Tuesday, February 3, 2004

   Sindalla's Ending
This is the contest winning entry i wrote for Sindalla. It's longer than the original entry, about as long as the first episode of the Key to Eden. Anyway, i hope you guys like it.

-"Who's there?" Sindalla said, trembling as she watched the curtains move inward as if someone had entered the room through the window. Suddenly, a dark figure stood over her. The figure was draped in dark robes and chains hung from his hands and feet. The figure frightened Sindalla, so much that she tried to call out to Kain. But the fear muffled her voice to a small murmur. The figure moved closer. "Who are you?" Sindalla said meekly. "What do you want from me?" The figure moved away and shed his robes. Sindalla was shocked at what she saw. "Raziel?"

"It is me, the ghost of Raziel," it said. "My love," Sindalla said teary eyed, "what are you doing here? Why are you in chains." "This is my punishment," he replied. "Your punishment?" Sindalla said confused. "But why? You were a good man." "No, I wasn't," Raziel said sadly. "I was an evil man, to everyone.....to you." "Raziel..." she said depressed.

"Do you remeber our 1st anniversary?" Raziel said. "And how I missed it because I was pillaging a nearby village? And when I hit you when you asked where I was?" "Yes... I do remember," she answered. "That was one of the many times I hurt you," Raziel explained. "My punishment is to undo every wrong I've have committed to the human race. You are the first on my list." "What do you want me to do?" Sindalla asked.

"Do you remember my friend, Terra Zero?" he asked. "Yes," she answered. "He was there to comfort me when ever I hurt." "Whenever I hurt you," Raziel responded. "Terra Zero always tried to make me treat you better. And I never listened. He knew from my behavior that I would meet my end soon, so he swore to protect you if I died." "Really?" Sindalla said. "Yes," he answered. "I want you to go to him. Let him treat you like I never could." "But, Raziel," she asked, "what if I fall in love with him?" "Believe it or not," he replied, "that is my intention." "Okay," she said. "Farewell, Sindalla," he said. "I will always love you..." His voice trailed off as he dissappeared through the window.

"You're really going to do this?" Kain asked concerned. "I have to," Sindalla replied. "It's Raziel's dying wish." "You still don't have to do it," he said. "Well... maybe I think me and Terra Zero could be in love...maybe," she replied. "Well, I support you, sis," Kain replied. "If this is what you wanna do, I'm all for it." "Thanks, Kain," she said. "I'm glad you approve." The next morning, Sindalla set out to find Terra Zero.

Sindalla had traveled long and far when she reached Raziel's hometown. She started down the road, until a massive dragon flew overhead. The dragon lunged at Sindalla, hoping to pick her off in one fell swoop. She was weak from her journey and very distraught at the thought of not finishing her quest. She prepared herself for the worst.

As the dragon closed in, a mysterious figure jump onto the dragon's back. He force the dragon to fly out of Sindalla's way, and the slit it's throat. He then redirected to corpse to a nearby lake. The figure then landed in front of Sindalla. "It's you," she said. "Terra Zero." "You had me worried Sindalla," he replied cheerfully. "You must be tired. I'll get you something to eat."

Terra Zero protected Sindalla from that moment on. Sindalla realized what Raziel was trying to say. Sindalla never forgot that night: when her 1st love lead her to the love of her life.

Again, I hope you guys like it as much as Sindalla did. I'll post the next episode of the Key to Eden Thursday at the most.

-Terra Zero
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Monday, February 2, 2004

   Thanks you guys.
I wanna first thank Sindalla for picking me as the winner for her contest. i may post the full version of the ending, but it's up to her to decide if i do. 2nd, i wanna thank all you guys who said my story was good. i really appreciate the positive feedback. i'll be postin the next episode soon, i'll tell you guys when. Thanks again!!

-Terra Zero
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Friday, January 30, 2004

The Key to Eden: Episode 1
Before i post my story, i just wanna say that i changed the intro a little. as u know, those of u who read the intro, the World is Teragenine, the cities that haven't been destroyed by the Demagen because of the protective pillar of light are called Prisms, the training grounds, are now call spectrums. and the goal of the Spectrums is to train people so that someone will be worthy to open the door to Eden, and released the gods so that they might destroy the Demagen. Got it? good. Oh, and if u like the story, tell other people about it, ok?

Episode 1: Competition

"Damn it, I'm gonna be late!" said Rhea as she rushed to reach her school. "Of all the days for the stupid alarm clock to break, it'd be on exam day!" Rhea Tsnomaru, a 17-year-old cadet, lives in Shoryuzen Spectrum, the 2nd largest Spectrum. Rhea has a very important test today, which, if she does well, will let her climb the rankings in the class. That is, if she can make it on time.

