Sunday, May 14, 2006

   More....

.:Grant:. Here is more of my story Chapter 2 pages 4,5, & 6.ENJOY! “Hey it feels cooler now!” Torrado said while he was waiting for the sand to clear up. “Duh! The sun beings were making hotter and now that they are knocked out it cooled. And it is just in time because look!” Ziyran said pointing alarmed. Then two giant claws appeared from behind the wall of sand. “Oh my gosh! We need to fight more?” Farin said. “Yeah, and I guess it is good because this seems like it is going to be a long fight” Torrado said holding his sword in a battle ready position. Then the sand cleared and a giant scorpion appeared. The scorpion was blood red with eyes like the flames of the underworld. The claws were an inky black color with a blood color at the tip of the claws. The tail was the most horrifying thing you could have ever seen because it was inky black with a tint of blood red, and poison from his tail dripped ready for a victim to inject his deadly poison into. “AHH!” The group screamed dropping their weapons. “Click clack snickle whack!” The scorpion said in its weird language. The scorpion then swung its giant claws towards Torrado and his companions. They quickly jumped out of the way while grabbing their weapons in the process. “Guys we are going to die!” Ziyran said shaking. “Calm down, I think it’s trying to pick a fight.” Torrado said holding his weapon up again in the same battle position. “Another fight?” Ziyran said longingly. “Told you so!” Farin said loading arrows in her quiver. The scorpion ran towards the heroes with its claws out ready to crush anything in their path. “Brace yourselves!” Torrado said aiming it towards his companions. Farin and Ziyran nodded. The scorpion ran faster and faster until it came within about 12 feet of the group. Farin jumped out of the rampaging scorpion’s path and shoot a couple of arrows at the eyes. Torrado dove out of the way and tried to slash the scorpion but the slash was no good it only made a scratch in the scorpion’s body like armor. Ziyran flew up out of the way and caste a blizzard spell at the scorpion. Farin’s arrows didn’t cause any damage what so ever. But Ziyran’s blizzard spell rammed the scorpion into the sand. “Hey I saved the day!” Ziyran gloated. A claw busted from the sand and grabbed Ziyran and flung him. “Ahhh!” Ziyran said flying through the air. He flew about ten feet until he crashed into a rock, and made a huge crater. “Ow my aching head, nose, spine, foot....” Ziyran said lying in the crater he made. “Ziyran!” Farin said holding her hand out. Then she felt a tingling feeling in her hand and a burst of green wind flew out towards Ziyran. The green wind hit Ziyran and woke him up feeling great. “I’m ok guys!” Ziyran said flying up. “Huh? I just caste cure!” Farin said looking at her hand. “Uhh... That is cool and all but help!” Torrado said in the scorpion’s right claw. “Torrado!” Farin and Ziyran said in unison. Farin loaded arrows and Ziyran started to chant a thunder spell while flying towards the fight. Farin released her arrows and Ziyran successfully caste thunder. The arrows flew a super fast speed and a thunder cloud appeared over the scorpion. The arrows landed a direct hit on the right claw and stuck in the claw. The thunder cloud shocked the scorpion and the right claw fell off. The claw landed, and Torrado broke out of the claw. “Thanks guys” Torrado said running over to his friends. “Don’t...” Ziyran started. “...Mention it!” Farin finished smiling. “Let’s talk later now we need to finish this over sized scorpion off!” Torrado said turning and running toward the wounded scorpion. “Ok” Ziyran said chasing after Torrado. Farin looked at the claw and an idea came into mind.

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   Happy Mom's Day!

.:Grant:. Today is mother's day! Happy Mother's day to all! I would've put a picture in but IDK how! Once again happy mom's day!

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Saturday, May 13, 2006

   Ooops...

.:Grant:. Well I was reading through chapter 2 (of my story) and I saw that only about half the chapter were battles. So I changed the title of Chapter 2 to "Sun Desert" and mabye pages 4,5,and 6 will be up tomorrow sometime or tonight.

