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• 1990-10-09
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• Male
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• echols county ,ga.
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• 2005-09-17
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• student
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• jordan

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• biggest anime fan in echols county high.
Anime Fan Since
• 1995
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• all i get my hands on
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• eliminate the pain in this world
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• anime
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• trvial knowlige

myOtaku.com: soul-bandit-bebop

Monday, May 1, 2006

here you go parts one and two sorry did not have time to go back and put in
“Wow I got another one this is three today!” said the girl. Oh sorry I guess I got ahead of myself ok I am Tensai said ten sa. Ok I am a detective or will be in this small town there is no use for them. So I have to work hard and get out of here but that is not the point. “Some one is really admired.” Said the girl’s friend. “Hey what did I tell you?” asked Yuna the only girl or person who talks to me. “If you spend your time in that notebook you will something.” I said. “Don’t go acting cute you know what I say.” Yuna said sitting down next to me. “I know it is just I always will forget myself I no longer am here in this world.” I said closing my notebook. “Hey looks like I can see who my secret admirer is.” The same girl said waving the paper around like a war trophy. “So what?” yelled Yuna. “I guess a thing like love has no meaning to you.” The girl said without even turning around to see her “you can’t even get a loser like notebook there to date you.” In case you where wondering yes that is me notebook is my old nickname.
“Hm...he said to meet him here after clean up. where is he?” the girl said reading over her note for the third time. Just then a man jumped down from the tree holding a knife in his hand. “I am your secret admirer!” the masked man said thrusting the knife into the girl then taking her dead body and tied it to the tree with a note that read this is my first target more will die by my hand Under that the words secret admirer killer in blood red letters. After that he cops came to investigate this was the first time in ten years they ever needed a detective but I was the closest thing to one we had in this small town. “This is odd.” I said looking at the rope.

Haha if you know my writing style you know I have to end with a cliff hanger. I hope you enjoyed and if you want to read more tell me haha this can be the new story on my site. Peace.

“What is that?” asked the cop who over heard me. “The rope, it seems the killer hangs the people after they are dead.” I said examining the rope. “How can you tell?” said the same cop. “Easy the rope would be fully covered in blood not just near the cuts.” I said now standing up. “Oh that makes sense.” The cop said now writing what I just said into a notebook. I had to leave the cop to his self do to the face I had a class so. “There you are.” Yuna said running up to me. “No I am really dead and this is just my sprit here to avenge myself.” I said sarcastically. “Very funny, you know today is an important day.” Yuna said about to burst with excitement. “Maybe for you it is but not for me.” I said still half asleep. So we both walked back to class together as we always did. “Look at the love birds walking into class!” Sheena said. I just walked on and went to my seat but Yuna is never happy with letting things go. “You know what I am tiered of you always saying that.” Yuna said with her anger rising. “What ever you say miss bi**h” Sheena said under her breath. Just then the teacher came in and hushed us all. Half way thru class Sheena screamed. “What is wrong Ms. Sheena?” the teacher asked upset that his lesson was interrupted. “I…..I

Ha-ha well part two is done and please tell me what you think and in case you are wondering I am leaving you in suspense. I want you to want more. Peace

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