Thursday, June 22, 2006

Chapter 5 Part 2

.:Grant:. Hey! How's today going? Me is ok like any other day! Swim team was bad today the water was like 20 or more degrees! Anyway I finished this part just like five minutes ago. WAs too tired to write last night. Anyway Chapter 5 Part 2 starts now! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When the entire figure was done forming a man that looked young was floating above the party. He had a crown of different light colors like orange yellow and a tint of red. His face kind of looked like Torrado’s but his hair was way more blonde. He had a shimmering cape of gold and silver, and he wore clothes that were fit for a king of great power. His shoes were made of pure gold. And he had a hilt with a sword that was called the blade of Karaja the most powerful weapon of all. Above all he glowed like the sun. “Heroes of light...” he repeated. “I am Lighster!” he said slowly. “And I must know if you are strong enough to stand the journey to Cravil’s palace. “You want us to fight you?” Torrado said making sure. Lighster nodded and drew his sword. Torrado jumped up and tried to slash Lighster, but Lighster merely blasted him with a beam of light and it hit the group on the ground too. “You pass!” Lighster said. Torrado stood up and looked at him confused. “How did we pass?” Torrado asked puzzled. “I felt it you held back you didn’t want to hurt me so you held back, and that is what a true hero of light does!” Lighster said healing the party. Torrado scratched his head even more perplexed than before. “Ok...” Torrado said still confused. “Anyway in a matter of seconds this town will be completely rebuilt and the lives lost in the scorpion raid will be revived and think nothing has ever happened in this town.” Lighster said smiling. “That was easier than I thought!” Dant said putting his pick axe away. Torrado re-sheathed his sword, Farin strapped her bow around her and Ziyran’s wand vanished in a puff of light. The group saw the town be re-built and also saw dwarves beginning to re-appear. “And one more thing...” Lighster started, “I will protect this town with my light powers. Here watch.” With that Lighster lifted his hands up and a little bubble flew out of his hand it popped in the air. After the bubble popped a light shield started to form. It covered the entire city and even Dant’s house. “If you are ever in any trouble come back here and the darkness will vanish,” Lighster said smiling. “So are you going to stay in this town?” Farin asked. “No, I have much more important things to do like destroy the darkness that resides in the land of the gods.” Lighster said. “Good luck and remember light will always be with you!” Lighster than vanished in a laser of light. “Well let’s get going” Dant said walking towards the jungle entrance (which was in site). The group entered the jungle which was way dark. “I can’t see anything!” Torrado said. “Don’t worry I have a lantern.” Came Dant’s voice a little in front of Torrado. Torrado then heard a squeaking sound and a light burst up. There were then screeches from all around them. And the heard howls and growls and even cries of pain. “What was that?” Torrado asked. “I have no idea...” Dant said gazing around in the jungle. “I’m scared...” Farin said and closed her eyes. Then there were rustling in the bushes and low branches being broken off trees. “I’m scared too!” Ziyran said trembling. There was a boom near them. “Dant shine your light over there!” Torrado said pointing his finger. Dant held his light to were Torrado said to point it and there stood a werewolf like zombie thing. “AH!” Dant said dropping his lantern and it going out. “Dant your smart!” Torrado said drawing his sword. Torrado slashed crazily all around him. “AHHH!” Farin screamed. “Farin? Farin where are you?!” Ziyran said his Scorpio wand appearing. “HELP!!” Farin screamed even louder. “Farin!” Ziyran said blasting a fire spell where he thought he heard Farin’s voice. The fire spell blasted a tree giving only a second of light. Dant dropped to his knees scrambling to find the lantern. Dant then turned it on and illuminated the entire area around them. The entire area was covered in those weird wolf zombie creatures. He saw one grab Torrado and another grab Ziyran they were both unconscious. He then felt something hit him on the head and he fell down out cold. Farin was the only one awake and she saw the whole thing. But she couldn’t break free. All of them were prisoners of the wolf zombies. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ uh-oh! Bad luck for the group! Anyway bye!

