Monday, March 28, 2005

   THEY...HURT...HER...
ashley, my big sister, has always been saying she is what she is NOT. she has always radiated a confident image. but guess wat, dudez? SHE'S NOT AS CONFIDENT OR CAREAREFREE AS YOU MAY FREAKIN THINK.
she has always had pride for her writing and drawing abilities over everything else. She is always modest about it, saying she sucks at writing, to avoid a big-time flamer-of-art-or-fictions-or-fanfictions will leave her be. Apparently, some retard anonymous didn't give a shit (yeah i swore) either way and got her big time just under an hour ago.
ashley wrote a fanfiction, and titled it, "just go away". she let tyler and i read it over once, and we both liked her style. her character is the main one, and it's about how her characther, kelly, i thin,k her name was-moves to domino, but everyone notices something wrong with her, and it's about her past, as well as everyone else's. we all know it really was a great story, and she happily posted it on ff.net an hour ago, and was waiting since she posted it for somebody to review. eventually, somebody DID, anonymously, and they said these exact words:
"i don't understand why anyone had to *care* about shit when it comes to that stupid fucking mary sue of a character you have. joey has his OWN past to worry about, let alone some stupid bitch's who was on drugs. and SHE INSULTED BAKURA RYOU. how could you be so high to fucking do that? plainly, the story fucking sucked, and as for your character...she's not that special."
I have no idea who it was, since it was anonymous, but it broke ashley's heart. she spent nearly a year writing it, put her heart + soul into it, spent weeks proofreading, was SO proud since everyone she allowed to read it loved it, and that one review shattered it all.
right now....she's sitting in the living room. her hands are shaking, and shockinlee-u can tell she was actually CRYING. i have never seen her cry since i was 5, she was 9, and our great grandma died. she's not talking to anyone. i may argue a lot mw/ her, but i hate 2 c her this way....she's my big sister, people! she promised to stop writing-no more poems, no more songs, no more DRAWING (which had nothing 2 do w/ it, it's because to her, writing and art are the same category), and she's sorry for sucking all the time.
im sure 2 a lot of u she seemed like she wouldn't care, but guess wat?
SHE DOES.
if i knew the loser who destroyed her awesome creation, i'd beat the god-lovin crap outta them!!!
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