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Thursday, November 22, 2007


   HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!


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Well seeing as I'm at my grandparents house and don't feel like getting my post boxes I'll just type like this... Anyway, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!

I hope you had a great time with your family or whoever you spent your time with, I'm making a quick post to say happy thanksgiving. I ate so much I'm feeling very fatigued, I ate like 20 pounds of food at least :P well I'm writing ahort stories about old characters I made up, and may post some of those up.

Well I'm leaving BYE!



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Saturday, November 17, 2007


   My story Chapter 1


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Well seeign as I ahve nothig nto tlak about, and you probably fell behind on my story, I'm deciding to post it... from chapter one, I realized my openign sentence isn't good very boring... lol anyway here's chapter 1:

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Virtual Reality Rush:
The Shadow Tyrant
Chapter 1
The Mysterious Room



On the first day of summer the sun rose and shined its light in the room of the thirteen year old hero Torrado. When the sun reached Torrado’s face and hit his eyes he awoke very slowly. He brushed his blonde hair out of his face and his blue eyes shone glimmering in the sun light.

“Huh?” Torrado said blinking awake. “Oh! I forgot it is the first day of summer vacation! Whoo-hoo lets party!”

Torrado jumped out of bed and gazed around his room. His room is a medium sized room with a huge window on the east side of the room. And on the south side of his room he has a huge closet filled with copies of the clothes he wears, you know a scarlet red cloak (that has a hood, but he hardly ever wears it), blue jeans and a black t-shirt. On the north side is his computer place where he talks to his best friends Ziyran and Farin. And on the west side is his king sized bed.

“Oh yeah I need to talk to Ziyran and Farin!” Torrado said jumping. He ran toward his closet and leaped in. He took of his pajamas and quickly put on his t-shirt and jeans and on top of that was his cloak waving as he flung it around his neck and tied it.

Then he ran towards his computer and booted it up. Right as when he saw the screen light up he accessed the talk’onet.
“Ziyran? Farin? You guys there?” Torrado spoke into his head set.


“About time you got on here mister,” Came Ziyran’s deep cool voice and a screen popped up and showed his face. He had medium length brown hair that was all messy and it made him look like he just crawled out of bed. He wasn’t wearing his normal Trinity Robes that were all colorful. His green eyes were shining from the sun too.

“Yeah, seriously! Took you long enough” Farin’s soft sweet voice spoke, then once again a screen popped up and Farin’s face appeared. Her blonde beautiful hair was straight and not in her normal ponytail that she usually wore. Her soft blue eyes always shone brilliantly in the light.

“Sorry guys guess I’m not used of getting up on non-school days!” Torrado said rubbing the back of his head.

“I don’t blame you; I just got up as you can see...” Ziyran said rolling back his chair and showing that he too was still wearing his Pajamas.

“Well I was practically dragged out of bed and forced to do my chores!” Farin said flustered.

“Well anyways I’m sorry I keep you guys waiting” Torrado said lowering his head.

“Well let’s get back to this subject later” Ziyran said rolling back to his place.

“Yeah, what did you want to talk to us about?” Farin said.

“Well I was thinking you guys could come over for awhile and hang around.” Torrado said raising his head again.

“Yeah, sounds great, but I need to ask my parents first” Ziyran and Farin said in unison.

“Oh I need to ask my dad too...” Torrado replied

“Well...” Ziyran started

“Around when?” Farin said taking Ziyran’s words.

“Probably about two o’ clock. Well, talk to you later” Torrado said logging off.

“Bye!” Farin and Ziyran said logging off also.

Torrado spun around in his chair and jumped off. He walked to his door which was right next to his bed and walked out. When he closed his door he turned and walked down this pretty big hall and to the stairs.

When he reached the living room he turned and entered his kitchen (since that is where his dad is usually at in the morning reading the paper and drink a cup of hand made coffee).

“Well good morning son! I thought you were a dead man for a second” Torrado’s dad said smirking.

“Umm I have something to ask you dad...” Torrado said rubbing his shoulder. “Can Farin and Ziyran come over today at two o’ clock?” Torrado asked flinching a little cause he was expecting his dad to explode.

“Sure sounds great” Torrado’s dad said focusing on the paper.