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   I know

.:Grant:. I know I said I wouldn't put up Chapter 2 pages 1,2 and three until I got more visits on my site, but I couldn't resist! So here it is enjoy! Chapter 2 Battles in Sun Desert The group was sitting in the desert cross legged position thinking of what could have taken them to this strange place. “The capsules!” Torrado said standing up. “But, how could have the capsules taken us to a desert?” Ziyran said standing up also. “Guys this is getting way hot out here!” Farin said jumping up from her crossed legged position. “Yeah, it does feel hotter out here,” Torrado said rubbing the sweat off his head. “Hey look at that!” Ziyran said pointing left. “Huh?” Torrado and Farin said looking that way. The group saw people, but they looked like people on fire. They had redish orangish yellowish colored skin. They also had like a fire for hair. One of the strange creatures turned and said: “What are you staring at? It is like you have never seen a sun being before!” “Hey they are in our territory! Those creatures are supposed to be in the northern lands!” The other sun being said. “Hey you are right! What are you doing in sun desert?” The first one said aiming it for Torrado. “Uhh... That is kind of what we are trying to figure out.” Torrado said wiping his head. “Well if we find your kind in our territory we have permission to kill you!” the second sun being said pulling out a sun blade. “Hey we are not looking for trouble!” Ziyran said holding his hands up. “Well too bad you got some!” The first sun being said pulling his sun blade out. “Torrado! Look out!” Farin screamed. “Huh? AHH!” Said Torrado jumping from the first sun beings blow to the head. “Aww... you missed Red Hot!” The second sun being said drooping down. “Don’t worry Little Steamy, I’ll get’em this time!” Red Hot said to the second sun being. “Hey leave us alone!” Ziyran said holding his fist up to Red Hot. “Hey, Ziyran, if they wanna fight we’ll fight back!” Torrado said pulling his sword from its hilt. “What ever dude” Ziyran said getting ready to charge a spell. “Ready when you are guys are!” Farin said pulling out her bow and loading arrows. So the fight between the two groups started. Red Hot ran towards Ziyran holding out his sword for a lunge strike. Ziyran flew up and blasted Red Hot with a “Blizzard” spell, Red Hot flew far before he hit a rock. “RED HOT!” Little Steamy said turning to face Red Hot. “Grrrr, I’ll get you for that!” Little Steamy then turned and faced the group and charged at Torrado with his sword out like Red Hot did for a lunge strike. “Whoa calm down there!” Torrado said holding out his sword for a block. When Little Steamy reached Torrado they clashed to see who had more brute strength, by pushing each other back. When Torrado felt Little Steamy let up a little he slashed his sword up to send Little Steamy flying up. When he reached Torrado’s level Torrado struck by jumping back a little and slashing real fast and powerful to send him flying the same way Red Hot went. “Take this too!” Farin said shooting her arrows at the two sun beings. The arrows hit directly on her targets she was aiming for. “Ugh!” The two sun beings said falling from the rock knocked out. “We let you go easy this time!” Ziyran said glaring at the two knocked out sun beings. “Whoa we didn’t even try!” Torrado said smiling. Then the ground started to shake. Then a big explosion of sand puffed up in front of the group and a faint shape could be seen in the sand explosion. “What the heck?” Torrado cried.

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Friday, May 12, 2006

   Weekend!!!!!!!

.:Grant:. Today is a special day. Not only because it is Friday but...... Oh wait nevermind that is only the good thing today! Well I'm trying to get more friends only have 8 people signed in my GB but waiting for others.

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   comp class again!

.:Grant:. UGH! My teacher in comp class is making me agrevated! Mostly because the dumb assingments he assigns us. Anyway only 9 more days left of this tourture!

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Thursday, May 11, 2006

   hi

.:Grant:. Well Chapter 2 pages 1,2,&3 won't be posted until I get more people on my site. So sorry for those people who have been folowing along with my story. Ok bye!

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   sorry cat

.:Grant:. Sorry Cat if last post kind of embarresed you, it's just you are the only one who does read this story.

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   Last page in chapter 1!

