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Tuesday, January 20, 2004
"___?___"
I look to the sky,
And call out your name.
Hoping that after all these days,
Our feelings for each other stay the same.
Expressing my feelings to you,
I needed to be brave.
But our friendship,
I want to cherish and save
I worry too much,
Thinking of you more than I should.
I wish I could be able to ask one more thing,
But that’s only if I *could*
Yes … there is still one thing left,
One more question of hope.
‘Till then I’ll be holding on,
At the end of the rope.
How long will this relation last?
What will be left when this ends?
I don’t care how far we are!
Just as long as we’re still friends.
You say I’m great poet,
This is how I express how I feel.
But I’m telling you the truth,
These feelings are for real!
I challenge myself,
To last days without you.
How long can I last?
What must I do?
You have been a distraction.
You are a bother in my awaken dreams.
My feelings have no clue in what to do.
They become deeper than they may seem.
Even though this may sound truly serious.
I’ve not shed a single tear.
But if things continue to go wrong,
Then I can’t help but to be in fear.
I cannot help,
But to feel a bit insane.
Thinking that if this might end,
There is soon to be pain.
I tell myself:
I can’t live in the wonders of my past.
I have to stay in the present.
And not be left last.
I no longer want to feel these feelings.
From this world my mind cannot be gone.
If you wish so…
Then I will move on.
I cannot and must not say that I love you.
But I can say this:
When the time comes-
You will be missed.
hey pplz...luvly poem, right? well as u can see i don't seem to have a title for it. so i was wondering if u guys can give me some suggestions, that's what i'll be looking for...and don't forget to let me know what u think about it! and please be 110% honest with me! i was watching inyasha, and i had this line in my head and i couldn't let myself forget it so i took a notebook and wrote a few stanzas and then i realized i was writing a bit more than i thought. and then i had a feeling that i had more to put in it so i brought it to school and worked on it during my office assistant period. so u can probably guess that i did a lot of thinking on it. well, thanx!
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