“Awesome! Thanks dad” Torrado turned and ran for his room.
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At two the door bell rang and Torrado ran from his room all the way down stairs to answer it. When he opened it Farin and Ziyran were standing there. Ziyran had his normal wizard Trinity robe on with the hat and cape. And Farin had her normal out fit on her white mage cape and boots and her scarlet red tank top on with her olive green capris.
“Well hey there. Did you guys bring your weapons to practice with?” Torrado asked leaning on the door. He remembered his teacher told them to practice over the break because when they get back he’ll be the principal and make every teacher hold tournaments.

“Well I don’t have a weapon but I did study my spells” Ziyran said standing there relaxing his feet by levitating.

“Yup, I brought my bow and arrows.” Farin smiled.

“Good now we can go out...” Torrado was cut off by a big crack of thunder. “No!” Torrado said falling to his knees.

“Well sorry kids but it looks like you can’t go outside right now” Came Torrado’s dad’s voice.

“Thanks for the update dad” Torrado said under his breath.

“Well I guess we can just explore your house a little. If that sounds fun...” Ziyran said running in the house and Farin following.

“Or we can just go up to your room and play on the computer.” Farin said cocking her head so her blonde pony tail fell that way.

“I suppose let’s go.” Torrado said walking towards the stairs and gesturing the other two to follow him up.

So the group was all laying around Torrado’s room just talking and frequently going on the talk’onet to check out what was happening with there school friends. And all the time in between they spent staring out Torrado’s huge window hoping that the rain would let up soon so they could go and train outside in the back. While they were sitting around the window more than often they caught themselves singing rain, rain go away come again another day. But that never worked.

Then a huge bolt of lightning lit up the sky and the bolt then caused the power to go out and they once again just started laying on his bed singing: rain, rain go away come again another day.

“Ugh! I’m boarded out of my mind here!” Torrado said sitting up.

“Me too I’m practically oozing boredom out of my head!” Ziyran said standing up.

“That was boredom? I thought it was rain” Farin said scrambling up.

“Well let’s go with Ziyran’s idea lets explore my house!” Torrado said jumping out of bed. He wanted to explore because his dad set up all these boundaries in his house.

“Anything is better than sitting around.” Farin said smiling even though it was hardly noticeable in the pitch blackness.

“Come on!” Torrado said jumping off his bed and walking toward the door.

“Coming!” Farin said following Torrado’s voice.

“Hey wait for me!” Ziyran said running after them. But Ziyran turned too soon and crashed into the wall, and fell back on his back.

Torrado walked in and dragged Ziyran out of the room. First the group made their way down to the kitchen to get three flashlights. When they found three flashlights they turned them on and made there way back up stairs.

The group looked around a little and found two things a trap door Torrado fell in which lead to the basement, and they also found a mini workshop next to Torrado’s dad’s room. After that they walked around a little more and found a huge door that only Farin noticed at first.

“What’s that?” Farin said turning her flashlight towards the door. “Has that always been there?”

Torrado walked backed and looked at it. “I don’t know, I’ve never noticed it before!” Torrado said aiming his flashlight toward the door too.

“What’s the hold up?” Ziyran said running back.

“That!” Farin said turning Ziyran’s head the way Torrado and she was looking.

“Huh?” Ziyran then turned his flashlight and pointed at the door. “I say we check it out!” Ziyran said running toward it.

Ziyran then tried to open the door but it wouldn’t budge. Then he blasted a few spells at it but it still didn’t open.

“I have an idea!” Torrado said. He then turned and ran back toward his room. When he got half way there he fell through the trap door again and Farin and Ziyran (who could see him) just slapped their heads.

About fifteen minutes later Torrado ran back holding his and Farin’s weapons. When he reached Farin and Ziyran he said: “I got our weapons Farin!”

“Yay! Now we can bust open this door!” Farin loaded 5 arrows in the knock and was ready to fire.

“You read my mind Farin! Ok Ziyran when I say go shot your strongest spell at the door Farin will shot her arrows and I’ll slash at it!” Torrado ran towards the door and said: “GO!”

Farin shot her arrows that were in her knock at the door and Ziyran blasted the door with a fire blast spell, and Torrado franticly slashed the door. Then slowly but surly the door creaked open.

“Yes, it is open baby!” Torrado said jumping up and putting his sword away in its hilt.

“I knew we could do it!” Farin put her bow in its holder on her back next to her arrows. Then without thinking she ran up to Torrado and gave him a bear hug, and he hugged her back. When she realized what she was doing she jumped back and said: “ummm... sorry” and she blushed.

“It is ok” Torrado said clearing his throat and blushing also.

