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Tuesday, February 14, 2006

Well I got hung up on some stuff so this is late but as promised here is part one to the secret admirer killer. Enjoy
"Wow I got another one this is three today!" said the girl. Oh sorry I guess I got ahead of myself ok I am Tensai said ten sa. Ok I am a detective or will be in this small town there is no use for them. So I have to work hard and get out of here but that is not the point. "Some one is really admired." Said the girl's friend. "Hey what did I tell you?" asked Yuna the only girl or person who talks to me. "If you spend your time in that notebook you will something." I said. "Don't go acting cute you know what I say." Yuna said sitting down next to me. "I know it is just I always will forget myself I no longer am here in this world." I said closing my notebook. "Hey looks like I can see who my secret admirer is." The same girl said waving the paper around like a war trophy. "So what?" yelled Yuna. "I guess a thing like love has no meaning to you." The girl said without even turning around to see her "you can't even get a loser like notebook there to date you." In case you where wondering yes that is me notebook is my old nickname.
"Hm...he said to meet him here after clean up. where is he?" the girl said reading over her note for the third time. Just then a man jumped down from the tree holding a knife in his hand. "I am your secret admirer!" the masked man said thrusting the knife into the girl then taking her dead body and tied it to the tree with a note that read this is my first target more will die by my hand Under that the words secret admirer killer in blood red letters. After that he cops came to investigate this was the first time in ten years they ever needed a detective but I was the closest thing to one we had in this small town. "this is odd."I said looking at the rope.

Haha if you know my writing style you know I have to end with a cliff hanger. I hope you enjoyed and if you want to read more tell me haha this can be the new story on my site. Peace.HAPPY V-DAY
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