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Friday, November 17, 2006


   Hey all!
Thanks to all that commented and pm me yesterday! I feel much better today! ^_^ Love you all!
ok so I kno how much u all hate me for postponing the story but geometry threw a project on me that past week so I didn't get the chance to make sumthin up. so dont blame me. blame geometry!! WOOO!! GEOMETRY MUST DIE!!! ok. well. other note is! I HAVE A WEEK OFF OF SKL!!! WOOOOOO!!!
now that thats out of the way. Here is the newest entry of Fire and Ice. O and if ya'll want to pm me go ahead but DONT FORGET TO COMMENT!!!!

Fire and Ice (part 3)

I led him to the park that was only a few blocks away from my house. At the park, there was a playground. It had a small slide, monkey bars, and a pair of swings. The rest of the park contained a few picnic tables and benches. I continued walking across the grass towards a clump of pine trees. I looked at Riven’s face and almost smiled again when I saw his puzzled look.
“Almost there,” I reassured him. He seemed to relax a little when I said that.
We came upon a clearing in the midst of a forest made up of many evergreen trees. It was a small clearing that harbored a small area of (flower name). I looked at Riven and began laughing at his awed expression.
“What’s so funny?” he asked.
“I never saw anyone with such a cute expression like that.”
“Cute?” he smirked a little.
I nodded. “You looked cute when you saw this place.”
He moved closer to me and smiled, “Thank you. Now I’ll return the compliment and say that you looked cute when you laughed.”
I blushed at this.
“Me? You’re lying,” I frowned.
“You are.”
I looked away and towards the flowers. I walked forwards and kneeled down in front of the flower patch.
“Do you want to know why I brought you here?” I asked.
“Why did you?”
“You were the first person to ask about my brother. This place is mine and his. He told me never to tell anyone about this place except for the one person that cares about me. I never had a friend before, and I always wanted to bring someone here after Vincent died.”
He knelt next to me, “Thanks for bringing me here, Talin. And thanks for considering me as a friend.”
I looked at him. He reminded me so much of Vincent. It hurt to think about that. Before I knew it, my face felt wet. Tears had fallen. Riven looked at me sympathetically as he brought his hand up to my face and wiped the tears away.
Shakily, I spoke, “You remind me of him.”
He smiled at me again. I don’t know why but the next thing I knew, I lunged towards him, wrapping my arms around his waist and burying my face in his shirt. We both fell over, me lying on top of him. I started to cry. I felt his hand on my head and his arm around my waist. It felt strange to be in that position. I only knew Riven for a day, but I already felt so close to him. My crying eventually turned into soft sobs which became silent as I fell into the darkness of sleep. I don’t know why I did, but all I know is that I felt so comfortable in his arms.
~***~
Talin led me down the street and into the park. It was deserted. Nothing but some swings, a slide, monkey bars, picnic tables, and benches were seen. She kept walking towards a forest of evergreens. I was puzzled by this.
“Almost there,” I heard her say.
We passed through the thicket of trees and emerged into the clearing. The first thing that I saw and what completely awed me was a patch of beautiful flowers. They weren’t wild I would tell. Someone must have come here frequently to tend to them.
All of a sudden, I heard laughter. I looked at Talin quizzically. “What’s so funny?”
“I never saw anyone with such a cute expression like that.”
“Cute?” I asked, feeling a slight blush creep onto my cheeks.
She nodded. “You looked so cute when you saw this place.”
I inched closer to her and said, “Thank you. Now I’ll return the compliment and say that you looked cute when you laughed.”
She blushed, “Me? You’re lying.” She frowned.
“You are.”
She looked away and walked towards the flowers. She kneeled down in front of the patch.
“Do you want to know why I brought you here?” she asked.
“Why did you?”
“You were the first person to ask about my brother. This place is mine and his. He told me never to tell anyone about this place except for the one person that cares about me. I never had a friend before, and I always wanted to bring someone here after Vincent died.”
Without thinking, I knelt beside her and said, “Thanks for bringing me here, Talin. And thanks for considering me as a friend.”
She looked at me, seemingly deep in thought. Her fiery eyes welled up with tears and spilled onto her face. I looked at her sympathetically as I wiped the tears from her face.
“You remind me of him,” She said shakily.
I smiled at her. The next thing I knew, Talin had thrown herself towards me and wrapped her arms around my torso. She buried her face into my shirt and I felt the wetness of her tears being soaked into my shirt. I fell backwards onto the ground, lying on my back while she was lying on top of me. She started to cry harder, and by instinct I wrapped an arm around her waist and placed on other hand behind her head. Her crying eventually turned into sobs, and soon the sobs ceased, replaced by her soft breathing. Her breathing told me she was asleep.
I looked at her. I smiled, seeing her curled up, resting her head on my chest. I didn’t want to wake her, so I stayed that way for a long time. This position was uncomfortable. Actually, I felt really relaxed. Talin shifted herself so she was on one side of me and snuggled herself between one of my arms and my waist. I still kept my arm around her waist and my hand behind her head. I looked up at the sky and watched the clouds pass by. Soon, I was beginning to doze off. I closed my eyes for only a moment, but they never reopened as I fell asleep.

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