“Hey it may be dark but I can still see you!” Ziyran said waving his hands and shining the flashlight at the two.

“Calm down Ziyran!” Torrado yelled.

“Uh... guys can we just check in the room please?” Farin said interrupting the two boy’s argument.

“Yeah why not?” Torrado said turning to Farin.

“Sure, lets go in I’d like to see what is in this mysterious room” Ziyran said walking in through the door.

“Come on Farin lets go” Torrado said running into the room after Ziyran.

Farin followed them in but she didn’t run she walked carefully in. She was worried what was in there. So she walked in holding the flashlight in front of her. Wonder what is in there? It could be like gold or something! But what if it is like a torture room? I don’t know Farin thought. Farin’s mind was racing with thoughts of what could be in the room. I guess I’ll never know by waiting out here! But still thoughts evil and good things alike kept haunting her until...

“Farin come on in we need an extra flashlight in here!” Torrado said popping his head from the room.

“Oh! Sorry I’m coming.” Farin then ran in.

When she entered the room something came over her, but she couldn’t quite figure out what it was. She thought it was coldness but it felt more than ice than anything.

“Farin shine your light over here,” Ziyran’s voice came.

While she walked over to where she heard him, she shone her light every which way and she saw the most peculiar things. Like big pieces of machinery with cords of different colors hanging off of them. And some times she saw helmets hanging from the ceiling and sometimes she even ran into huge plugs that she tripped over. The room and all its items in it confused her because the room seemed small. But when she walked in the room seemed to jump up to a growing spree. What really puzzled her was how tall the ceiling was compared to the outside. Plus all the crazy shaped metal in that room.

“Farin! Where are you?” Torrado’s voice came from afar.

“Coming! Clam your little horses down!” Farin said taking off in a run towards the voice of Torrado.

When she reached them she saw the two boys standing at an odd capsule shaped machines.

“What is that?” Farin asked shining her light on the capsule.

“We don’t know that is why we asked you to get over here and give us more illumination on these!” Torrado said turning to Farin.

“Hey guys I found a little control box thing over here!” Ziyran said try to get the others attention.

“Really, where?” Farin said shining her light towards the voice of Ziyran.

“Right here” Ziyran said waving his light in the air.

Torrado and Farin ran over to check out the control box Ziyran said he saw over there. When they reached Ziyran they saw the control box. It was a rectangle shape with levers and buttons.

“This is odd, this looks like the control dad gave me for Christmas last year.” Torrado said touching the control box. “Hmm...” Torrado studied the control box up and down and didn’t miss one detail. “That is because it is! I wondered where it went” Torrado said trying to grab it and take it off. After a while Torrado gave up.

“I never noticed this button before!” Torrado saw a huge red button on the control box.

“Wonder what it does... Press it!” Ziyran said hitting the table next to the control box.

“Yeah!” Farin said jumping.

“Ok... I guess...” Torrado said lifting his finger from his side to press it.

When he reached it he pressed it down with great force. Then all of the sudden the contraptions sprang alive even the capsules.

The capsules seemed like they were the most effected when Torrado pressed the button, the reason why was when the room came to life the capsules started to move around and giant claws appeared from the sides. Then the capsule grabbed Ziyran with its huge claw a flung him into one of the capsules. Then another claw came and grabbed Torrado and flung him into one of the capsules. Then finally the last capsule grabbed Farin and flung her into the capsule. Then in the capsules they panicked. When the group was freaking out head bands came from the wall behind there heads and attached to them. After that lightning shocked the three and they passed out...

When they awoke again they found them selves lying in a desert of some sort.

“Ugh! What happened?” Ziyran said sitting up rubbing his head.

“The real question is where are we?” Torrado said getting up and dusting his clothes off.

“Huh?” Farin said come back from her unconscious state.
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Well hope you liek it yea I know I need to do ALOT of editing. BYE!








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Friday, November 16, 2007


   HIIII!!


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Hey guys long time no post.... I bet half of my friends on here hate me now... But school is really annoying and drag and it keeps me majorly occupied. Anyway My goal is to finish VRR before 2008 and I only need a few more chapters to finish it.... but to completly finish it I'll need to edit it. Which I hope to finish editing it in MArch or so.

Anyway. Seeing how I only have like 3 and half years left of HIghschool I started thinkign about my future, I know not like me, but I started thinking that since I really enjoy writing I'm going to college to get a Journalism Degree. YEa that just popped into my head when I was at school one day. And Ever since then, I keep thinkign baotu it I guess you could say I'm pretty excited nonetheless.

