they have one.) and spoke into it. A response came back, “it’ll be fine Mrs. Kakuna.” Before Mrs. Kakuna could say anything the girl bolted up the stairs and came to a closed door with a blue door knob. She opened the door and Gaara was sitting at a desk in the middle of the room.
“I’d like a mission by myself,” she said standing in the doorway. He handed her a paper and she read it, she smiled and giggled. “Thanks so much! Thanks!!” She slowly left the mansion and thought, He didn’t look at me. Does that mean he doesn’t care for me? What do I do to get him to notice me? This really sucks. Maybe I can talk to Temari and Kankuro, but then they might tell Gaara which will make it so he might notice me but think I’m totally weird or something. Man this sucks so much! The girl bumped into a girl with blonde hair, “hey Kata. Watch where your going then you might not have to wear a hard hat or knee and elbow pads!” (SL: THE STORY IS STARTING FROM KARA’S POINT OF VIEW NOW!!) “Thanks,” she helped me up and I jumped to my feet, “how’s Gaara?”
“You just saw him didn’t you? I mean you have a mission in your hands.”
“Well, yeah but I didn’t really see him.” I think I started to blush. “Don’t worry,” she said, “I’ll keep your crush on Gaara a secret!” I totally went all red, I knew it. “I…I…um…I don’t know what your…thank you!!” I felt my chest and face burn. Temari kinda laughed and walked away. I felt stupid, I didn’t think I was the only one that liked him but she now knew! I looked around and took a deep breath praying no one heard are conversation. I kept walking.

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