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Tuesday, October 11, 2005


   DNAngel rules!
hey! i watched dn angel vol. 1 like 20 times already becuz im nutz -.- ne way im goin to post episode one of my sonic story (every cheers in my mind) lol enjoy!!! ^^

Episode one
Dark Tears From A Dark Boy

(it's midnight. you see nelson thorndyke, leaving his company.)
Worker: Night Mr. Thorndyke!
Nelson: Night.
(as he walks to his car, he hears feet shift. he turns. no ones there. He unlocks his car and hears it again)
Nelson: Who's there!
(A strange voice is heard)
????: Forgive my for thy sin. judgement shall be cast upon you. I hear deaths voice call your name. I'll send you to Purgatory!
(you see the back of nelson & off in the distance you see a shadowy figure and red eyes.)
Nelson: AHH! WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!
????: I am deaths eternal apprentice. i pass judgement FOR him. not that you'll live to care, i am known as Dart.
Nelson: .....I won't die here!
(nelson pushes a button in his car & guards swarm out of his building & surround Dart.)
Dart: (smirks) Are you serious? good guys are so arrogant...
(he moves into a spotlight. His face is covered by a ninja mask, so that all you can see is his red eyes. His purple hair sticks out. He has a black assasian suit with a twin blade on his sides & what looks like a double blade *two blades that can connect to make one* on his back. He moves his left hand in a fist to face to reveal the purple chaos emerald embedded in his fist.)
Nelson: that's a--
Dart: Chaos emerald. i know. since you know what this can do, back down before there are more deaths than just you.
Nelson: you punk! fire!
Dart: fool...
(as soon as they fire their guns, he's gone. The screen turns black *meant to look like an episode on the tv show* & red gashesalong appear along with slicing sounds. he reappears at the light. no one is moving except dart & nelson.)
Nelson: what the....what's this?
Dart: Your end...CHAOS CONTROL!
(dart puts away his two swords. they click in. Marks appear on the guards & blood gusehes out.)
Dart: *smartalacly* oops...look what you made me do...
Nelson:.....
TO BE CONTINUED IN EPISODE ONE PART 2!!!

well, you like ^^. i worked really hard, so plz if you dont like it...just dont comment on it, cuz my self esstem doesnt need to be ANY lower lol. well all catch ya later! byes!
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~Zi-kun~

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