Saturday, May 27, 2006

we have nothing better to do lets play a game
lets see who can be the last person to comment on this post by midnight tomorrow gift in it for the winner. haha enjoy all 5 people who play^^ peace
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Wednesday, May 24, 2006

where is the light?
haha no clue what i am doing just thought some one some where would want to read this but maybe not who knows the world is just a odd place. well i was talking with kitabug -yeah she is the one who i seem to lean my problems on the most and for that i am sorry- and well i started to talk with her and i went into a woundering mood like am i real and all that and well she sorta got mad so i felt bad so i am here to say sorry for that and really i no longer care if i am real or not. haha well i will explane i am a writer and so i live in a world of my own and well when i write i forget i am real so i stop careing and really i could just have no meaning^^ peace and in life we come to road blocks and if you act like me and run from them you get no where so just try and get over them.
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Friday, May 19, 2006

yes it has been some time and for all who do care to read i am sorry.
dang has been some time and now to get you up to speed.1:passed and my classes with a's or b's 2:now takeing collage prep classes so teachers will not hound me about my true potential and all that bull. 4:fell in love 5:got rejected 6:had a girl have a crush on me 7:school is out and my sis's friend comes monday and my uncle sunday. 9:had another girl start flirting with me and another who tryed to ask me out at an amusement park. 10:learning to shoot a b.b. gun 11:starting to work out and get better with girls^^-yeah i am a loser there- and no more numbers this gets annoying. i am writing more and still dream to be a writer. starting to act confident and it is working^^ and much more to much to say so hey lets put it this way the only way my life could get better was if my crush asked me out or even another girl from my school haha well peace and enjoy life it is all you have but it is worth the fight.
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Wednesday, May 10, 2006

part 3 1/2 of my new story plus contest for all to enjoy.
“Hm so let’s see the first victim was a preppy girl and sort of a snob.” I said to myself as I looked at a board I have had up from the first year of high school now covered with notes. “Seems that Sheena might be next she is the same as the first girl. What gets me is the fact that somehow they are near Yuna and me.” I said trying to figure it all out. Just then a knock at the door came so I had to stop and see who it was. As customary for me after school I was wearing a t-shirt and my baggy jeans well I guess this throw off my guest when she saw me. “Um….I am sorry did I get you at a bad time?” said a red face scarlet as she stood at my door stop. “Oh hey scarlet what’s up? Also no this is always what I wear after school.” I said with a laugh while I looked at her outfit a mini skirt and a tank top. “N…nothing really just well I wanted to ask if you read that note?” Scarlet asked as she got redder in the face from me looking at her. “I am sorry I have not yet but I have it right here.” I said pulling it out of my pocket. “Give me that please!!” Scarlet screamed as I pulled my hand back and caught her with my other hand as she fell. “You ok?” I asked opening the note looking down at her. She just hid herself in my chest weeping. After I read the note I knew why she was weeping so I put my other arm around her and let her cry it out of her system. It took longer then I thought she was filled with tears and she keep saying sorry even thought I told her it was ok. After an hour I pushed her back a bit and asked her “Are you sure I mean do not jump to things if you do not know?” She just squeezed out a yes then she leaned up gave me a kiss and ran off. As I looked down I saw another note this time it had a picture of her sticking out. I pocketed the note and walked back to my room.

Yeah I know short but hey remember that contest I said well here it is and it is easy just in your comment try and guess who the killer is winner gets a role in my next story^^. Yeah I know sucky prize but hey it is all part of the game. Part 3 ½ is done part four do out soon. Have fun and happy guessing. Peace

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Saturday, May 6, 2006

ok if you are reading this you have ether a:lost your mind or 2:ate the magic flower of wtheck
haha yeah no idea on that title just sounded odd like me^^ ok so tomorrow i get kitabug69's story to work on. and just my luck i have the love part which i am not good at. well enough of that. haha today i got 3 new dvds 6 new mangas the new shonen jump and a collectors manga of fist of the north star. it is awsonme. haha so also tomorrow a contest is to be held so please tell all you know tomorrow to join it will be fun and easy. so keep an eye out for it^^ peace
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Monday, May 1, 2006

here you go parts one and two sorry did not have time to go back and put in
“Wow I got another one this is three today!” said the girl. Oh sorry I guess I got ahead of myself ok I am Tensai said ten sa. Ok I am a detective or will be in this small town there is no use for them. So I have to work hard and get out of here but that is not the point. “Some one is really admired.” Said the girl’s friend. “Hey what did I tell you?” asked Yuna the only girl or person who talks to me. “If you spend your time in that notebook you will something.” I said. “Don’t go acting cute you know what I say.” Yuna said sitting down next to me. “I know it is just I always will forget myself I no longer am here in this world.” I said closing my notebook. “Hey looks like I can see who my secret admirer is.” The same girl said waving the paper around like a war trophy. “So what?” yelled Yuna. “I guess a thing like love has no meaning to you.” The girl said without even turning around to see her “you can’t even get a loser like notebook there to date you.” In case you where wondering yes that is me notebook is my old nickname.
“Hm...he said to meet him here after clean up. where is he?” the girl said reading over her note for the third time. Just then a man jumped down from the tree holding a knife in his hand. “I am your secret admirer!” the masked man said thrusting the knife into the girl then taking her dead body and tied it to the tree with a note that read this is my first target more will die by my hand Under that the words secret admirer killer in blood red letters. After that he cops came to investigate this was the first time in ten years they ever needed a detective but I was the closest thing to one we had in this small town. “This is odd.” I said looking at the rope.

