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Wednesday, February 9, 2005


   I'M NAKED!! well under my clothes... where did that come from anyway?
Ok… so I started writing my fan fic like thing… not sure if u can call it a fan fic really… buy it’s a story so what ever. I guess I gots to write up character profiles first though so here ya go.

Sita: Obviously me (in my mind only ^.^)… umm she’s a Kitsune Hanyou (half-demon) 18, red hair, looks kinda like my avie but older and less nice. Slightly moody and her moods tend to change quickly. She’s awesome with anything sharp eg swords, daggers, claws. Watch ur back. She’s freakin crazy!!

Crowley: Full Demon. Ok this guy is based on one of my all time fave characters. He’s from a book called Good Omens by Terry Prattchet and Neil Gaiman. Hes English, from hell… always wears sunglasses and dresses in black. He looks twenty or so, very good looking. U have to read the book to understand what he’s about… sorry…

…: Ok even I don’t really know who this person is yet. Umm it’s a guy who “works” with Sita. U’ll see what I mean. Umm anybody have any ideas of who he could be… I got a few ideas but I’m not sure yet. Hes about 20 or so… that’s all I got… and hes dark in personality manner. Kinda moody as well

Ill prolly add more characters as I go… im not sure yet. This is just like my posts… even I don’t know what will happen. It will prolly be hard to comment on the first part but try to leave something. If I don’t get any feedback I’m just going to quit. All I have to say is god only knows where it will end so it should be interesting if I keep going. I guess it depends on how I feel each day…. Any way here’s the first “chapter”
Opens in a darkish dead-end alley way. The kind you see in movies, where it seems like nobody from the street seems to pay attention

Crowley: What the bloody hell do you think your doing you stupid girl?!?!?
Sita: I would think that obvious…(draws sword) now hold still…
Crowley: Whoa…(dodges sword) I don’t think so… you should really consider putting that away before somebody gets hurt
Sita: its not somebody who is going to get hurt (swings sword… misses)… its you who’s going to get hurt…(swings sword again)
Crowley: I think you have me mistaken for somebody else…(flips over Sita’s head)
Sita: (turns) Aren’t you Vash the Stampede?
Crowley: Hell no (lands gracefully) I’m Crowley
Sita: What’s a crowley? (sheiths sword)
Crowley: A demon I suppose…
Sita: (draws dagger)…
Crowley: (looks at dagger) I mean… umm… harmless….ya a crowley’s harmless… (suddenly moves over to Sita and grabs her wrist) And who might you be…
Sita: (angry glare) none of your business (tries to pull arm away)
Crowley: oh but it is my business because you see you tried to kill me. Now. (voice laced with power) Who Are You?
Sita: you think your stupid tricks will work on me? Do you know what I am?
Crowley: I dont care what you are…(takes dagger out of Sita’s hand… holds it up to her neck) Now again… WHO ARE YOU?
Sita: (cringes) a bounty and demon hunter.
Crowley: Now was that so hard? And your name? (moves closer)
Sita: (backs up to the wall. Crowley grins) Sita. (Looks around for a way out)
Crowley: So what is a half demon such as yourself doing in such a risky job? (Moves closer… looks Sita up and down)
Sita: making a living. (angry glare) What’s it too you?
Crowley: I’m sure I could offer you a much more comfortable living (tilts head down slightly and pushes Sita against the wall)
Sita: Oh HELL NO!!(pushes against Crowley)
Crowley: (takes a step back) fine then. Have it your way…. But I’m taking this. (takes sword… steps back from Sita dropping the dagger)
Sita: (runs into wall) Shit. Give that back (swings down to pick up dagger… runs at Crowley)
Crowley: (side steps) Now now… I’m sure we can come to some kind of agreement…
Sita: What do you want?
Crowley: Well for starters… (leers at Sita)
Sita: I repeat HELL NO !!
Crowley: Well… since your not open to negotiations… I propose you work for me. I need an errand girl… I guess… and your powers will come in handy. When you’ve done enough I will be expected to give this back (holds up sword).
Sita: and when you give it back I will be expected to gut you like a fish (takes a step forward and holds up dagger)
Crowley: I suppose (looks Sita up and down again)… Or you might have a change of heart… Till then here’s my card. Take your time deciding. I don’t particularly care either way. I’ll get what I want….(disappears in fire and smoke)
Sita: (Evil grin)And so will I… (coughs) show off…
…: (appears from the dark) So…Did you get it? (places hand on Sita’s shoulder)
Sita: Almost… I will get it (turns around)
…: You give so much, my love. That could have gotten dirty.
Sita: well all according to plan and the like. He’s so stupid. This should be easy…
…: Don’t get to cocky…
Sita: Your one to talk (smirks)…
…: (laughs) and that’s what I love about you…
Sita: Shall we go…
…: Yes. I think so… such a dirty place… And don’t think I didn’t see the way you were looking at him.
Sita: (innocently) I don’t have a clue what your talking about…
…: Of course you don’t…. its in your nature.
Sita: hmmm…( turns to leave)
…: Now don’t start that. (grabs Sita’s arm and turns her around) you know I love you so don’t start that game.
Sita: But I like playing games… especially with you. (smirks)
…: (under his breath) and this is why you don’t get involved with a fox.
Sita: (teasing) You know you love it.
…: hmmm… maybe not (tries to be serious then laughs)
Sita: (laughs) lets go. your wasting time.
…: we cant do anything for a couple of days anyway. Besides we have to get you ready. I know he’s going to try to get you into his bed.
Sita: How big do you think the bed is…( laughs at …’s look) so long as he isn’t in it…(winks) besides id prefer to be in your bed… its comfy.
…: (laughs) you are such a flirt.
Sita and … walk out of the alley and grow silient. The passing people stare at her fox ears and tail. Sita gives the evil eye to anybody who stares to hard.
…: (under his breath) would you quit it. Your drawing attention to us.
Sita: fox ears tend to do that, love (slightly annoyed)
…: u cant just learn to control yourself. If they weren’t twitching so much people would probably think you were going to a con.
Sita: Crowley is near by. I need to be on guard.
…: fine we’ll go the quick way (turns down alley says a few word under his breath… a door appears in the wall. opens door) get in. (looks around suspiciously)
Sita: As you wish…

And that’s the end for now ^.^ hehe don’t u just hate cliff hangers… that’s all I got for now. Boo. Any way. Let me know what you think. If ur slightly confused hopefully it will all straighten out later. If it makes sense… ummm u got serious problems. ^.^ just remember if I don’t get any comments I prolly wont continue and then none of us will know what their trying to get. Besides the sword. Its special you know. Well it might be…^.^ well have to see what happens next time I decide to write. Any way I’m done for the night. So tired… yawn. Oh btw if you got any ideas who … should be comment or pm me cause I really do not know who he is. I was thinking Nuraku for a while but that just doesn’t seem right. It will prolly be someone form Inuyasha cause that’s the only anime I’ve watched for a long time… but if you have any ideas let me know… cause I need them. Lol well ttyl
Sita

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