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Saturday, May 29, 2004
so far on my poem....
Well this is all i have so far on that poem i wanted to do for Memorial Day. If u get the chance, plz let me know what u think about it. tell me what's good/bad...and what i can add to it. I haven't finished it yet tho..so yea..still a lot of work left. TTYL Pplz!
In memory of the battles,
That have been fought from time to time.
Flashbacks of the past-
Playing constantly like an endless rhyme.
Dreaming of a happiness,
That hopefully will never end.
Waiting for time to pass by,
Just so the scars can mend.
No one can forget-
That morning of 9-11,
We gave them our prayers-
To help guide them to heaven.
At the moment,
Nothing else would matter...
All we could do was cry,
And millions of hearts were left to shatter
Later on,
A war was left to start-
Leaving hearts broken,
And tearing families apart.
I remember the day-
When Mr. B. left for the war,
And I was left wondering-
what all of this was for.
I thought the tears would be endless-
Just wishing for things to stop.
The pain left me to think of one thing-
Who will catch my tears before they drop?
Overwhelmed by sadness,
Knowing that we won't easily forget-
This scar in our time...
Wondering if there's anything to regret.
On the year of 2004,
We will be in deep thoughts this Memorial Day-
We won't be thinking about the pain,
But we'll live on knowing things will be okay.
Many souls were taken-
As so many others cried.
But just because they're gone-
It doesn't mean you should let your pain hide.
I'd very much appriciate it if u guys gave me ur input on it. well...that's all i can think of for now...i'm in a rush...so yea...bye! ^_^
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