Friday, January 6, 2006

Here is a story.
I don't remember if I posted this one but here you go!(And I didn't make this one!)


Title: Angel (girls only) A dnangel story 1
Rating: Teen | Avg Vote: 4.63 | Type: story
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Hi everyone i think quizilla might be broken right now or my computer has been bust. this is talking " this is thinking * this is action - and this is me talking (words)
Hello donw here I'll give you your description. Look: long hair a little below your waist, color blackish blue. Eye color... Ummm... Ummm... brown eyes. Can't think. Okay this is now your point of veiw but once i say something else it'll be "you" instead of "I or me". Okay lets began. "Hi I'm Kameko Yoshida. I'm just your everyday 13 girl turning 14. Well for me it's normal everyday from home I either have to get through a securied hallway whenever I come home. I've been doing ever since I was three. Harsh isn't. My pet Marron is a rabbit looking thing. Her fur is curly at the tail and ear. Her paws, tail, and ears are dipped with brown." okay now I'm going to said you and stuff like a normal quiz. Begin~ As you walked into your home from getting your school supplies the floor disappeared and you grabbed the edge. "Why can't i ever come home like normal people?" you ask yourself as you flipped forward to land back from where you were. "Okay I can do this," you told yourself walking backwards and tehn ran forward and landed on the other side. "Now, let's see. First fake secon and fourth fake and last fake is the last one," you said getting through the lasers. When you finished getting away from the dogs that happen to chase you. You took off your shoe and touched the doorknob. "She electrified it," you said to yourself. "Mom?" "honey you did great. I'm so proud of you," said your mother. "Mom please let go of me," you said. When your mother let go your grandfather said, "Today is your fourth birthday and... Kameko where are you going?" "To my room. I'm not fond of these days," you said walking up the stairs. You reached your room and went in and shut the door. You then felt something pulling your skirt. "Hey, Marron. Have fun while I was gone?" you sak. "Myuu," is all Marron said. "I guess that expected. All you can say is Myuu," you said. (dosesn't this sound like Daisuke's day in volume one? I couldn't think of anything so i use "some" of these things from the book.) You then picked up a picture of you best friend. "Taku, I sure miss you," you whispered as you looked at the piture. You then feel something strange and a voice echoed in your mind. "Who loves you?" "I love you." "You love who?" "Taku," you whisper then you felt this strange pain. *What's happening? Is... Is there sopmething in me?* you ask as your mind flashed pictures of Taku. "Taku," you whisper. You then walked to the mirror and yelled, "MOM WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?!?!?!?!" "Oh dear you changed. It happened to me too," said your mother. "It happened to you?" you ask. "Yes, everyone from my side of the family that is a girl changes every time they become fourteen," she said. "Grandpa is that true? -grandpa nods- Then how do I change back?" you ask looking at your mother. "You just have to steal things," said your mother. "Then I won't ever see this again right? Right?" you ask. "Sorry dear not until you find the right one," said your mother. "I see. Then how do I change into the "form" ?" you ask. "Everytime you think about someone you love or care about deeply. Not family. A guy," said your mother. "Breaking news. Angel has finally come back and is now going to steal the Celesical Jewel tonight at 11:30," annouce the news guy. "Angel?" "Yes, you're Angel. The great theif that steals during the day and night," said your mother. "11:30 that's about ten minutes from now," you said. "Oh and if you want wings touch Marron on the head," she said. When you did Marron changed and by the time you left it was 11:40. *Mom. Making such a fuss about this,* you said to yourself as you flew. "Look at the moon... Wings," said guy #1. "Is it Dark?" ask guy #2. "Hey it disappeared," said guy #1. " -blew feather out of mouth- Thanks Marron," you said. "Myuu." "Okay Marron, try your best to follow, only come out when i need you," you said. "Myuu." is all she said before running off. (your wingscolor is, one black and one white.) "There's no way Angel is going to get through," said Inspector Saehara. "That's the same thing you did with Dark. I'm sure Angel will get through easily," said Satoshi. (you didn't hear this.)You began getting through the lasers and turned off the lights. "Is it a black out?" ask #1 gaurd. "I don't know," said #2 guard. "The lights are back," said #1 guard. "But the Celesical Jewel is gone," said #3 guard. Satoshi was no where there. You began walking away in a uniform you took with the jewel. "You what are you doing?" ask insector Saehara. "-anime sweatdrop- I'm insecting this area insector Saehara," you said saulting. "Good idea," he said walking the other way. "-let's out a deep breathe- that was too close. Now off with the uniform," you said after walking into this almost empty room. You then heard the door open. You turned and saw Satoshi. *Satoshi, he's the guy from the news two days ago,* you thought. "What..." you never got to finish your sentence, you were on the ground with him on top of you. "Get the hell off me," you snarled trying to get free. "I though I just needed to worry about Dark but now you," said Satoshi. "Marron!!!" you yell. "What two Angel?" ask Satoshi. "Now guess..." "Which one..." "Is the real..." "One," you said. (did i forget Marron knows how to speak but not clearly.) "Commender," said a guard. "She got away." "I know that. We'll meet again, Angel," said Satoshi. ~At your house~ "You did it Honey. Great job," said your mother. "Aren't i suppose to change back?' you ask. "You see... Uh um," your mother didn't know what to say. "Just try your best to think about the last guy you saw when you were there," said your grandpa. *I must think about... Satoshi,* you think. You then feel a similar pain but wasn't as hurtful as before. "You did it honey," said your mother. "So tell me who did you see and think about last? Honey come back." "I'm going to bed. I have school tomorrow," you said slamming your door. You took a shower, changed, brushed your hair and teeth and went to bed. "G'night Marron," you said as you fell onto the bed. "Myuu," was all she said before cuddleing next to you... RATE AND MESSAGE PLEASE. OKAY BYE!!!
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