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Wednesday, October 4, 2006


   Chapter 1: Flame v.s Iner swordsman instead!!! O.O
The next morning, everyone was at the battle ground. Everything was dead silent as Ed and Mustang stood across from eatch other as the wind blew the dust away. Soon Ed breaks the silence, "This asignment is nothing to me. If i win you'll tell me about Marcoh." Ed said to Mustang. The colonel did not replyed but only closed his eyes and let out a smile. Huges then says, "Alchemists get set!" But you soon walk out and interupt Huges. "wait!" you call out. Ed and everyone else gasps and looks at you. Even Mustang who opend his eyes and was looking at you with surprisement. "I'll take Ed's place in the fight!!" you say. "what?" Ed says, "this is my fight!" you do not pay any attention to Ed. "fine." Mustang replys, "it does not matter to me of who fights me because i will win anyway". You let out a grin. "what?! but I was going to fight!" You look at ed and smile. "don't worry Ed. Ill win." You then look back and get in place. "ok then!" Huges calls out. "ALchemists get set!" Soon Huges quickly turns around and runs while screaming,"READY AND FIGHT!!" You quickly look at Huges and back at Mustang. "too slow." the colonel had said as he snaps his fingers causing a streak of flames at you. You quickly put your right arm infront of you as the flames hit you, making an explosion and covering your area with dust. "ha! Its over all ready." the colonel had said. "not yet its not" you say. The colonel looks back and is surprised as he sees you unharmed at all. You lift up your right arm and riped off the bandages that were on fire, showing your automail. "you have an automail arm?!" "thats right.." you say with a smirk. "Because I had done something that most people thought that was the impossible" You soon clap both your hands together and place your hands on your body at the bottom of your neck of where your transmutaion circle is. As you placed your hands on it a blue light glowed as a handle of a sword had came out, you grab the handle and pull out a sword. As soon as you had pulled out the sword the blue glow had vanished. You look at the colonel who looked amazed of what you just done. "Now you see why they call me the: Iner Swordsman Alchemist!!!" You then start to run at the colonel. He starts to snap his fingers making more streaks of flames comming at you but one-by-one you dodge the flames with your sword. But all of a sudden there was an extra flame that you did not see and hits your sword out of your hands, making it fly at the other side of the feild. "shoot" you say under your breath. You then turn around and start to run as the colonel threw fire, right behind you. You then turn around seeing a flame coming right at you you quickly clap your hands before it made an explosion. You coughhed as the dust surounded you. But all of a sudden flames from all around started to hit you, burning your bandages on your other arm and burn some of your skin. You grunt in pain everytime a flame tags you. Ed yells out your name, "Mana!!" but you do not answer as you were too busy trying to block the flames as the dust cleard away. Soon as you were able to see you turn your head seeing Ed runnig your way. "you idiot!" you call out. But Ed still runs to you. Once he makes it to you he goes to your side. "Mana. Let me fight. You don't have to fight in my place. I can take him!" You close your eyes and smile as you get up on your feet. "You can't fight him. Your too small." "WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME?!?" Ed yells at you. Once you open your eyes you see 3 flames coming to you and Ed. You gasp and ran to Ed, putting your hands over him to protect him. As soon as the flames hit you, you loose grip of Ed and start rolling in the ground. You try to stand up but your body was weak. "ha!" the colonel stated to say, "you are too weak! Give up now before you get hurt anyworse." "FORGET THAT!!" you yell out as you get back up. "Im not giving up now. There is nothing that can make me give up!!" You then take off your other bandages off your left arm. As Ed looked up he gasped. "you have 2 automail arms?!" You do not say a word in response. You just stare at the colonel. You then clap your hands and place them on the ground making 2 cannon appear from the ground. You sit on one of them and yell out "FIRE!!!" as both cannons shot out and aimed straight to Mustang. Once they hit near the colonel making an explosion, you see him rolling out of the dust. "ha! who's weak now?!" you then see that his glove on his hand was ripped but you have seen the other and knew he could still make flames. But all of a sudden you see 1 single flame go for your right arm. You try to doge it but can't. It soon cut your right arm in half. You scream in pain while falling off the cannon. You hear Atina call out your name. "MANA!!" You see her running to you. Once she comes near she goes by your side as you still screamed in pain. "Mana!" Ed yells. He is standing up, wacthing you scream in pain with a a worried look upon his face. "why is she screaming like that?! Doesn't it supossed to only hurt her when she puts her arms back in place because of her nerves that are attached?" "yes." Atina starts to answer. "It will hurt when she re-attaches her arms back in place but also, when i built her arms she wanted them in a special way."
FLASH BACK
"hey Atina ." you say in a weak voice. "yes?" Atina responded. "when you build my arms, make sure that if my arm ever gets cut off or anything to attach my nerves so i could feel the pain." "w-what for?" Atina asked in wonderment. "Because to remind me of what horrible things i have done the night before and to make me feel the same pain they have been through"
END OF FLASH BACK
"Before i had built her amrs she wanted me to attach her nerves for she could fell the pain." "what for?" Ed asked in wonder. "For she could feel the same pain they did and to remind herself of the bad horrible things she had did the night before." "whose they and what did she do?" "its none-of your buisness!" you say as you got back up. "its no one's buisness but mine and Atina's. Got that?" Ed and Atina become speachless. You get up to your feet. "Well then" you look up at the colonel. "You seem weak with out your other arm now huh?" "you wish." You smirk and brought out a double bladed sword. You then start to run to the the colonel who started to snap his fingers. "you only have 1 glove left so you'll be too slow for me! You are just.." you start to dodge his flames. "in my.." you came near enouph and kicked him in the face. Making him turn around and roll on the floor. "in my way!!!" you then put your foot on the colnel's chest and pointed your blade at his face as he had his fingers ready to snap and send a flame anytime. But then you two were stoped by General Grand. "Alright. That's enough! You did an excellent fight, you two skilled alchemists." You get off of the colnel as he stood up and solutes as the Gernerl claped and the other alchemists as well. "We are honored by your complent further." "Hmph...speak for yourself" you say. But the Gerneral does not pay attetnion. "but." he continued "do not stop us now. We are not done yet." Gerneral Grand put his hands behind his back. "That may be true but, it would be harder for just the two of you to clean up if i let you go now." "ill help!" Ed called out. You looked at him with a surprise. "veary well then." the General had replied.

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