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Sunday, October 31, 2004


Happy Halloween!
Happy Halloween to all and I have good news. I'll be updating the fanart section in about 10 or 20 minutes. And I hope you will all enjoy them. ^^ And I would like to know what you think of this poem I'm doing for a poetry contest. I was nominated for being one of the best poets of 2004 and I made the finalls. So I would like to know a little Feedback before I send it. here it is:

Demons Wrath
As I walk through the grave yard at night
Sadness and loneliness all in my sight
Tears overflowing from the saddened graves
No one here was saved

I look to the night and then to my hands
Stained with the blood of so many
All across theses unforeseen lands
I never left any

I feel the pain inside me rise again
I clench myself tight as I fall to my knees
The demon inside is hard to restrain
Nothing helps, not even a breeze

Why am I like this?
What have I become?
I feel so cold and numb
Why do I even exist?

I can’t take the pain that overwhelms inside me
This demon is about to free
There’s nothing I can do to stop it
Our souls are about to split

I’m sorry for the pain I caused
Everything around just paused
Forgive me for what I have done
The demons wrath has begun.

Please tell me what you think. Thank you and once again Happy Halloween and have fun. ^^

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