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Wednesday, June 21, 2006

   Chapter 5 part1

.:Grant:. Well hi again! Hows today going? Me is ok like an oredinary day anyway I'm going to start chapter 5. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 5 The Jungle of Darr Torrado, Farin, and Ziyran were awoken by a clanging of a hammer against an anvil. “Huh? What’s that?” Torrado asked sleepily. “Well it is Dant making you guys some new weapons.” Came Daunty’s voice from the door. “Really? How nice of him.” Farin said waking up slightly and falling back to sleep. “You guys need to get up now your leaving in an hour.” Daunty said turning on the light. Grumbles came from each of the beds. Daunty walked up to Farin and pulled her cover off her. “Eiyee!” Farin said jumping awake shivering. “Why is it so cold?” Farin asked shivering. “It is because you’re in the sun desert... When you live in sun desert and there is no sun to warm the desert it becomes as cold as the icebergs of Shiverkin” Daunty said pulling the covers off of Ziyran. “AH! Cold cold cold!” Ziyran said rubbing his arms. Daunty then tried pulling the cover off of Torrado, but Torrado sleeps with the covers wrapped around him like wrapping paper on a present. Daunty then looked for a piece of the blanket that wasn’t wrapped around Torrado. When she found it she tugged it as hard as she could and pulled the blankets off of him. Torrado spun like a top until he fell on the floor face first. “Ok, I’m up!” Torrado growled. *** After a quick breakfast of an oatmeal like substance called Dwarfmeal the group got ready to leave. Daunty gave each of them a backpack full of food and with fresh cool water. “Don’t leave yet!” Dant yelled running from a shed holding a sack. “What are you carrying?” Ziyran asked. “New weapons fro you guys.” Dant said holding out his hands. “But I don’t us any weapons...” Ziyran said. “I can’t let you guys go out in the wild with those sad weapons you have.” Dant said. Torrado and Farin looked at their weapons. Torrado’s sword was about ten years old he got it from his dad when he turned ten. Farin’s bow was ok but her arrows were pitiful. They were bronze arrows that were rusting a little. “Ok so what do you have?” Torrado asked dropping his sword on the ground. “Here,” Dant said pulling out a weird looking sword from his sack. The sword looked like the scorpion’s tail that they defeated yesterday. It was curved slightly and at the point of the sword was the stinger of the scorpion. “And I got some new arrows for you Farin.” Dant said pulling out an arrow holder with regular arrow bottoms but where the point was supposed to be there was a small pointed claw. “I made a wand for you Ziyran.” Dant said pulling out a wand with a wooden bottom with a curved claw at the top. “Torrado your sword is called the ‘Stinger’, Farin your arrows are called the ‘Claws’, and Ziyran your wand is called ‘Scorpio’.” Dant said looking in his sack. “I had some left over so I made a new pickaxe for me I call it the Scorp Pick.” Dant turned and walked towards the house. Torrado was examining his new weapon when he realized what a great partner Dant would be. “Dant? On second thought if you want to you can journey with us and besides you know this world better than us maybe you could help us....” Torrado smiled. Dant turned slowly, “I’d love to!” Dant said running up next to Torrado. “Dear, we need another backpack!” Dant told his wife. “On it!” Daunty said running into the house. A second later Daunty came out with a small backpack filled with the same supplies as the other three’s. “Ok... to get to Cravil's palace our first stop is to go through the Jungle of Darr, which starts on the west side of town.” Dant said walking toward the city (which was still in shambles). When the group reached the town a light beam came down from the sky and hit the center of town. In a few seconds the town started to rebuild right before their eyes. “What is happening Dant?” Torrado asked shielding his eyes. “Lighster?" Dant questioned. “Heroes of light!” Came a deep voice out of no where. Then someone or something was starting to form. The group drew their weapons not knowing if it were a friend or foe. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well you probly know who it is but who knows mabye he is being controled..... You never know..... Well bye.

