Wednesday, February 9, 2005

   I'M NAKED!! well under my clothes... where did that come from anyway?
Ok� so I started writing my fan fic like thing� not sure if u can call it a fan fic really� buy it�s a story so what ever. I guess I gots to write up character profiles first though so here ya go.

Sita: Obviously me (in my mind only ^.^)� umm she�s a Kitsune Hanyou (half-demon) 18, red hair, looks kinda like my avie but older and less nice. Slightly moody and her moods tend to change quickly. She�s awesome with anything sharp eg swords, daggers, claws. Watch ur back. She�s freakin crazy!!

Crowley: Full Demon. Ok this guy is based on one of my all time fave characters. He�s from a book called Good Omens by Terry Prattchet and Neil Gaiman. Hes English, from hell� always wears sunglasses and dresses in black. He looks twenty or so, very good looking. U have to read the book to understand what he�s about� sorry�

�: Ok even I don�t really know who this person is yet. Umm it�s a guy who �works� with Sita. U�ll see what I mean. Umm anybody have any ideas of who he could be� I got a few ideas but I�m not sure yet. Hes about 20 or so� that�s all I got� and hes dark in personality manner. Kinda moody as well

Ill prolly add more characters as I go� im not sure yet. This is just like my posts� even I don�t know what will happen. It will prolly be hard to comment on the first part but try to leave something. If I don�t get any feedback I�m just going to quit. All I have to say is god only knows where it will end so it should be interesting if I keep going. I guess it depends on how I feel each day�. Any way here�s the first �chapter�
Opens in a darkish dead-end alley way. The kind you see in movies, where it seems like nobody from the street seems to pay attention

Crowley: What the bloody hell do you think your doing you stupid girl?!?!?
Sita: I would think that obvious�(draws sword) now hold still�
Crowley: Whoa�(dodges sword) I don�t think so� you should really consider putting that away before somebody gets hurt
Sita: its not somebody who is going to get hurt (swings sword� misses)� its you who�s going to get hurt�(swings sword again)
Crowley: I think you have me mistaken for somebody else�(flips over Sita�s head)
Sita: (turns) Aren�t you Vash the Stampede?
Crowley: Hell no (lands gracefully) I�m Crowley
Sita: What�s a crowley? (sheiths sword)
Crowley: A demon I suppose�
Sita: (draws dagger)�
Crowley: (looks at dagger) I mean� umm� harmless�.ya a crowley�s harmless� (suddenly moves over to Sita and grabs her wrist) And who might you be�
Sita: (angry glare) none of your business (tries to pull arm away)
Crowley: oh but it is my business because you see you tried to kill me. Now. (voice laced with power) Who Are You?
Sita: you think your stupid tricks will work on me? Do you know what I am?
Crowley: I dont care what you are�(takes dagger out of Sita�s hand� holds it up to her neck) Now again� WHO ARE YOU?
Sita: (cringes) a bounty and demon hunter.
Crowley: Now was that so hard? And your name? (moves closer)
Sita: (backs up to the wall. Crowley grins) Sita. (Looks around for a way out)
Crowley: So what is a half demon such as yourself doing in such a risky job? (Moves closer� looks Sita up and down)
Sita: making a living. (angry glare) What�s it too you?
Crowley: I�m sure I could offer you a much more comfortable living (tilts head down slightly and pushes Sita against the wall)
Sita: Oh HELL NO!!(pushes against Crowley)
Crowley: (takes a step back) fine then. Have it your way�. But I�m taking this. (takes sword� steps back from Sita dropping the dagger)
Sita: (runs into wall) Shit. Give that back (swings down to pick up dagger� runs at Crowley)
Crowley: (side steps) Now now� I�m sure we can come to some kind of agreement�
Sita: What do you want?
Crowley: Well for starters� (leers at Sita)
Sita: I repeat HELL NO !!
Crowley: Well� since your not open to negotiations� I propose you work for me. I need an errand girl� I guess� and your powers will come in handy. When you�ve done enough I will be expected to give this back (holds up sword).
Sita: and when you give it back I will be expected to gut you like a fish (takes a step forward and holds up dagger)
Crowley: I suppose (looks Sita up and down again)� Or you might have a change of heart� Till then here�s my card. Take your time deciding. I don�t particularly care either way. I�ll get what I want�.(disappears in fire and smoke)
Sita: (Evil grin)And so will I� (coughs) show off�
�: (appears from the dark) So�Did you get it? (places hand on Sita�s shoulder)
Sita: Almost� I will get it (turns around)
�: You give so much, my love. That could have gotten dirty.
Sita: well all according to plan and the like. He�s so stupid. This should be easy�
�: Don�t get to cocky�
Sita: Your one to talk (smirks)�
�: (laughs) and that�s what I love about you�
Sita: Shall we go�
�: Yes. I think so� such a dirty place� And don�t think I didn�t see the way you were looking at him.
Sita: (innocently) I don�t have a clue what your talking about�
�: Of course you don�t�. its in your nature.
Sita: hmmm�( turns to leave)
�: Now don�t start that. (grabs Sita�s arm and turns her around) you know I love you so don�t start that game.
Sita: But I like playing games� especially with you. (smirks)
�: (under his breath) and this is why you don�t get involved with a fox.
Sita: (teasing) You know you love it.
�: hmmm� maybe not (tries to be serious then laughs)
Sita: (laughs) lets go. your wasting time.
�: we cant do anything for a couple of days anyway. Besides we have to get you ready. I know he�s going to try to get you into his bed.
Sita: How big do you think the bed is�( laughs at ��s look) so long as he isn�t in it�(winks) besides id prefer to be in your bed� its comfy.
�: (laughs) you are such a flirt.
Sita and � walk out of the alley and grow silient. The passing people stare at her fox ears and tail. Sita gives the evil eye to anybody who stares to hard.
�: (under his breath) would you quit it. Your drawing attention to us.
Sita: fox ears tend to do that, love (slightly annoyed)
�: u cant just learn to control yourself. If they weren�t twitching so much people would probably think you were going to a con.
Sita: Crowley is near by. I need to be on guard.
�: fine we�ll go the quick way (turns down alley says a few word under his breath� a door appears in the wall. opens door) get in. (looks around suspiciously)
Sita: As you wish�

And that�s the end for now ^.^ hehe don�t u just hate cliff hangers� that�s all I got for now. Boo. Any way. Let me know what you think. If ur slightly confused hopefully it will all straighten out later. If it makes sense� ummm u got serious problems. ^.^ just remember if I don�t get any comments I prolly wont continue and then none of us will know what their trying to get. Besides the sword. Its special you know. Well it might be�^.^ well have to see what happens next time I decide to write. Any way I�m done for the night. So tired� yawn. Oh btw if you got any ideas who � should be comment or pm me cause I really do not know who he is. I was thinking Nuraku for a while but that just doesn�t seem right. It will prolly be someone form Inuyasha cause that�s the only anime I�ve watched for a long time� but if you have any ideas let me know� cause I need them. Lol well ttyl
Sita

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