Thursday, May 5, 2005

more of my story, give me ur coments I want to know how I can make it good
I was right about the light not being far back but when I came to it I was surprised. Before me stood a statue of a demon, about six feet tall, the detail in it was incredible even in the dim light. The light itself came from a small golden cross deeply embedded into the statues chest. The cross interested me more then the rest, it wasn’t spectacular in any way, other then the fact that it was glowing, but there was something about it like it was giving off more then just light, there was also a power, like someone in authority, or a place of reverence. I decided to try to pry the cross loose. The stone felt smooth on my hand as I reached in and got my fingers as tight as I could on the edge of the cross, it moved a little, not much, but enough to give me hope. I knew with just a little more prying it would come loose. Unfortunately, I couldn’t see that this choice would be disastrous.
It came off suddenly, and I fell over. I felt weird though, as I had taken it off, before I hit the ground, it felt like a bolt of lightning had coursed through my body. In that instance I could have sworn I saw a life flashing before my eyes, not mine, but one ravaged by war and suffering, but I couldn’t make anything of it and even now I don’t remember all the details. I didn’t have time to think however, because out of the now darkness behind me I heard something move, something big. My mind went to the things you can usually find in caves, I ran for the mouth of the cave cross grasped tightly in my hand. All I could hear was the slow deep breath of the creature following me and his heavy footsteps. I stopped outside the mouth of the cave, again I was curios, what was following me? When I saw it I went into shock. Before me stood the same demon as had been portrayed in the statue, but how?

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