.:Grant:. I know none is reading this except for spirit792. Thanks for your nice comments about my story spirit792 and for being the only one who supports this story. So for Spirit792 here is page 10 the last page in chapter 1. “Yeah!” Farin said jumping. “Ok... I guess...” Torrado said lifting his finger from his side to press it. When he reached it he pressed it down with great force. Then all of the sudden the contraptions sprang alive even the capsules. The capsules seemed like they were the most effected when Torrado pressed the button, the reason why was when the room came to life the capsules started to move around and giant claws appeared from the sides. Then the capsule grabbed Ziyran with its huge claw a flung him into one of the capsules. Then another claw came and grabbed Torrado and flung him into one of the capsules. Then finally the last capsule grabbed Farin and flung her into the capsule. Then in the capsule they panicked. When the group was freaking out head bands came from the wall behind there heads and attached to them. After that lightning shocked the three and they passed out... When they awoke again they found them selves lying in a desert of some sort. “Ugh! What happened?” Ziyran said sitting up rubbing his head. “The real question is where are we?” Torrado said getting up and dusting his clothes off. “Huh?” Farin said come back from her unconscious state.

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   here is more!

.:Grant:. I know you didn't expect my story to be up for a while huh? Well I thought I would post it sooner than normally scheduled. Here it is! If you forgot this part contains rest of 7,pg.8,&pg.9. Enjoy! “Yes, it is open baby!” Torrado said jumping up and putting his sword away in its hilt. “I knew we could do it!” Farin put her bow in its holder on her back next to her arrows. Then without thinking she ran up to Torrado and gave him a bear hug, and he hugged her back. When she realized what she was doing she jumped back and said: “ummm... sorry” and she blushed “It is ok” Torrado said clearing his throat and blushing also. “Hey it may be dark but I can still see you!” Ziyran said waving his hands and shining the flashlight at the two. “Calm down Ziyran!” Torrado yelled. “Uh... guys can we just check in the room please?” Farin said interrupting the two boy’s argument. “Yeah why not?” Torrado said turning to Farin. “Sure, lets go in I’d like to see what is in this mysterious room” Ziyran said walking in through the door. “Come on Farin lets go” Torrado said running into the room after Ziyran. Farin followed them in but she didn’t run she walked carefully in. She was worried what was in there. So she walked in holding the flashlight in front of her. Wonder what is in there? It could be like gold or something! But what if it is like a torture room? I don’t know Farin thought. Farin’s mind was racing with thoughts of what could be in the room. I guess I’ll never know by waiting out here! But still thoughts evil and good things alike kept haunting her until... “Farin come on in we need an extra flashlight in here!” Torrado said popping his head from the room. “Oh! Sorry I’m coming.” Farin then ran in. When she entered the room something came over her, but she couldn’t quite figure out what it was. She thought it was coldness but it felt more than ice than anything. “Farin shine your light over here” came Ziyran’s voice. While she walked over to where she heard him she shone her light every which way and she the most peculiar things. Like big pieces of machinery with cords of different colors hanging off of them. And some times she saw helmets hanging from the ceiling and sometimes she even ran into huge plugs that she tripped over. The room and all its items in it confused her because the room seemed small. But when she walked in the room seemed to jump up to a growing spree. What really puzzled her was how tall the ceiling was compared to the outside. Plus all the crazy shaped metal in that room. “Farin! Where are you?” Came Torrado’s voice from afar. “Coming! Clam your little horses down!” Farin said taking off in a run towards the voice of Torrado. When she reached them she saw the two boys standing at an odd capsule shaped machines. “What is that?” Farin asked shining her light of the capsule. “We don’t know, that is why we asked you to get over here and give us more illumination on these!” Torrado said turning to Farin. “Hey guys I found a little control box thing over here!” Ziyran said try to get the others attention. “Really, where?” Farin said shining her light towards the voice of Ziyran. “Right here” Ziyran said waving his light in the air. Torrado and Farin ran over to check out the control box Ziyran said he saw over there. When they reached Ziyran they saw the control box. It was a rectangle shape with levers and buttons. “This is odd, this looks like the control dad gave me for Christmas last year.” Torrado said touching the control box. “Hmm...” Torrado studied the control box up and down and didn’t miss one detail. “That is because it is! I wondered where it went” Torrado said trying to grab it and take it off. After a while Torrado gave up. “I never noticed this button before!” Torrado saw a huge red button on the control box. “Wonder what it does... Press it!” Ziyran said hitting the table next to the control box.

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