"I made it!" yelled Rhea as soon as she walked into the door. He classmates stared at her blankly. "What? I made it on time, ddn't I? she asked, curiously. "Yes," said her instructor, Takuro Kaito, "you made it on time for the test, but you're 30 minutes late for class." The class erupted into laughter. "Who cares?" Rhea said as she took her seat. "As long as I didn't missed the test." "Being late for class takes 10 points off your test," Kaito said. "What!!??" she yelled panicked. "No Way!!!!" The class burst into laughter again. "Stupid class," Rhea mumble disappionted.

"Your test will begin in 20 minutes," Kaito said. "I suggest you use your time wisely." The students began studying. "Hmmm...," Rhea thought. "It doesn't matter. This test will be cake anyway." The exam is a live battle exam, which will test how well the students have devloped their control over the elements: fire, water, wind, earth, thunder, and mystic. Rhea controls the power of Thunder through her throwin knives.

Originally, Rhea could summon the power of every element, though she couldn't control them. She nearly destroyed her home Prism, Sukiya, at age 7. Her mother then sent her to Shoryuzen Spectrum, hoping that she could learn to control her power. She was successfully limited to only being able to control thunder. But Rhea thought of her transfer to the Spectrum as her mother abandoning her. Since then, Rhea thinks that she can survive without anyone else.

"Close your books, the exam will now begin," announced Kaito. The students lined up to beginn the exam. "The test will be pretty straightforward. I will use my power over mystic to created a simulated Demagen battlefield. You must destroy each illusionary monster, in the fastest time possible. Any questions?" The class remained silent. "Good," he said. "First one up: Cadet Risho Aminomori." "Fine, the sooner the better," Risho proclaimed arrogantly.

While Rhea is really the top student in the class, Risho is recognized as that. Because she's agirl, Rhea doesn't get recognized for her true power. But she hopes that to use the test to prove herself.

"Ready, Risho?" Kaito said. "Born that way," Risho retorted. Kaito for the illusion. It was a large graveyard. Soon demagen began appearing. Immediately, Risho pulled out his axe and rushed head-first at the nearest Demagen. The monster dissapeared, then reappeared behind him. It attacked, but Risho dodged it, only getting a small knick on his arm. He the slashed the Demagen 1 by 1 until none remained.

"Impressive," Kaito said at the end of Risho's trail. "I told you, I'm the best," Risho said. "Please," retorted Rhea, sarcastically, "Risho, that was pathetic! You almost got your head cut off when you ran head-first like an idiot!" "Enough!" Kaito intervened. "Next cadet in line is, Miss Sairi Myojin." "Yes, Instructor Kaito," Sairi replied.

Sairi is the class president, because she controls the power of mystic, which is governed by the moon. To be chosen to control mystic is considered an honor, because whomever can control mystic can summon the greatest power of all, 5 God's Oblivion. Since she is the only one, besides Kaito, to wield mystic, she was considered the best choice. However, at low levels, mystic is incredibly weak, and only 1 person was able to execute the 5 God's Oblivion, and he'd died instantly.
"Ready, Miss Sairi?" Kaito asked as he prepared his spell. "Ready," she replied. As the illusion formed, Sairi began preparing for a mysitc attack with her staff. As she continued the chant, a Demagen slashed her across the back. "Ahhhh!!" she screamed in pain. Yet, she quickly recovered and her spell was complete. The spell energized her staff, making it an incredible offensive weapon. She carefully attacked the Demagen, to avoid getting hit again.

"How'd I do, Instructor?" she asked, exhausted. "Fairly well," he replied. "She got hammered, Instructor!!" Risho interrupted. "That may be true," Kaito said, "but...." "But she actually used her element to battle," Rhea said. "You just went in and attacked. If I'm not mistaken, the object of the test was to see if we could control our element." "Shut up, Rhea!" Risho retorted. "Who died and made you queen?" "Nobody," she snapped back. "But if you keep talkin, you're gonna wish you were dead!" "Anytime you feel like it," Risho said. "Silence!!" said Kaito. "I've had it with your bickering. Rhea, you're up next. I hope you can back up all your talk." "Oh, you can count on it," replied Rhea.

"Ready, Miss Tsnomaru?" asked Kaito. "Bring it," she anwered. Immediately after the illusion was formed, Rhea quickly deployed her electrically charged throwing knives, symbolizing that she had control over her element, and attacked the Demagen. Her mid-length hair flowed freely as she dodge and attacked the monster with impecable skill and grace. "Peace of cake," Rhea said to herself as she took out the last Demagen. "I've added something special for you, Rhea," Kaito replied. Suddenly, a large Demagen appeared, bigger than any she had faced before. "A Golem?" Rhea replied. "Now we're talkin!" Rhea rushed at the beast. It swung its massive arm down, but Rhea's incredible speed enabled her to doge it. "Now, you're mine!" Rhea yelled. "Lightning Tempest!!" Rhea through 5 throwing knives around the massive creature's body, which then engulfed the creatures in a storm of lightning. "Nothing to it!" Rhea said proudly as the Golem fell in defeat.

