Wednesday, February 6, 2008

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I have nothing to say but I thought I'd post anyway. It's been a few days. And since I have nothing to say I can jump right to Epic.

Epic:
I did something bad and kept writing Zhek's backstory. Now I'm really behind on my school work. Epic comes before school but at the same time I need to do good in school so I can get out of it and work more on Epic.
Well, I'm almost done with Zhek's backstory. It's pretty weird just because it's his story but for most of it he can't talk or move or anything. He can only watch. It has him talking to Onitane and Onitane talking back but that's all inside the mind. And Zhek really doesn't have much to say to him. He hates him and can't stop him.
And I realised that Zhek and Ai would end up either pretty good friends or hating each other. Onitane used Ai but Zhek didn't. He was always trying to warn him and was nice to him. I think they'd be pretty good friends after something like that. I don't know why that never occured to me before. And Ai wasn't completely stupid. He was naive, but not really stupid. Onitane "saved" his life when he was fifteen. He talked him into coming with him back to Hogosha. Which he only managed to do because he kindly called Ai and orphan and a non-Zephyrian. And then he said he sent a letter to Ratri telling her Ai was safe and with him but he never did. He threw it in the ocean. Then when they were at sea Onitane got Ai to open up and talk about his parents. Mostly about Shadi, since Ai was told that Shadi never wanted him. Onitane was saying stuff like 'oh, you feel bad because you hate him for hating you; and Ai was just like 'I don't hate him, he's dead and the little bits of memory I have of him he's being a good father, so I have no reason to hate him'. So Onitane tells him that he's wrong and that he has to hate him. Then he starts filling in as the male role model. So then two years later, Onitane can get Ai to do just about anything. Zhek never allowed his body to kill anyone so Onitane had Ai kill to hurt Zhek.
But Zhek starts to come back a little more so Onitane secures himself a way of keeping Zhek under control. He kidnaps Aleksei. Afraid that Ai might start acting even more on his own, he tricks him into finding someone on Hogosha that he cares about, Nayeli. So then he has both for leverage. Nayeli was always unsure about Onitane so he knocked her out so she couldn't talk to Ai. Onitane was pretty mean to her. Zhek liked her because she questioned Onitane and Onitane didn't like her. When Onitane tells Aleksei that he's Onitane, Zhek comes through and they argue out loud because Onitane said he'd become Aleksei after he was done being Ai. And now Zhek's wife needs to save him.

.:The Unsaid Works' EPIC:.

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