ANyway.... How's everyone's school year? Mine is alright alot fo Drama in Highschool uncool. And Usually I'm caught between it >_< but schools alright just school. Well I'm going now, nto a long come-back post but at leats I have one. BYE!









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Friday, October 19, 2007


   HELLO!!!


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Howdy man Sorry I haven't been on in liek forever and sorry I haven't been commentign either! I believe until school ends... I will only be bale to come on on the weekends... So yea... I've been workign on my story alot, VRR almost done with chapter 16! :) So yea... well that is all that has happenened to me that has been INTERESTING... so yea... Is KHII Final Mix + out in the US now? I'm not entirly sure... mabey I shoudl go to a game store and check it out :P I'll probably do it this weekend some time... anyway BYE!!









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Monday, October 1, 2007


   WOW! TWO POSTS IN A ROW!


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HI!





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Hiya, Not much to report. I heard mine and Jeff's theme song :P the song at the beginning of the Eye witness movies :P it's pretty funny actually :P Also Jeff is datign someone completly the opposite of himself :P he thinks he's a skater and the girl he's datign is all preppy and what not, I give the relationship unti lteh end of this week or so, they odn't tlak all they do is hug and hold hands... quite funny actually. :P

Anyway that is all that is new with me, sorry I didn't visit yesterday, was really busy I'll try and visit some today but not makign any promises.









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Sunday, September 30, 2007


   HIYA!


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YOLA!





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Hey everyone I added my button that Koneako made me to the beginning of my post. Well thanks for the comments on my story I only got 2 but I totally undersand with me being lacking the chance to get on :) Of course yesterday was fun I went to KOneako's site and talked on her chat box for more than half the day, I could've posted but we were having way too much fun! :P

ANyway from when I last posted I've been busy and school has been really stupid and I've also been on swim team. ANd I've been busy with that, I have been out sick for half of hte season! hopfully I'll still get my letter men's jacket I mean I come to practice everyday (except when I have doctors appointments.) I still have a week left of practice hopfully my doctor says I'll be able to swim (have an appointment moday).

Anyway HOmecoming was last night a pointless dance... I didn't go! ^_^ I went bowling before and I met a foreign exchange student from Germany he was cool. His accent was sweet :P I made a german friend :P but yea he was really cool liek I said. Well next year I'm oing to prom :P my swim team freind said next year when she's a Jr. she'll take me to prom! Prom seems fun, it'll be cool to go as a sophmore.

Well I'm leaving I'll start visiting some today!








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Sunday, September 16, 2007


   Chapter 15 (ALL of it)


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No lie, I'm postign all of chapter 15 of Virtual Reality Rush since I'm too lazy to type up a summary of last part so yea Posting all of 15. Anyway here you go! STORY STARTS NOW!
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Chapter 15
The Shadow of the Light

The party continued to walk towards the Dragon Spine mountains where the fourth member of the fearsome five, Zalim a dragon tamer, awaited. The two surrounding villages that took up the Dragon Spine mountains were each being devastated by the wrath of Zalim who learned how to tame both of the main dragons that lived there, the Frost and Inferno dragons. And each village only worshipped one of the two dragons supposedly that the dragon’s of each village drew their power from the Shrines on each side, the artifacts that gave the dragon’s their powers suddenly vanished one day. Everyone thought Zalim stole the artifacts since he knew how to tame both dragons but they were wrong the real culprit was Cravil. Cravil had the artifacts in his castle and was giving power to Zalim. At least that is what Dant told the group.

“Well Dant, how much closer are we to the Dragon Spine Mountains?” Torrado asked looking up at the roof of leaves.

“Umm... probably about a fifteen hour walk until we get there.” Dant said looking at the map.

“Well we still need two more stones for Torrado’s sword.” Farin said looking at the two empty slots on Torrado’s sword.

“I know I know...” Dant said not looking up from the map.
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Further down the path a bright yellow dragon was floating meditating actually and this dragon was the dragon of light. It was suddenly disrupted by a strange tingling feeling and it dropped to the ground a scanned the area. And didn’t see anything out of the ordinary until a giant black blob appeared and threw out the last thing the light dragon wanted to see. The King Shadow Dragon. “Hello goody two shoes.” The Shadow Dragon snarled all three of its head glaring at the light dragon, “How is everything going?”