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Tuesday, June 20, 2006

   Chapter4 part3

.:Grant:. Wow! Two parts in a row! Amazing anway today started out like an other ordinary day woke up at like 6:45 to go to swimming and I nearly died swimming so mutch our couch didn't even let us have a break!!!!!!! Anywho here is the last part of chapter 4. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Oh no! Dant isn’t healing because he got poisoned!” Farin said standing up trembling. “What does that mean?” Ziyran asked peering out the cave to make sure the scorpion was near. “It means that my cure spell won’t have any affect!” Farin said falling to her knees still trembling. “Well isn’t there a spell you can cast to get rid of poison?” Torrado said with a slight tone of worry in his voice. “Well there is a spell called Poisona, but I have never been able to cast it before!” Farin said with a little less shaky. “Just try it! It may work you never know...” Torrado said reassuring her. “Ok, ok” Farin said clearing her thoughts. Farin started to hum a little then she stood up and started to glow a bright yellow. “Poisona!” Farin said holding her hands above Dant’s head. The bright yellow light that was around Farin all started to transfer to her hands and then from her hands it spiraled until the yellow covered Dant. Dant opened his eyes and let out a gasp for breath. “Huh?” Dant said staring around the cave at Farin, Torrado, and Ziyran. “What are you three doing here?” Dant asked. “Well we came here to save you from that rampaging scorpion.” Torrado said with a hint of anger in his voice. “What that scorpion is still here?” Dant asked. “And why did you save me when you could’ve killed that scorpion?” Dant said standing up and pulling a hammer from his belt. Dant walked over to Torrado with fire in his eyes and whacked him with the hammer. “AH!” Torrado said falling to the ground with a huge bump on his head. “That is the thanks I get for saving you?” Torrado said rubbing his bump. “No, that is what you get for leaving the city while the scorpion is still alive!” Dant said putting his hammer away. “Anyway! Farin what did you see when you fainted?” Torrado asked. Farin told of the entire vision that she saw, and after Farin finished her story on the vision Dant told them that that is exactly what happened to him. “Dang, I can’t believe everything that happened to Dant Farin saw...” Ziyran said putting his hands behind his head and leaning back a little. “This is not time for relaxing!” Dant yelled into Ziyran’s ear. Ziyran fell back his arms flapping trying to keep from falling but he did and hard too. “There is a rampaging scorpion out there and we need to stop him!” Dant said taking out his pickaxe and running out of the cave. “Wait!” Torrado said unsheathing his sword and followed Dant out. “Wait up!” Ziyran and Farin said. Farin grabbed her bow and her arrows (which were leaning up against the wall near the caves entrance) and ran out. Ziyran started to chant ‘blizzard’ and flew out after the three. When the small party reached the city it was nearly completely destroyed except for a building here and there. “This is what happens when you save one small person!” Dant said glaring at Torrado. Torrado smiled nervously, then the ground started to rumble and once again they saw the scorpion. “Get ready!” Dant said holding his pickaxe in a battle ready position. Torrado followed Farin loaded arrows and Ziyran was still chanting ‘blizzard’. The battle started with the scorpion lunging his tail and only claw at the party. The party jumped out of the way and counter attacked. Farin shot her arrows at the scorpion while Ziyran blasted the ‘blizzard’ and that did the most damage. Torrado and Dant closed in on the scorpion. Once more the scorpion tried to strike the two with his claw but right before the claw impacted into the ground Torrado and Dant did a front flip onto the claw and ran up to the body. Soon after Ziyran flew up with Farin in his arms. He tossed Farin at the scorpions face; Farin pulled out arrows and threw them at the scorpion and did a front flip onto the back. Ziyran landed next to Farin and started to chant fire. The scorpion’s tail kept trying to stab the party but every time Torrado kept blocking it. Once more the scorpion tried to stab the group with its tail but this time Torrado jumped on it a spun a around until he had enough power to slice the tail off. Torrado jumped off and was still spinning when he stopped and dove at the tail slicing it off. He then fell to the ground. The scorpion screamed in pain and shook off the others. They landed on the ground and started to fight it again. Torrado looked at Ziyran and nodded assuring that he could cast the spell. Ziyran released the spell and blasted the remaining claw. The claw fell off and landed in the sand with grains of sand flying every where. “Guys, just like in the desert!” Torrado said. Ziyran and Farin nodded and Dant stood there confused. “Dant just follow my lead!” Torrado told Dant. Dant nodded. So the major attack started. Farin jumped on the claw and loaded an arrow the arrow grew once more into the laser arrow that she had before. Ziyran levitated the claw and flung it into the air. “Jump now Dant and get your weapon ready!” Torrado told Dant and jumping into the air. Dant followed and got his weapon ready for whatever was happening. Farin didn’t move at all while the claw fell it was almost as if she was glued to the claw. Torrado and Dant got ready to hit the claw at the scorpion when it got to their level. When the claw reached Torrado and Dant they hit the claw as hard as they could at the scorpion. Farin shot the arrow and jumped from the claw. The arrow and claw hit the scorpion and sent him hurtling back. The group walked up to where the scorpion was and saw it slowly disappear with the arrow stuck in its head all that was left. “That is the end of that scorpion,” Dant said turning. “You guys better get back to my house and get some sleep you’re leaving tomorrow...” Dant told them over his shoulder. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ohhhhhh ow that must hurt getting hit by that hammer. Well tomorrow I'm going to post Chapter5 part1. I was on a writing frenzy last nighnt writing my story.

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Monday, June 19, 2006

   So?

