Friday, January 5, 2007

   Guten Tag! (i'm speakin german!)
well, i'm feeling better. but my heart still hurts. Asami stayed the night and we stayed up eating popcorn and drinking sodas, and we talked alot. i don't know what to say really. oh! i wrote this story, all true, i know cause it really happened. and i put it on everythingscary.com and they put in a lot of changes to my story, i'm putting the original and changed version up:

original:

Tale 4: The Evil at Table 4

This story is all true, my grandmother told me this awhile ago. It happened to my really, really, really great-grandmother.
Sometime during winter in the year 1835 there was a party going on at a local bar. Megan and her sister Jenny were the waitresses and the bar’s prostitute. Megan placed a plate of food on table four. The man smiled at her creepily “Come join me…” he said. “No thanks, I have work.” She replied. She ran over to table fourteen where her sister was “Jenny, that man at table four is scaring the shit out of me.” Megan said. “You just don’t want to do your job cause of your lover.” Jenny said. Megan frowned at her sister “Jen, you got to belive me! Something isn’t right!” Megan insisted. “Megan, deal with it, you have no choice in which your client is.” Jenny said. Just as Megan was about to protest they heard screaming. They turned around and at table four were their younger sisters Elizabeth and Sarah Beth being molested by the man. Megan having everyone believe she was the girls’ mother ran over to them. She slapped and the man and pulled the children away. “Get out… this is a bar not a pedophile playground!!!” Megan thundered. Everyone turned their attention to Megan. “What is going on!?” the bar owner snapped. “My children are being molested! What am I supposed to do!? Let them be raped!?” Megan yelled. The owner had the man leave. Before he did, he stopped by Megan and whispered in her ear “I’ll be back, next time with reinforcements.” Megan slapped him and he left. Megan was walking back to Jenny when a man pulled her on his lap. She sat there very angry.
Next morning, Jenny and Megan were cleaning the bar, when the man who was at table four the night before walked in. he sat back at table four. This time there was five other men with him. Megan walked over to them “What do you want?” she asked. “Nothing, but you.” He replied. Megan slapped him across the face. One of the other men threw a knife in her neckline bone. She screamed out in pain. Jenny ran over to help her sister “Who are you!?” Jenny yelled. “They call me David Death.” He replied. David grabbed Megan by the shoulder and drug her out of the bar. Jenny ran after. Megan’s lover Pindragon somehow appeared from nowhere and knocked David out. He helped Megan into the bar. “You tend to her, I’m dealing with David.” Pindragon said. Jenny nodded.
As Jenny finished sewing Megan’s wound up, appeared a man with a sickle. He pushed Jenny aside and repeatedly stabbed Megan. Jenny passed out.
When she woke Pindragon was sitting with Elizabeth and Sarah Beth. “Where’s Megan?” Jenny asked. “Dead, she died form blood loss.” Pindragon replied. All three girls started crying.
Twenty years later Pindragon went over to Jenny’s. After talking awhile Jenny died. The doctor’s said nothing was wrong with her. No problems or anything. She just died and according to Pindragon as Jenny died he heard David Death’s voice saying “Now they’re all dead.” Sadly Pindragon knew what it meant, Megan was dead, and then at the age of ten Sarah Beth died, and then at the age of fourteen Elizabeth died, lastly was Jenny who died at the age 36.

changed:

This story is true. My grandmother told me this awhile ago. It happened to my distant, great, great-grandmother.

Sometime during winter in the year of 1835 there was a party going on at a local bar. Megan and her sister Jenny were the waitresses and the bar’s prostitutes.

Megan placed a plate of food on table four. The customer sitting there, smiled at her creepily “Come join me…” he said. “No thanks, I have to work.” She replied.

She ran over to table thirteen where her sister was. “Jenny, that man at table four is scaring the heck out of me.” Megan said. “You just don’t want to do your job because of your lover.” Jenny said. Megan frowned at her sister “Jen, you've got to believe me! Something isn’t right!” Megan insisted. “Megan, deal with it, you have no choice in whom your client is.” Jenny said.

Just as Megan was about to protest they both heard screaming. They turned around and at table four were their younger sisters Elizabeth and Sarah Beth. They were being molested by the man. Megan having everyone believe she was the girls’ mother ran over to them. She slapped the man and pulled the children away. “Get out… this is a bar not a pedophile playground!!!” Megan thundered. Everyone turned their attention to Megan. “What is going on?” the bar owner snapped. “My children are being molested! What am I supposed to do!? Let them be raped!?” Megan yelled.

The owner had the man leave. Before he did, he stopped by Megan and whispered in her ear “I’ll be back, next time with reinforcements.” Megan slapped him and he left. Megan was walking back to Jenny when another man pulled her on his lap. She sat there very angry.

The next morning, Jenny and Megan were cleaning the bar, when the man who was at table four the night before walked in. He sat down again at the same table. This time there were other men with him. Megan walked over to them “What do you want?” she asked. “Nothing, but you.” He replied. Megan slapped him across the face. One of the other men threw a knife in her neck. She screamed out in pain. Jenny ran over to help her sister “Who are you!?” Jenny yelled. “They call me David Death.” He replied. David grabbed Megan by the shoulder and drug her out of the bar. Jenny ran after them.

Megan’s lover Pindragon luckily appeared from nowhere and knocked David out. He then helped Megan into the bar. “You tend to her, I’m dealing with David.” Pindragon said. Jenny nodded. As Jenny finished sewing Megan’s wound up, there appeared another man with a sickle. He pushed Jenny aside and stabbed Megan. Jenny passed out from freight.

When she awoke, Pindragon was sitting with Elizabeth and Sarah Beth. “Where’s Megan?” Jenny asked. “Dead, she died form blood loss.” Pindragon replied. All three girls started crying.

Years later Pindragon went to visit Jenny. After talking awhile, Jenny died right in front of him. The doctor’s said nothing was wrong with her. No medical problems were found. She just died and according to Pindragon, as Jenny died he heard David Death’s voice saying “Now they’re all dead.”

Sadly Pindragon knew what it meant, Megan was already dead. At the age of ten Sarah Beth had died. At the age of fourteen Elizabeth died. Lastly was Jenny who died at the age of 36.

SEE! that is screwed up! they shoulda e-mailed me saying they were gonna do that. ahhhQ! makes me so mad. gotta go download some Nana chapters.
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