“Good… what do you want?” The light dragon asked keeping an eye on the shadow dragon, “You never come here unless you want some thing…”

“I can’t even stop in to say I to my brother?”

“Yes but you never do unless it is some master plot to make me evil and got onto Cravil’s side!”

“That’s sad… but… you’re right!” The shadow dragon then blasted three different balls of fire from each head and half way to the Light Dragon they combined and formed a giant multi-colored ball. It scored a direct hit on the only good dragon left. The light dragon collapsed to the ground out cold. “He he he… Too bad you didn’t join Cravil’s army when you had the chance, well now you can join!” The King Shadow Dragon lifted up a giant claw and a dark aura formed around it.

“Hey,” A familiar voice rang out through the forest.

“Great not you…” The Shadow Dragon turned and saw Torrado running from the bushes pulling out his sword.

“Great, now I have to deal with you!” The dragon turned form the weak light dragon to face Torrado. Torrado had a glare on his face that had confidence glare on his face that had confidence and seriousness. “You’ll be sorry for messing with me!” The dragon started to take flight and glared at Torrado. Farin and Ziyran then stepped out from behind Torrado holding their weapons. “Three? What happened to the rest of your little gang?”

“None of your business!” Torrado said grabbing his sword with two hands and jumping up into the air. Ziyran sent a big gust of wind up giving Torrado more air, Torrado dove down with his sword out and pressed in the fire stone. His sword burst into flames and he started spinning around making the flames form around Torrado creating a cocoon of flames. Torrado then stopped spinning and fell into the shadow dragon, the cocoon blew up and launched Torrado back towards Farin and Ziyran he did a back flip and landed perfectly.

“You’ve been practicing I see... When I first saw you were a puny human with a bronze sword.” The Dragon said giving an evil smile, “Unfortunately that wasn’t good enough!” The Dragon then blasted the three balls of his elemental fire at Torrado once again the three balls combined and formed a giant multi colored ball. Torrado braced himself and right before the fireball hit him he jumped up and stabbed his sword into the ball and did a front flip and released his blade from the fire ball and launched it back at the dragon. “Oh? Using my own power against me? You didn’t thought I hadn’t expected that? I knew that was going to happen so I made that certain fireball special. I put my shadow power that allows me to control people in it and look who is behind me all wounded.” The dragon turned and saw that the others were at the side of the light dragon healing him.

The fireball flew straight past the shadow dragon and hurtled towards the out cold light dragon. “Get out of the way!” Torrado yelled warning his friends. The others looked up and saw the giant ball hurtling towards them they quickly clambered up and jumped out of the way just before the monstrosity struck the light dragon. A giant explosion quickly followed after the light dragon got hit and he jumped up still shining but the eyes were blood red just like the other dragons.

“Sorry Torrado, we failed in healing the dragon...” Issl said running up next to him.

“HA! Now the light dragon belongs to Cravil’s side!” The Shadow dragon sneered. “You have failed in rescuing him and now he belongs to the Shadow Army!” The shadow dragon then busted out into an evil laugh.

The entire group got ready to fight the dragons of shadow and light. It was odd to see the two elements together even though they are complete opposites. “I say we destroy them now! Then Cravil won’t have to deal with them.” The light dragon said turning his red eyes to his counter part.

“I agree... this will be easy since they are puny weak beings.” The shadow dragon said smiling at the light dragon. The shadow dragon then turned his heads to face the party standing in front of the two dragons. The light dragon did the same. “Well this will be quick and easy and painless... for us anyway...”

The shadow dragon dove down at with one sharp claw. Torrado quickly jumped back did a back hand spring and landed back to a tree. The shadow dragon’s claw got stuck in the ground and Torrado took this opportunity to attack and ran at the shadow dragon forgetting that the light dragon was now evil. Right before Torrado hit the trapped shadow dragon the light dragon jumped over the shadow dragon and swept a claw at Torrado. Right before the claw hit Torrado he jumped back and blocked it and then launched some energy through his blade and out on the light dragon. The dragon launched back and crashed into a tree snapping it in half. Unfortunately that gave the Shadow dragon enough time to get his claw free and summon some back up.