.:Grant:. So how did you like todays part of thee story? Please comment on it! You can either comment about my story on this post or my story's post!

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   Chapter4 Part 2

.:Grant:. The scorpion looked down and saw the small group and his eyes started to glow like fire. It then swung its giant right claw down and tried to smash Torrado to smithereens, but Torrado jumped out of the way. Torrado caught a glance of Dant in the scorpion’s claw. “Guys! I saw Dant he was in the scorpion’s right claw!” Torrado said landing in between his two friends. “I have and idea Torrado,” Ziyran started “If he swings another claw we should jump on it to get to his back! Then we can go to his right claw and get Dant.” Ziyran finished. “Good idea.” Farin said smiling. Sure enough the scorpion swung his left claw and the group jumped out of the way. The claw was going so fast with great power that when it hit the ground the ground exploded into a flurry of sand. The claw also got stuck in the ground. “Now’s our chance guys!” Torrado told the two putting his sword away, and ran towards the claw. Farin and Ziyran nodded at each other and followed Torrado. When the three reached the trap claw they jumped on it and hung on so if the scorpion gets free they would still be on it without getting thrown off. “Guys I feel the claw loosening.” Torrado told the others. “Us too!” Farin and Ziyran said at the same time. The claw broke free from the sand trap and catapulted the three on to its back. “That holding on thing didn’t work oh well, now to get Dant free!” Torrado said jumping up. Farin and Ziyran followed. The group reached the right arm of the scorpion and carefully scaled down the arm to get to the claw. “Come on guys lets break Dant free.” Torrado said pulling his sword out of its holder. Farin loaded arrows and shot like crazy at the claw. Torrado kept slashing and stabbing at the claw and Ziyran repeatedly cast blizzard and thunder at the claw. In no time the claw fell off with Torrado, Farin and Ziyran falling off with it. Torrado, Farin and Ziyran’s capes were flapping in the wind while they fell above the claw. The claw smashed into the ground and then Torrado landed on the claw Farin landed on the claw and Ziyran crashed into the ground next to the claw. “Dant!” Torrado said remembering Dant trapped in the claw, he then ran towards the claw and tried to open it. Farin and Ziyran tried prying the claw open too. Eventually it opened and Dant flopped out on his face. Farin ran over to Dant and flipped him over and tried to feel a pulse. “I don’t feel a pulse!” Farin said shivering. Farin kept her hand on Dant’s neck and then saw a huge gash Farin then moved her hand to the scratch and then something strange happened. Farin fainted and had a vision of what happened as if she were there. The vision was black and white. In her vision she saw Dant standing outside the house with bags of groceries trying to open the door when an explosion of sand blew down the barrier wall that the boys built the day before. Farin also heard Dant say “No not you!” The scorpion Farin, Torrado, and Ziyran fought appeared from the cloud of sand. The scorpion stood idle just staring at Dant. Farin saw the scorpion raise it’s tail and tried to yell out ‘watch out!’ but when she opened her mouth nothing came out. The scorpion launched its tail at Dant and Dant jumped over it and grabbed a bronze pickaxe he was carrying and swung it at the scorpion. The scorpion then batted Dant away and sent him hurtling into a shed. Dant limped out and jumped at the scorpion again. The scorpion slashed its deadly tail at Dant again and it actually slashed Dant. Dant let out a cry of pain and stopped in the air and fell to the ground unconscious the scorpion then grabbed Dant and walked around the house. “Farin? Farin? Farin are you ok?” Farin heard Torrado’s voice call out and then the vision started to break apart. “Huh? Oh yeah I’m fine...” Farin said sitting up. “What happened Farin?” Ziyran asked. “I had a vision, and I know what happened to Dant!” Farin said glancing around the cave the group was in. The cave was a medium sized one with drawings on the wall and a small window carved from the wall. “So what happened?” Torrado asked. “One second let me heal Dant” Farin said holding her hands over Dant’s wound and cast ‘Cure’ Dant’s scar vanished, but Dant still didn’t open his eyes.

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Sunday, June 18, 2006

   Quick post

.:Grant:. Hey everyone again! I just posted this to tell you that tomorrow chapter4 part2 will be up and also.... I love Dr.pepper don't you like Dr.pepper? I love Dr.pepper Dr.pepper rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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   Happy Father's Day!!!!!!!!!!!

.:Grant:. Happy father's day everyone! My fathers day is going good woke up at like 9:45 my dad opened his presents and well I posted this. One of my friends went to Laufland (not sure how to spell it). 0.0 All my family is doing is going out to eat I think..... Well bye!