Haha if you know my writing style you know I have to end with a cliff hanger. I hope you enjoyed and if you want to read more tell me haha this can be the new story on my site. Peace.

“What is that?” asked the cop who over heard me. “The rope, it seems the killer hangs the people after they are dead.” I said examining the rope. “How can you tell?” said the same cop. “Easy the rope would be fully covered in blood not just near the cuts.” I said now standing up. “Oh that makes sense.” The cop said now writing what I just said into a notebook. I had to leave the cop to his self do to the face I had a class so. “There you are.” Yuna said running up to me. “No I am really dead and this is just my sprit here to avenge myself.” I said sarcastically. “Very funny, you know today is an important day.” Yuna said about to burst with excitement. “Maybe for you it is but not for me.” I said still half asleep. So we both walked back to class together as we always did. “Look at the love birds walking into class!” Sheena said. I just walked on and went to my seat but Yuna is never happy with letting things go. “You know what I am tiered of you always saying that.” Yuna said with her anger rising. “What ever you say miss bi**h” Sheena said under her breath. Just then the teacher came in and hushed us all. Half way thru class Sheena screamed. “What is wrong Ms. Sheena?” the teacher asked upset that his lesson was interrupted. “I…..I

Ha-ha well part two is done and please tell me what you think and in case you are wondering I am leaving you in suspense. I want you to want more. Peace


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Sunday, April 30, 2006

secret admirer killer part 3
That was all Sheena got out before the note hit the floor, a letter written in red ink with the words I am your secret admirer. I stood up and said "I will take her to the principal for questioning if you do not mind sir." "That will be fine just go now before I get mad." The teacher said handing me the pass to leave. "Thank you sir." I said as I left. Well we left the class room then Sheena started to cry and through her tears she said "I do not want to die. Please you are the smart one please get him I do not want to die." After that she throw her arms around me crying in my arms she took few steps along with me as we slowly got to the principal office. "I will try as best I can to bust the puzzle wide open but you have to be strong or he will get you to easy." I said wiping her tears away. "Why are you so nice to me even after I make fun of you and Yuna all the time?" Sheena asked trying to stop her tears from flowing. "That is simple if I let anger cloud my eyes I can not see the kindness in people." I said with a smile then went to say "Do not worry you will be safe and if he goes after you do not run stop and think of what you can do." The bell then rung at that moment and I started to go when Sheena said "you are to nice please forgive me for the things I did to you." She then leaned in and gave me a light kiss and went into the principal's office. I turned around and walked away thinking I need to stop him now before he goes to far so after school I must get to work. When I got back in the class room the teacher asked if she was ok because it took us so long to get back. "Yes sir every thing is ok she was just a bit dead in the legs." I said getting my books and getting ready to go home when he asked "Do you have any idea who the killer is?" "I am working on it and do not worry I will get him before he gets any where near you daughter." I said. "Are you sure she is a freshman this year?" the teacher asked with fear rising in his voice. "Ok sir I was thinking it over in your class, yeah sorry about that but, the killer is working his way down from seniors to freshmen and if I can not get him by then I will kill him with my bare hands." I said but to calm his fears I said "I will get him way before then hopefully before he gets Sheena." "Thank you now get home and get to work I give you permission to skip all your classes tomorrow to get that a**hole" He said handing me my notebook. I said thanks and then left knowing he really meant for me to bust him to save Rin his daughter. "there you are you had me worried" a voice came from nowhere said. I looked around to see who it was but saw no one so I walked on when I heard the same voice say "hold on." So I sat there to see who it was and in a few minutes out came a girl blushing holding a note with my name on it, I could tell from her young face she was second year third at most. "Um..yes thhhhis issss for youuuu." The girl said inching the letter to me with her hands shacking. I took the letter from her hand and smiled and said "nothing to be ashamed of miss thank you so much for this." She went all red and covered her face with her hands like they did in the old animes where a girl would be in love with someone and would say things about marriage. "Do you want me to read this now?" I asked still smiling so the girl would not seem so upset. "Um, nooooo please read it later." The girl said then came up and was to scared to say her name whispered in my ear "I am scarlet sorry bye" I looked over and she was gone that fast. "What was that about?" Yuna asked. "I think she ether likes me or she wants to sell lipstick." I said flipping the card over to see lip prints on the paper. "Very funny you have to tell me what it says when you read it." Yuna said laughing. "No prob. And oh sorry come over to my house tonight please." I said. "Um, may I ask why?" Yuna asked shocked and happy that I asked. "If I said my dad wanted to met my girlfriend would you be mad?" I asked laughing. She could tell by my laugh I was joking so she said "make it wife to be and I will be over in no time." I laughed and said ok.

So that is part three yeah I forgot I had this one going hope you enjoy and I will work on this one if I am not working on my other ones. Please enjoy and tell me what you think. peace

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Wednesday, April 26, 2006

two things
one: i am working on part nine of my other story and if you want to read it please post in this comment box and i will send you the site.
two: if -and this is a real question- you have read that story or are planing to, if it was published to a book would you buy it?
thanks for this and really everyone who reads this please give your advice. peace
-even in my dreams i fell her tears flowong-

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Saturday, April 22, 2006

just nothing to say so sorry that i have not updated. well right now it is almost 1 and my sis's bf is soon off to his training. well that is about it peace.
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Wednesday, April 19, 2006

hello
well i have not updated in some time. really nothing to say. yeah my day was going ok but now it seems to get worse. well peace and soul-less i got your pm just today so i missed talking to her. peace
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