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Hello my friends,how are you today. im good nothin to much has happend lately. oh and here is the story i promised you the other day, i wish to one day make it into a manga, ive been working super hard on it also but i think i already told you that, i hope you all like it.
im not as talented as some of my other friends are so please bare with me, oh and remeber any coment,suggestions and questions are more than welcome



*Setting: an old dark warehouse* *theres a loud crash* *the smoke clears and we see our first main character Kanji* he has some cuts and he is breathing heavily.Kanji stands an talks to his enemy. which happens to be a very small demon,
"heh, you call that an attack, i barely felt that." kanji said
Kanji Thinking: "well that was a lie, he may be small but he sure packs a punch, i think i underestimated him alittle *an image of the small demon and kanji in chibi form laughing at the smal creature appear* " ok maybe alot" *end of thought process*
Suddenly the demon takes off at lightning speed, kanji notices and gets angry *anime style*
"Hey-Hey-Hey get back here you little cur im not done with you yet" Kanji said as he pursued the demon
Kanji thinking:"i cant let him escape thers no telling how much damage hell do" *end of thought process.
Kanji was hot on the demons trail but was slowly sliiping behind. he tried to fire a blast but missed because he was to far away. Kanji noticed a group of kids walking home from school two girls and a guy.
"its now or never" kanji said as he raced towards the boy but as son as he was about to take over his body. the boy turned a corner and Kanji accidently collided with one of the girls. the girls stop and the one girl begins to pulse, the pulsing slows and comes to a stop.The girl opens her eyes for a min she has no pupils but they come back a second later. Kanji now has full control. Kanji runs after the demon leaving the other girl behind. Kanji catches up with the demon.
"PREPARE TO DIE" kanji shouted as he fired a blast killing the small demon. But the problem was that wasnt his voice it was the girls voice
"oh yeah, that sounded real manly* Kanji said to himself. he heard the sound of running footsteps and decides now is his time to take his leave.
"well its been a real blast but i gotta go thanx for the rental" kanji said to the girls body he was currnetly in.He closes his eyes and opens them to find nothing has happend.so he trys again and again and again.... still nothing has happend.
Kanji Thinking:"Oh no...it cant be...im..im Stuck..No this can't be happening AHHHHH who knows how long ill be this way, it could takes days,weeks,months, or even dare i say it...Years. Damn it,Damn it, Damn it, i might never have my dahingly good looks again.*end of thought process* *while he was thinking all this he was flipping out anime style* As the other girl who Kanji so rudely left behind approaches she finds her friend in a slump on the road
*doom/misery background behind her*
*a sweatdrop appears on the other girl*
"ummm are you ok" she said
Kanji looks up, he smiles and blushes
Kanji thinking: "hey that girl is hot, and if im not mistaken thats this chick's friend,i could get used to this after all" *end of thought process*
"huh, oh yeah im fine" kanji said standing up
"good" the other girl slapped her friend in the back of the head.
"whats the big idea just leaving me like that huh?" she said
"ohhh..that well ummm...uhh"
Kanji thinking:" what do i do, i cant just tell her the truth"
*end of thought process*
"i was just running after this really cute guy,but you see he dumped me like a sack of rocks *nervous laugh* well its been nice talking to you but now i gotta go bye" kanji says as he runs off *puff of smoke behind him* A few seconds later hes back
"umm, wheres my house" he said to the other girl who points in the opposite direction.
"k, thanks bye" kanji runs off again.
*change of scene*
*setting: a really pretty white house*
"where am i, what happend" said a guys voice. then a scream is heard. Kanji's real body is looking into a mirror screaming, because Now the girl whos body Kanji has taken over is now in his body.


ok thats the first chapter what did you think, did you like it, any comments,question, or suggestions are more than welcome. its still a rough draft but i think its really good so far,wel Gotta go,Love ya though!! ^.^

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