“All of these dragons cheat!” Umky said flustered. Umky then ran at one of the shadow beings the shadow dragon summoned with her whip. She struck one with her whip and it froze, she then kicked it and the ice shattered and the shadow vanished. Farin launched a barrage of arrows towards the shadow dragon and its comrades the arrows successfully hit all the shadows she aimed for, but the shadow dragon used his giant ink black wing as a shield against her projectiles. Farin’s arrows bounced off harmlessly and landed on the ground.

The other shadows formed a giant circle around Dant, Ziyran and Kain. Kain was holding his knives ready to strike at any moment, that moment came five of the shadows jumped out of the outside ring and dove at Kain. Kain dodged the five attacks and then dove for them he did a roll when he hit the ground and kicked two of the shadows only stunning them and knocking them back in the circle. The other three were about to attack but he then rolled up into a hand stand and jumped up out of reach of the three shadows and threw his knives down successfully destroying them. Kain landed and picked up the knives stuck in the ground and smiled.

Ziyran and Dant looked at each other and gave each other a small smile, they had a move they practiced and they knew it was powerful enough to destroy half of the shadows that surrounded them. They nodded and they began the powerful move. Ziyran’s staff started to glow with a bright light and a giant multi-colored ball started to form. Dant ran up to Ziyran and jumped up on his shoulders and raised his pick axe above his head. Dant jumped up and came down and stuck his pick axe in the giant ball of energy Dant tightened up and became like a board. Ziyran jumped up and spun around and released the ball it started to spin rapidly and went into the group of shadows and bounced around destroying many of the shadows. Ziyran then jumped up and launched pillars of energy into the crowd of shadows. Ziyran landed and saw that Torrado and Farin were in trouble and he flew off towards them.

Issl and Umky were standing back to back with their weapons ready. Twenty shadows had appeared around them and were closing in. Issl ran in and changed into a giant dragon and crushed half the shadows with one sweep of her claw. The other shadows turned their attention to Issl-the-dragon and made a giant shadow portal appear under her then beams of shadow energy launched up form the portal and tied Issl-the-dragon down. The beams then started to glow a bright red and shocked Issl making her change back to normal and also knocking her out.

Umky saw out of the corner of her eye that her friend and fainted She fended off the last of the shadows around her and ran towards Issl she put her whip away and held out her hand sand made an ice path that stretched out of the giant crowd of shadows around them, she then dove on the ice path sliding down it and when she reached Issl she grabbed her and kept sliding. The shadows that were in the way of the path got rammed into when Umky Changed her form into a giant snowball. Once they were out of the crowd of shadows Umky changed back to normal and tried to awaken Issl.

The battle was just heating up where Farin, Ziyran and Torrado were. The two dragons of shadow and light two of the best known elements were blasting fireballs and sending rays of shadow and light energy toward the three. Unfortunately ever since the dragon of light was turned evil Torrado, Farin and Ziyran haven’t been able to launch a single attack the dragons kept them at bay launching their ranged attacks. They had to keep blocking or one of the balls of fire or one of the beams could hit them at any time if they weren’t careful. And if they were hit by one of the dragon’s super powerful attacks it’d mean they’d be goners and not be able to save Vetual.

“We need to find a way to get in and attack them! One of us has to try!” Torrado said fending of fireballs and beams. His teeth were grinding out of stress.

“How? If we stop attacking, we’ll be dead for sure!” Farin asked waving her hand sin different directions to block the beams and fireballs.

“Farin’s got you there bud,” Ziyran said keeping his blue force field charged. Torrado didn’t say a word instead he stepped back a bit and he was stopped by the trunk of a tree. Torrado had an idea to dodge the attacks and get close enough to get an attack in on the dragons.

Torrado put one foot on the trunk when he saw a fireball closing in on him he stopped blocking and jumped back putting his second foot on the tree and when the fireball got a few inches away from Torrado he jumped off the tree and aimed his sword down at an angle making the fireball ricochet off it and hit the ground the fireball made a huge explosion and Torrado was launched up into the air at an arch Torrado’s plan had worked. He flew down at the dragons and with one sweep of his sword he stopped the barrage of attacks. Freeing Farin and Ziyran form their protective status.

“Nice one Torrado!” Farin squealed running up next to Torrado.

“Man you got some brains!” Ziyran said letting his force field fad and dodging one last beam of shadow energy. Ziyran then ran up next to Torrado too.

