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Tuesday, April 6, 2004


   Having another go at this poetry thing...
Well, as I said before, my forte is not poetry. But I felt like trying my hand at another one, and I remember Charles making a comment about how I should try something happy and upbeat. Well, there is no hot chocolate or fluff, but I hope it is good enough--heh, that was an accident, I didn't actually intend for it to rhyme, lol. I thought it would be hard, but surprisingly it came pretty easily. Leave feedback if you wish, I'd be happy to see what everyone thinks.

Filling The Void


In my darkest of days I could only imagine what it would be like.
Never had I imagined it might strike.
A feeling of happiness washes over me like a high tide on a sandy beach.
Ecstasy, and exuberance are now within my reach.

My heart races, and a warmth feeling fills the void.
A feeling that has, until recently, been devoid.
The sadness has departed after what felt like forever.
With joy it is a part I do sever.

It ate at my soul like a sickness.
But in moments it was dispersed with quickness.
A cure I have found.
Or is it the other way around?

Out of the darkness I have arrived.
No longer will I be deprived.
My happiness does thrive!
For this day I know I have survived.

An angel has rescued me without even knowing.
Emotion seems to never stop flowing.
For once in my life I finally feel alive.
New thoughts my mind does contrive.

I beg the man above for this feeling to never end.
It is hard to comprehend.
Inside I feel it burning.
For this angel I am yearning.

It must be a blessing from above.
For once I feel love.


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