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Saturday, February 19, 2005
i started a story
*@_@*
alright...here it is,and plese tell me if you like it or not
it's only the prolude so far, the other parts will come later...
TWILIGHT OF THE TREES
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PROLUDE
DARKNESS SUROUNDED THE LITTLE COTAGE. AND NIGHT TIME HAD SET IN ABOUT AN HOUR AGO.
"ARE ALL OF THE ANIMALS IN SIDE?" EIYU ASKED. ANOTHER MAN, TOMAR, NODDED. "WE CAN'T PREPARE ANYMORE THEN WE ALREADY HAVE." ..........."IT'S TIME" HE ADDED. EIYU SAT IN FRONT OF THE COTAGE DOOR AND REATCHED INTO HIS POCKET. HE PULLED OUT A PACK OF CIGARITES AND A LIGHTER. "WHY DO ALL YOU YOUNG FOLKS RUIN YOURSELVES WITH THAT KINDA CRAP?" TOMAR SNEERED, THEN HE SPAT OUT TABACO SPIT INTO A METAL BUCKET. "LOOK WHOS TALKING" EIYU RETORTED, "JUST WAIT TILL ALL YOUR ARTERIES ARE CLOGED BECAUSE OF THAT STUFF". TOMAR LET OUT A SHORT LAUGH AND WAS ABOUT TO SAY SOMETHING WHEN THE WHOLE COTAGE BEGAN TO SHAKE VILONTLY. EIYU JUMPED UP AND STUMBLED TO THE CELLER DOOR, "TOMAR ! LETS GO!!" HE TRIED TO YELL OVER ALL THE SHAKING, BUT HIS VOICE GOT LOST. HE SAW THAT TOMAR WAS LOOJING OUT OF THE WINDOW WITH AN ODD EXPRISON ON HIS FACE. "TOMARRRR!!!!!!!!" EIYU TRIED AGAIN BUT MUTCH TO HIS HIS SURPRISE TOMAR DASHED OUT THE FRONT DOOR."TTOOMMAARR!!!!!!!" THE HOUSE SPLIT IN TWO. EIYU WAS THRUST DOWN THE CONCRET STEPS OF THE CELLER BY A GREAT BLAST OF WIND, HIS HEAD MUST HAVE HIT EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THE 20 STEPS AS HE FELL . BUT JUST BEFOR HE HIT THE BOTTOM HE SOME HOW GOT ENOUGH FOOTING TO DASH BACK UP THE STEPS, FIGHTING THE WIND ALL THE WAY. "EIYU!!!" EIYU LOOKED AROUND FRANTICLY, WAS THAT TOMAR CALLING HIM? THINGS WERE BECOMING VERY BLURRY. EIYU COULD TELL HE WAS ABOUT TO BLACK OUT IN A MATTER OF SECONDS. "TOMA" -FWAMP!! HE FELL TO THE GROUND JUST AS THE WIND BLEW AWAY THE REST OF HIS WORDS...................................................
so was it good, bad, or ugly?
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