“Yes, very clever!” The shadow dragon said getting up. “He he he… I should’ve expected that from Torrado… but I didn’t and that is what got me into this predicament.” The Shadow dragon was now standing on all fours. “No one says I’m down and out yet though…” Torrado, Farin and Ziyran got their weapons ready. “Pitiful weapons can’t help you now!” The Shadow Dragon said his red eyes looking more evil than before. The Shadow dragon let out a roar and the light dragon rose and glared at Torrado and his group. Then the shadows that were attacking Dant, Kain, Umky and Issl stopped and started running towards the shadow and light dragons. The four ran up and stood behind Torrado, Farin and Ziyran.

All the shadows just turned into dark energy beams and flew into the shadow dragon making him grow bigger and bigger. The light dragon smirked and jumped up and flew right into the shadow dragon there was then a giant bright flashing light that made the party cover their eyes. When the light faded shock struck the group as they saw what had happened. Standing before them was a giant three-headed dragon that was a bright yellow color but surrounding it was a dark aura that almost looked like flames. The heads were huge every second eye was a blood red color while the others were a light blue color but the light blue colored eyes were blood-shot. The rough body was covered in hard rock solid scales that shone a sinister black. There were two sets of wings that were a gray color with sharp scales on the rim of them. They were also very bulky and looked as though one wave and they could destroy a town.

“BWUHAHAHAHA! You pests like my ultimate form?” The ultimate shadow dragon sneered.

“I actually think it’s quite ugly!” Ziyran said glaring up at the dragon his staff ready to cast spell.

“We’ll see whose ‘ugly’ after I’m done with you!” The ultimate dragon said rising off the ground. “So who shall die first?”

“None of us but you will!” Torrado said readying his sword.

“How heroic… but you might as well give up, this form is unbeatable. But if you wish to suffer a most humiliating defeat, then we shall fight…” The ultimate dragon said smiling showing his crooked yellow teeth.

Torrado didn’t want to listen to another word of the dragon bragging about himself so he leapt into action un-sheathing his sword. The Dragon saw this coming and flew backwards dodging Torrado’s sword. Torrado landed on the ground and quickly retaliated with another lunge. The dragon dodged it again and Torrado crashed into a tree he fell to the ground with a thud. “You’re tries are useless child! Just give up!” The dragon taunted. Torrado stood up shakily and turned to the dragon for another attack. The dragon laughed and then a giant fireball blasted the dragon in the back of the middle head. The dragon turned and saw Ziyran holding out his staff, smoke was floating off of it. Then Torrado slashed down on the back of the dragon making him launch forward.

Dant ran towards the fallen dragon with his pick axe out to his side when he came up to the dragon he jumped up and came down on one of its heads. Issl ran into the battle too with her arm blades ready. Kain also ran into the action his knives glistening in the weak sun light. Umky pulled out her whip and also ran into the action. Farin stood next to Ziyran launching her arrows and Ziyran was launching multiple spells.

“Gargh!” The dragon said using his wings as barricades to block the many attacks. “I can’t be beaten by puny insects like you!” The dragon snarled. He flapped his wings open with such force that everyone near the dragon got knocked back. Dant shot back and crashed to the ground knocking him unconscious and completely un-protected. Issl, Kain and Umky shot back crashing into one another mid-flight. Knocking them unconscious. Torrado was launched back but right before he it the ground he retaliated and landing on his feet. Ziyran and Farin blocked he giant gust of wind by calling their shields up. “He he he... Looks like your friends have fallen...” The dragon smiled at his handy work.

“You still have us to deal with!” Torrado said pointing at him, Ziyran and Farin.

“So? That’ll be easy!” The dragon got ready to fight. Torrado ran in first followed by Ziyran and then Farin. Ziyran flew straight up to the dragon’s face and launched a smoke screen spell to blind the beast’s eyes. Farin then launched a barrage of arrows at the dragon’s heads. Torrado sprinted towards the dragon and slashed the dragon across the chest knocking him to the ground. Torrado did a front flip and landed on the dragons middle head Ziyran flew down and landed near the right head and Farin ran up and jumped on the dragon near the left head. The dragon opened his eyes and saw Torrado, Farin and Ziyran ready to launch the final blow.

“You... lose...” Torrado said and lifted his sword above his head and come down on the middle head of the dragon. Farin launched five arrows in to the left head and Ziyran blasted the right head with a giant fire spell. The dragon fell limp and laid there and slowly started to fade. Finally he completely faded and Torrado, Farin and Ziyran fell to the ground. Suddenly a bright flash lit up the area. After the flash faded standing near Torrado, Farin and Ziyran was the light dragon.

