Thursday, May 11, 2006

   funny day at school!

.:Grant:. So today at school was awesome! Not only did I get to skip my comp class, but we had a hillarious play!!!! Mostly because the actors played the parts good, but it was hillarious. Like there was a part in the play where one of the dudes (by the way there was 3 dudes and a girl) picked kids from the audience and a kid named Micheal and a girl named Daniella got picked. (I wanted to get chosen, but of course I never get chosen for anything.) Then the guy asked for excuses to be late for work. One was "I had to give my cat CPR", Another was "My car was turned into a banana" and the last one was "There was kareoke night at a bar" (Of course a really dumb kid named Cody said that.) Then the guy came in and tried to guess them but he only got two. I guess you'd have to be there for it to be hillarious as I thought it was. Anyway in about an hour or so my story is going to be posted. Once again it is rest of 7,8, &9. And finally later tonight will be page 10 last page of chapter one. I know everyone will be happy about chapter 1 ending.

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   comp class!

.:Grant:. Oh jeez cin cmp class can't let teacher see. last night I meant to say rest of page 7,8,&probly 9 will be posted!

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   oh so sleepy

.:Grant:. Well today was ok, I had fun posting my story and all but boy does it make you sleepy. Other than that I had a dumb keyboard test today in comp class and Elvenninja is in my class and personally I think she did great. WAIT WHY AM I POSTING THIS NOW ELVENNINJA WILL KILL ME ACK!!!!! Anyway Pages 8,9,and possibly 10 will be posted tomorrow around like mabye 5:00 - 6:00 well if you can read my other pages and comment would love to hear what myotakupeople will have to say!

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Wednesday, May 10, 2006

   well here are some more pages

.:Grant:. I know I said I'd post the results to my little problem,but I only got 1 so far, Thank you Spirit792 for your comment. So here are pages 4,5,6, &half of 7. enjoy! “Well I don’t have a weapon but I did study my spells” Ziyran said standing there relaxing his feet by levitating. “Yup, I brought my bow and arrows.” Farin smiled. “Good now we can go out...” Torrado was cut off by a big crack of thunder. “No!” Torrado said falling to his knees. “Well sorry kids but it looks like you can’t go outside right now” Came Torrado’s dad’s voice from the kitchen. “Thanks for the update dad” Torrado said under his breath. “Well I guess we can just explore your house a little. If that sounds fun...” Ziyran said running in the house and Farin following. “Or we can just go up to your room and play on the computer.” Farin said cocking her head so her blonde pony tail fell that way. “I suppose let’s go.” Torrado said walking towards the stairs and gesturing the other two to follow him up. So the group was all laying around Torrado’s room just talking and frequently going on the talk’onet to check out what was happening with there school friends. And all the time in between they spent staring out Torrado’s huge window hoping that the rain would let up soon so they could go and train outside in the back. While they were sitting around the window more than often they caught themselves singing rain, rain go away come again another day. But that never worked. Then a huge bolt of lightning lit up the sky and the bolt then caused the power to go out and they once again just started laying on his bed singing: rain, rain go away come again another day. “Ugh! I’m boarded out of my mind here!” Torrado said sitting up. “Me too I’m practically oozing boredom out of my head!” Ziyran said standing up. “That was boredom? I thought it was rain” Farin said scrambling up. “Well let’s go with Ziyran’s idea lets explore my house!” Torrado said jumping out of bed. “Anything is better than sitting around.” Farin said smiling even though it was hardly noticeable in the pitch blackness. “Come on!” Torrado said jumping off his bed and walking toward the door. “Coming!” Farin said following Torrado’s voice. “Hey wait for me!” Ziyran said running after them. But Ziyran turned too soon and crashed into the wall, and fell back on his back. Torrado walked in and dragged Ziyran out of the room. First the group made their way down to the kitchen to get three flashlights. When they found three flashlights they turned them on and made there way back up stairs. The group looked around a little and found two things a trap door Torrado fell in which lead to the basement, and they also found a mini workshop next to Torrado’s dad’s room. After that they walked around a little more and found a huge door that only Farin noticed at first. “What’s that?” Farin said turning her flashlight towards the door. “Has that always been there?” Torrado walked backed and looked at it. “I don’t know, I’ve never noticed it before!” Torrado said aiming his flashlight toward the door too. “What’s the hold up?” Ziyran said running back. “That!” Farin said turning Ziyran’s head the way Torrado and she was looking. “Huh?” Ziyran then turned his flashlight and pointed at the door. “I say we check it out!” Ziyran said running toward it. Ziyran then tried to open the door but it wouldn’t budge. Then he blasted a few spells at it but it still didn’t open. “I have an idea!” Torrado said. He then turned and ran back toward his room. When he got half way there he fell through the trap door again and Farin and Ziyran (who could see him) just slapped their heads. About fifteen minutes later Torrado ran back holding his and Farin’s weapons. When he reached Farin and Ziyran he said: “I got our weapons Farin!” “Yay! Now we can bust open this door!” Farin loaded 5 arrows in the quiver and was ready to fire. “You read my mind Farin! Ok Ziyran when I say go shot your strongest spell at the door Farin will shot her arrows and I’ll slash at it!” Torrado ran towards the door and said: “GO!” Farin shot her arrows that were in her quiver at the door and Ziyran blasted the door with a fire blast spell, and Torrado Franticly slashed the door. Then slowly but surly the door creaked open.