"Very impressive," Instructor Kaito said. "I added the Golem as a makeup for 10 points you lost. However, since you defeated it with an attack I hadn't taught you, you don't get the credit." "What?" Rhea said, sadly. "But, I worked really hard...did I at least pass?" "Yes, you did pass, but so far Risho's grade is the highest." Kaito replied. "But I outclassed him in every way!" she yelled. "I'm only following the rules," Kaito said. "That's what you get when you try to show off," Risho said cruelly. The entire class laughed uncontrolably. No longer able to take the sound of their taunting laughter, Rhea ran out of the school and out of the Spectrum, no longer under the protection of its light.

Rhea stood on a plateau that overlooked the barren wasteland of her region of Teragenine. "Why is it that no one will recognize how good I am?" she said to herself sadly. "Who cares? I don't them or anyone else to encourage me. I know I'm the best." She covered her eyes to conceal her tears. "Stupid world," she said "no wonder the Demagen try to destroy it."

Suddenly, Rhea heard a loud rumbling. She sat up, tears still dripping. "Sounds like," she said to herself, "footsteps." The sound grew closer and closer until it came into sight. "An actual Golem type Demagen!" Rhea yelled excitedly. "I'll bring back its head to prove I'm better than Risho, that jerk." Rhea engagedthe giant creature. Just like in the trail, the monster swung its massive arm down, only this time, Rhea barely escaped, "Lightning Tempest!" she yelled. She launched her attack just like the last time. The lightning engulfed the creature. "Well, that was easy," Rhea said. Buy when the storm subsided, the Golem was still standing.

"Unbelievable!" Rhea screamed, frightened, Frozen by fear, Rhea was hit by the monster's massive arms. She brushed off the attack and deployed a barrage of charged throwing knives. But neither of which pierced the monster's skin. It hit the Rhea again, this time, immoblizing her. It then moved in for the kill. "I can't move..." Rhea moaned weakly. "Is this.... the end" The monster raised its arm again, directly over Rhea's head. "He's gonna crush me...." she said. Its hand hand swung down toward her head with amazing force. She closed her eyes and waited her demise.

But it didn't happen. Rhea reopened her eyes and was amazed by what she sa. A man wielding a sword had stopped the Golem's devastating attack at the last second. "Move," the man said coldly. Rhea found the strength to escape from the Golem's grasp, but she only had one thing going through he head, "Who is this guy?"

That's all for now. I hope you like. If you didn't like it, it's probably because i haven't got to the good part yet. But when i do, you'll love it. Remember, pass it on if you like it!

-Terra Zero
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Thursday, January 29, 2004

Okay
I'm gonna post my story on here hopefully by tomorrow. but it's long, so i'm gonna break it down into episodes. i think i gotta name. The Key to Eden. Does that sound cool? i gotta change the intro for it to work, which i'll do later. on each episode i want u guys to tell me if u like it. Could u guys do that for me?
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   Oh Yeah, I'm a finalist!
Sindalla said i was a finalist in her contest. it was suprising, because i didn't do my best work, but time is a bitch. anyway i'm glad i made it that far i hope i win
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Wednesday, January 28, 2004

   Well, there's an idea!
Ok, i've decided to put my entire story on my site. since i can't come up with a title to my story, i think that if u guys knew everything about the story, then you'd be able to help me figure out a title. You guys think this is a good idea? Because i don't want any 1 takin my idea. lol, Just kidding....but i am serious about the idea stealin.

-Terra Zero
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   Stuff
I'm in Latin class right now. i'm bored and sick. i'm tryin to figure out a name for my story. since there's 2 main characters i can't name it Ryujin or Rhea like in othe ranime like Inuyasha. I was thinkin maybe Unlocked or Unsealed or somethin like that, but a good name hasn't come to me yet. if any 1 has a suggestion i'd love to hear it.
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Tuesday, January 27, 2004

   What in the hell is this?
I know this is Zero from Megaman X6. But i don't know how he got this way. Besides he did die in X5 right, i beat that game by the way. i haven't played X6, can someone tell what this is?

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   My story
Ok first off i wanna know if u guys like the music. my personal favorite is Always on my Mind. probably because of it's versatility. it can match any mood, that's y i like it. but on to my story.

A lotta people said that it was gonna be depressing. that's not my goal, but it may be, seeing as what setting it's gonna be in. i'm gonna describe the world in which my story takes place.

The world of my story is called Teragenine. This world is mostly a barren wasteland, because of it's almost complete destruction by a race of spectral creatures called Demagen. These creatures destroy almost every trace of humanity, until the gods forged pillers of light that the Demagen could not pierce. These pillars became cities known as Prisms. in time, the human race rebounded, but did see the need to defend themselves, so in the larger pillars, they created warrior training grounds, called Edens. This is where my story takes place
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Monday, January 26, 2004

   Oh Yeah!!

You Are Zero....Zero is the leader of 0 Unit and is
a member of the elite Hunter Class SA. He is
always coolheaded and accomplishes his mission
without the slightest hesitation.


What Character Of Megaman X Are You?
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