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Friday, June 16, 2006

   hi and sorry

.:Grant:. Hi everyone! Hows today going for you? me ok But sorry I haven't updated in a long time! I've been busy doing things and reading a new book I got called: The Journey it is part of the series called Guardians of Ga'Hoole It is about these owls in a world of evil and they must stop it pretty good! I like it anyway there is action in it too and there is always room for action! And I've been busy writing my story Chapter4 part2 will be up in a few days! Bye and sorry again. :)

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Monday, June 12, 2006

   Hi

.:Grant:. Hi everyone! Sorry I wasn't on the last couple of days were busy: Saturday: 1.)Woke up at like 6:30 had a swim meet... 2.)Came home from swiim meet at like 12 and did nothing in particular the rest of that day. Sunday: 1.)woke up at 8:45 or so and played my new game called Lost Magic for along time. 2.)My friends called and wanted me to go see a movie. 3.) We went to see a movie called The Break-up. A sapy love story, but funny. I wanted to go see Posiedon but Noooo. That is all. And BTW anyone who have just started reading my story PM me because I can send you the parts that you missed. Plus how are your days going? OK by everyone!

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Saturday, June 10, 2006

   Chapter 4 part 1

.:Grant:. Chapter 4 The Scorpion Returns The next morning Torrado, Farin a Ziyran woke up with a slam of a door. “What?” Torrado said jumping up. “Huh whu-huh who?” Ziyran said falling out of the bed and on his face. “What was that?!” Farin yelled. “Oh no oh dear oh my oh no!” Daunty said running down the hall. “What is up with her?” Ziyran stated getting up. “Daunty looks scared let’s see what is wrong!” Farin said throwing her blankets off and grabbing her bow and arrows and her snow white cloak and running out. “Wait I’m coming too!” Torrado yelled after her jumping out of bed and running out the room with his sword and its hilt and grabbing his cloak. “Wait up guys!” Ziyran yelled after the two and jumping to his feet. Ziyran ran out forgetting his hat. Farin, Torrado, and Ziyran caught up to Daunty and she was about to run into a room. “Daunty, wait!” Farin said running toward her. Torrado caught up to Farin just in time to see a scorpion break through the wall, splinters flew every which way and Torrado, Farin and Daunty stood idle. Ziyran saw all this too and he cast a fire spell to blast the scorpion away. “Yeah direct hit!” Ziyran said flying up. “Thank you, you three!” Daunty said running into the room she was about to enter. A little while later Daunty came out of the room real pale. “What is wrong Daunty?” Torrado said running up to her. “Yeah, are you ok?” Farin followed. “You seem sick...”Ziyran said landing next to Torrado. “T-t-that s-s-scorpion t-t-t-took Dant!” Daunty said starting to cry. “That fiend!” Torrado said getting furious. Torrado then took his sword out and ran out the huge hole that the scorpion made. Torrado turned his head to look back and saw the medium sized dwarf house with its entire east wall blown out and even some of the roof. He saw the figure of Daunty crying and the figure of Farin patting her on the back and staring at Torrado. The figure of Ziyran flew past the two and caught up to Torrado. “You think I’ll let you take on this scorpion by yourself? I don’t think so.” Ziyran said flying at the pace of Torrado’s running. “Hey, Daunty, Mind if I go beat that scorpion up?” Farin said staring towards Torrado and Ziyran. “No, go get it for taking my husband.” Daunty said staring up then starting to cry again. Farin ran after the two boys pulling out her bow and loading some arrows. “Hey you two wait up!” Farin yelled towards Torrado and Ziyran. The two just turned and glanced at her. “OK, but hurry!” Torrado yelled to Farin. In a few minutes Farin was right next to the two boys and they started running again. In a couple of minutes they saw the figure of the scorpion in the dwarf city crushing buildings and throwing pieces of big buildings at other buildings. Torrado stopped, The Ziyran and Farin stopped behind him. “Only a little more and we will get Dant back and defeat this scorpion once and for all!” Torrado stated seriously. Ziyran and Farin nodded and they ran towards the city. When they got there they looked every which way and only saw destroyed buildings. Then in a matter of seconds a building came flying over their heads and crashed into a building that was destroyed. “He is near get ready!” Torrado said holding his sword in a battle ready position. Sure enough the giant scorpion’s face appeared over destroyed buildings. “He ugly give our friend back!” Torrado yelled up to the scorpion.

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