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   well...

.:Grant:. I was thinkin last post on vertual reality rush was too long if you agree comment with a thumbs up if you don't agree put the thumbs down. I'll post the results once I get around 5-10 or so so please tell your friends to visit and comment thank you all.

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   Virtual Reality Rush

.:Grant:. Ignore the double next post story accidently hit add post twice. Anyway here is Chapter 1! Chapter 1 The mysterious room On the first day of summer the sun rose and shined its light in the room of the 13 year old hero Torrado. When the sun reached Torrado’s face and hit his eyes he awoke very slowly. “Huh?” Torrado said blinking awake. “Oh! I forgot it is the first day of summer vacation! Whoo-hoo lets party!” Torrado jumped out of bed and gazed around his room. His room is a medium sized room with a huge window on the east side of the room. And on the south side of his room he has a huge closet filled with copies of the clothes he wears, you know a scarlet red cloak (that has a hood, but he hardly ever wears it), blue jeans and a black t-shirt. On the north side is his computer place where he talks to his best friends Ziyran and Farin. And on the west side is his king sized bed. “Oh yeah I need to talk to Ziyran and Farin!” Torrado said jumping. He ran toward his closet and leaped in. He took of his pajamas and quickly put on his t-shirt and jeans and on top of that was his cloak waving as he flung it around his neck and tied it. Then he ran towards his computer and booted it up. Right as when he saw the screen light up he accessed the talk’onet. “Ziyran? Farin? You guys there?” Torrado spoke into his head set. “About time you got on there mister” Came Ziyran’s deep cool voice and a screen popped up and showed his face. “Yeah, seriously! Took you long enough” Farin’s soft sweet voice spoke, then once again a screen popped up and Farin’s face appeared. “Sorry guys guess I’m not used of getting up on non- school days!” Torrado said rubbing the back of his head. “I don’t blame you, I just got up as you can see...” Ziyran said rolling back his chair and showing the two that he was still wearing his Pajamas. “Well I was practically dragged out of bed and forced to do my chores!” Farin said flustered. “Well anyways I’m sorry I keep you guys waiting” Torrado said lowering his head. “Well let’s get back to this subject later” Ziyran said rolling back to his place. “Yeah, what did you wanted to talk to us about?” Farin said. “Well I was thinking you guys could come over for awhile and hang around?” Torrado said raising his head again. “Yeah, sounds great, but I need to ask my parents first” Ziyran and Farin said in unison. “Oh I need to ask my dad too...” Torrado replied “Well...” Ziyran started “Around when?” Farin said taking Ziyran’s words. “Probly about two’o clock. Well talk to you later” Torrado said logging off. “Bye!” Farin and Ziyran said logging off also. Torrado spun around in his chair and jumped off. He walked to his door which was right next to his bed and walked out. When he closed his door he turned and walked down this pretty big hall and to the stairs. When he reached the living room he turned and entered his kitchen (since that is where his dad is usually at in the morning reading the paper and drink a cup of hand made coffee). “Well good morning son! I thought you were a dead man for a second” Torrado’s dad, Calvin, said smirking. “Umm I have something to ask you dad...” Torrado said rubbing his shoulder. “Can Farin and Ziyran come over today at two’o clock?” Torrado asked flinching a little cause he was expecting his dad to explode. “Sure sounds great” Torrado’s dad said focusing on the paper. “Awesome! Thanks dad” Torrado turned and ran for his room. * * * At two the door bell rang and Torrado ran from his room all the way down stairs to answer it. When he opened it Farin and Ziyran were standing there. Ziyran had his normal wizard Trinity robe on with the hat and cape. And Farin had her normal out fit on her whit mage cape and boots and her scarlet red tank top on with her olive green capris. “Well hey there. Did you guys bring your weapons to practice with?” Torrado asked leaning on the door.

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   next post is story!

.:Grant:. Well time for the moment you all been waiting for (at leats for a few days anyways.)Chapter 1 page 1,2, &3! By the way my story is called Virtual Reality Rush!I'm have to tell you this when I say virtual you think like a place where people go and if they lose all their health they just vanish well mine isn't like that! Well they do vanish but it is kind of like dieing no coming back! So next up is Virtual Reality Rush!ENJOY!

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   next post is story!

.:Grant:. Well time for the moment you all been waiting for (at leats for a few days anyways.)Chapter 1 page 1,2, &3! By the way my story is called Virtual Reality Rush!I'm have to tell you this when I say virtual you think like a place where people go and if they lose all their health they just vanish well mine isn't like that! Well they do vanish but it is kind of like dieing no coming back! So next up is Virtual Reality Rush!ENJOY!

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   today!

.:Grant:. Today is the day that Chapter one page one of my story comes out! Hope ya'll enjoy it will probly be posted in a few hours.

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   hopfully!

.:Grant:. Well hopfully tomorrow around I dunno 9:00 ish will be chapter one page one in my story. Then the next few days I will post more pages like 2 and 3 then 4& 5 then so on until chapter one is done!

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