“Thanks for defeating me and my brother... I believe these are for you young swordsman.” The light dragon held out his two hands and in them were the last two stones for Torrado’s mithiril sword. Torrado took them and put them in the right place.

“Thanks...” Torrado said looking at his completed sword.

“Beat Cravil for me and free this world from darkness’s grip.” The light dragon said and with another brilliant flash he was gone.

“We’re almost to Dragonspine Mountains...” Dant said from behind the three. They turned and saw Dant slowly getting up.

“Yep, let’s get this Fearsome Five goon.” Issl and Kain said at the same time.

“Yep, let’s beat these sinister people.” Umky said standing up smiling.

“Just through these trees and we’ll be there... But we’ll need to split up once we get there... There are two villages and each is blaming one another for stealing their artifacts... I fear we are going to have to stop a war between the clans.” Dant said.

“Whatever it takes we’ll do it.” Torrado said starting off into the forest. The others ran and caught up with him.
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Hope you liked it! BYE!









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Friday, September 14, 2007


   All Better!


.:Grant:.



WOOT!






Hey everyone! I know I haven't posted in a long time, but school has kept me busy and I have been sick with Broncitis for the past week or so. So I haven't been able to post, well I'm feeling much betetr now. So I'm hopping I'll be bale to post more.

Well, swim season is comign to an end :\ and I have been sick for more than half of it! so, I barly got to swim at all... :( But there is still about four weeks left of swim season so that's good! I'll still have time to shine! And mabye get my letter men's jacket! :)

ANyway I'm going to post chapter 15 part 3 tomorrow most likly but you guys probably for got all about my story! to be honest I kinda did too ^^' but fear not I read over it and will have a summary type thing before I post the story!

Well, How's everyone's life coming along? Mine's been alright except for the whole broncitis thing! I've been working on my other story, The Twilight Crystal, and guess what? I'm going to be teacher of the day next Friday... problem is I have no idea what I'm going to do... I want it to be something fun, not boring like my English Teacher... But I have no clue what... Was thinking of a collage type thing where I'd bring in magazines or something and have the class cut out something that helps them write and the nwrite like a semtemce about how it helps them and while they do it they can tlak amongst themselves (my class loves to talk especially this one kid named Chole). So I was thinking of that... but problem is I have no magazines whatsoever... So any help!?

Oh you'll also NEVER believe this! Guess who was elected by like half the school for Freshmen Homecoming King? ME! Unfortunatly... Which means I'll have to go to Homecoming dance! Which stinks... But I don't care if I win or lose. Doesn't matter to me! IT'd be odd if I get homecoming king (Freshmen) I'd probably have to dance with the Freshmen Homecoming Queen at the dance... uncool I can't dance... I've slowed danced twice but only because I was forced to. TWICE! In seventh grade everyone made me dance with this girl named Becky and last year I was litteraly dragged into this girl... -.- Guess who was one of the people who dragged me? JUSTIN! (The kid I hate) I wanted to sock him so hard.

Anyway that is all that is special in my life. BYE!









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Wednesday, August 29, 2007


OMG


.:Grant:.



*says sorry 800 times*






So sorry I haven't been updating and visitng school has kept me really busy and I haven't been able to do anything other than go to school then to swim team and come home and do homework and my homework takes me up unti llike 9:50 which only gives me time to come on here answer pms. So yea, I'm sorry I haven't been posted for a long time.

Well I'm sick today again which gives me a total of 3 sick days in the first four weeks of school. HOpfulyl this sickness thing will end soon. Well anyway that is all that is up BYE!









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Friday, August 17, 2007


   Yola


.:Grant:.



I got a nickname lol






Yea, I got a new nickname given to me by some of my friends at school. So me and my friend Jeff went ot each of the major middleschools right? Well Each school every single girl was like our friend, so now that we go to Highschool we get to see all the girls thast hung around with us so since all the girls hug us when we see them so the girls and some of the guys gave me and Jeff the nickname of... THe BRadshaw Pimps lol. BRadshaw is the name of the Highschool.... Bradshaw Mountain Bears...

Anyway I found that funny because me and JEff are the farthest things away form a pimp. But yea... NAyway Today was okay the Weekend is Finally here... But yea I have to move my sister back into callege so I won't be on until Sunday or Monday... SO yea I posted so you guys wouldn't miss me too much :P ANyway that is all I have too talk about... BYE!









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