Tuesday, December 27, 2005

ok so there is no confusen all post marked entry and a number are for a contest im holding so they are not mine -you can tell because i cant write poems- ok just so everyone knows. peace
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Monday, December 26, 2005

Snowy poem -entry two-
I’m walking through the snow
its all I’ve ever known.
I’m looking for the one I looove
I see her everyday
but she seems so far away
why cant I get there and staaay
her smile makes me happy
her face is so cute
I like her style
and her attitude
why cant I get over this hiiill
and go to her and fiiill
my heart with her happiness
my soul with her smile
my life with her love
and chill with her a while
I'm walking through the snow
its all I’ve ever known
its all I’ll ever be
because it my destiny
but one day I’ll find myself
by her and no one else
finally I’ll be warm
but still walking...... through the snow

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Arabian Prince. -entry one-
You seek a Arabian stallion in a desert,
He is a prince that is unknown to mankind.
Seems almost unreal, this Arabian prince,
The prince is a great fantasy of your mind.

His robes are a lovely bay coat,
His crown is a star upon his face.
His knights are his faithful herd,
His palace is in this desert place.

At night he wanders with his herd,
His eyes glitter under the starlit sky.
This Arabian prince fights a war,
He is trying to win, so he might die.

He battles the winds who try to capture him,
Just for his beauty in grace, but he is free.
As a foal he roamed the desert as he wished,
He is the Arabian prince, and so he will be.

As he rears and snorts loudly,
He warns the sky to flee.
For it doesn't know his power,
And says he will stay free.

His tail swishes his powerful flanks,
His long forelock covers his flaring eyes.
His mane lands on his elegant neck,
The prince has truly come from the skies.

So on the Arabian prince will rule,
Forever in the deserts he will stay.
You may see him in your dreams,
But never will you meet him someday.

ok seeing as this is the first entry no names are given because this is to be judged on context not the writer. more to come just stay and tell the writer what you think. peace

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WRITING CONTEST
cause ive been up from 5 a.m. -darn sun- i cant think of a thing to post so for all the writers out there i want to see what you can do. im going to make a contest write a short story and pm it to me. no matter what you think of it poems or what ever. i want to see it if you want to enter just say so in a comment and tell if you want it on my site to be judged or not. peace soul-bandit
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Saturday, December 24, 2005

MERRY X-MAS
Well the title sums it all up. o and to all the people who are waiting for part 4 -ha yeah all zero of you- i'm sorry to say it will not be out till next year my mom says I need to stop working on it for a bit. Don’t ask why just what she told me. One last bit of advice party now regret it next year
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Friday, December 23, 2005

PARTthree
-slam- *where are we?* I asked picking myself up from the floor. *it is a guild what does it look like?* Ayame asked. *alright what are we doing here?*I asked grabbing my scythe. *just sit down and shut up!* Ayame said. Not wanting to start a fight I sat down and waited. In an hour she came back with two drinks and place one in front of me. *have you heard of the shama stone?* Ayame asked as she shat down. *yeah it’s a kid’s story isn’t it?* I asked. *well yes and no. some people think there is a real one but some don’t and that is why we are here.* Ayame said. *wait you mean to tell me we are here to find some nonexistent stone?* I asked. *no we are here to get the object we need to find the stone.* Ayame said as she looked around the room *and here it is.* after a conversation with an odd looking demon almost human like she came back with a small idol in the shape of a dog with its back arched and fangs showing. * Lets get out of here. I always hate this place.* Ayame said grabbing my arm and pulling me out of my chair. *where are we going now?*I asked running in her shadow. *this is not a good time to be asking questions. Just follow Me.* Ayame said yelling behind her. After about an hour of running we came to an old stone temple. *what are you doing* I asked as Ayame walked to an old platform. *just watch and you will learn.* Ayame said placing the idol on the platform. Just then the grounds rouse up and split in two. *after you* Ayame said. Having no idea what was going on I just went forward she then came in after me holding a flame to light the way. We went on for hours in udder silence. Till suddenly the sound of steal scraping on rock emitted thru the silence. *what was that?* Ayame asked. *a sword scraping on rock what else would it be?* I said. Then a man came out of the shadows screaming you demons return to hell. *you again I thought you died ages ago.* I said grabbing my scythe. *who is that?* Ayame asked *he is the grave robber or that’s what he calls himself.* I replied *he tries to kill demons but is really bad at It.* *you thought you could get away from me?* said the grave robber. * I told you last time old man I let you live don’t waste your life.* I said but was to late he got a sucker punch on me and I fell behind some rocks and busted my head in. Ayame yelled *REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA* but there was no response.

And that is part 3 sorry it took a bit of time to work on it but I had some things I had to do first. Part 4 do out when I finish writing it. Till then peace.

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Thursday, December 22, 2005

new carecter


if given aprovile this will be a new carecter in the story. problem is i dont know how to add her in so if there are any ideas tell me. thank you for the help and i hope you enjoy the story.
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Tuesday, December 20, 2005

test

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PART TWO
*why are you doing this? I don’t need training my style is my own.* I said in udder detest. *o really now then why did I have to come and save you then?* Ayame said in a cocky voice. *you only had to save me because you where watching me and it threw me off guard.* I said with anger in my voice. *ok just calm down I won’t train you I’ll just let you team up with me then. Is that better?* Ayame replied with a voice as sweet as can be just to mock me. *well if you think you are so good then prove it* I said as my anger was rising *ok then*Ayame said*why should I fear you, you should fear me!* she said lifting up her sword *you think your so good well we will see who kills who* I said with such anger in my voice. *shut up and fight you are wasting my time* Ayame said. We charge at each other at full force weapons in hand. We exchange blow for blow for several hours till we where left in a bloody pulp. *are you not going to heal your self* asked Ayame as she healed her self. *I never heal my self*I said lifting up my blood socked body.*I want to remember the pain so I never heal!* *sounds stupid I know but if we forget pain we make the same mistakes* I said as the blood stop flowing out of my wounds. *follow me* Ayame said. Knowing I could not argue I just said ok and went on I never really noticed but she was kind of cute with her long blue hair pulled into a ponytail and her old yojimbo outfit. I would not dare say that too her cause she would probably kill me. After about an hour of walking she finally said where here and she pushed me thru the doors.
And that’s part 2 what do you all think?

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Monday, December 19, 2005

ha yeah as every one saw yesterday i wrote a poem. yes i know it sucked and all that. i will tell you all now i write when an emotion overtakes my body. dont ask why i posted it i just wanted to see if people would read it if it said not to. i will not try to kill myself as some thought. it soprised me didnt think many people cared. peace
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