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Saturday, November 17, 2007


   My story Chapter 1


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Well seeign as I ahve nothig nto tlak about, and you probably fell behind on my story, I'm deciding to post it... from chapter one, I realized my openign sentence isn't good very boring... lol anyway here's chapter 1:

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Virtual Reality Rush:
The Shadow Tyrant
Chapter 1
The Mysterious Room



On the first day of summer the sun rose and shined its light in the room of the thirteen year old hero Torrado. When the sun reached Torrado’s face and hit his eyes he awoke very slowly. He brushed his blonde hair out of his face and his blue eyes shone glimmering in the sun light.

“Huh?” Torrado said blinking awake. “Oh! I forgot it is the first day of summer vacation! Whoo-hoo lets party!”

Torrado jumped out of bed and gazed around his room. His room is a medium sized room with a huge window on the east side of the room. And on the south side of his room he has a huge closet filled with copies of the clothes he wears, you know a scarlet red cloak (that has a hood, but he hardly ever wears it), blue jeans and a black t-shirt. On the north side is his computer place where he talks to his best friends Ziyran and Farin. And on the west side is his king sized bed.

“Oh yeah I need to talk to Ziyran and Farin!” Torrado said jumping. He ran toward his closet and leaped in. He took of his pajamas and quickly put on his t-shirt and jeans and on top of that was his cloak waving as he flung it around his neck and tied it.

Then he ran towards his computer and booted it up. Right as when he saw the screen light up he accessed the talk’onet.
“Ziyran? Farin? You guys there?” Torrado spoke into his head set.


“About time you got on here mister,” Came Ziyran’s deep cool voice and a screen popped up and showed his face. He had medium length brown hair that was all messy and it made him look like he just crawled out of bed. He wasn’t wearing his normal Trinity Robes that were all colorful. His green eyes were shining from the sun too.

“Yeah, seriously! Took you long enough” Farin’s soft sweet voice spoke, then once again a screen popped up and Farin’s face appeared. Her blonde beautiful hair was straight and not in her normal ponytail that she usually wore. Her soft blue eyes always shone brilliantly in the light.

“Sorry guys guess I’m not used of getting up on non-school days!” Torrado said rubbing the back of his head.

“I don’t blame you; I just got up as you can see...” Ziyran said rolling back his chair and showing that he too was still wearing his Pajamas.

“Well I was practically dragged out of bed and forced to do my chores!” Farin said flustered.

“Well anyways I’m sorry I keep you guys waiting” Torrado said lowering his head.

“Well let’s get back to this subject later” Ziyran said rolling back to his place.

“Yeah, what did you want to talk to us about?” Farin said.

“Well I was thinking you guys could come over for awhile and hang around.” Torrado said raising his head again.

“Yeah, sounds great, but I need to ask my parents first” Ziyran and Farin said in unison.

“Oh I need to ask my dad too...” Torrado replied

“Well...” Ziyran started

“Around when?” Farin said taking Ziyran’s words.

“Probably about two o’ clock. Well, talk to you later” Torrado said logging off.

“Bye!” Farin and Ziyran said logging off also.

Torrado spun around in his chair and jumped off. He walked to his door which was right next to his bed and walked out. When he closed his door he turned and walked down this pretty big hall and to the stairs.

When he reached the living room he turned and entered his kitchen (since that is where his dad is usually at in the morning reading the paper and drink a cup of hand made coffee).

“Well good morning son! I thought you were a dead man for a second” Torrado’s dad said smirking.

“Umm I have something to ask you dad...” Torrado said rubbing his shoulder. “Can Farin and Ziyran come over today at two o’ clock?” Torrado asked flinching a little cause he was expecting his dad to explode.

“Sure sounds great” Torrado’s dad said focusing on the paper.

“Awesome! Thanks dad” Torrado turned and ran for his room.
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At two the door bell rang and Torrado ran from his room all the way down stairs to answer it. When he opened it Farin and Ziyran were standing there. Ziyran had his normal wizard Trinity robe on with the hat and cape. And Farin had her normal out fit on her white mage cape and boots and her scarlet red tank top on with her olive green capris.
“Well hey there. Did you guys bring your weapons to practice with?” Torrado asked leaning on the door. He remembered his teacher told them to practice over the break because when they get back he’ll be the principal and make every teacher hold tournaments.

“Well I don’t have a weapon but I did study my spells” Ziyran said standing there relaxing his feet by levitating.

“Yup, I brought my bow and arrows.” Farin smiled.

“Good now we can go out...” Torrado was cut off by a big crack of thunder. “No!” Torrado said falling to his knees.

“Well sorry kids but it looks like you can’t go outside right now” Came Torrado’s dad’s voice.

“Thanks for the update dad” Torrado said under his breath.

“Well I guess we can just explore your house a little. If that sounds fun...” Ziyran said running in the house and Farin following.

“Or we can just go up to your room and play on the computer.” Farin said cocking her head so her blonde pony tail fell that way.

“I suppose let’s go.” Torrado said walking towards the stairs and gesturing the other two to follow him up.

So the group was all laying around Torrado’s room just talking and frequently going on the talk’onet to check out what was happening with there school friends. And all the time in between they spent staring out Torrado’s huge window hoping that the rain would let up soon so they could go and train outside in the back. While they were sitting around the window more than often they caught themselves singing rain, rain go away come again another day. But that never worked.

Then a huge bolt of lightning lit up the sky and the bolt then caused the power to go out and they once again just started laying on his bed singing: rain, rain go away come again another day.

“Ugh! I’m boarded out of my mind here!” Torrado said sitting up.

“Me too I’m practically oozing boredom out of my head!” Ziyran said standing up.

“That was boredom? I thought it was rain” Farin said scrambling up.

“Well let’s go with Ziyran’s idea lets explore my house!” Torrado said jumping out of bed. He wanted to explore because his dad set up all these boundaries in his house.

“Anything is better than sitting around.” Farin said smiling even though it was hardly noticeable in the pitch blackness.

“Come on!” Torrado said jumping off his bed and walking toward the door.

“Coming!” Farin said following Torrado’s voice.

“Hey wait for me!” Ziyran said running after them. But Ziyran turned too soon and crashed into the wall, and fell back on his back.

Torrado walked in and dragged Ziyran out of the room. First the group made their way down to the kitchen to get three flashlights. When they found three flashlights they turned them on and made there way back up stairs.

The group looked around a little and found two things a trap door Torrado fell in which lead to the basement, and they also found a mini workshop next to Torrado’s dad’s room. After that they walked around a little more and found a huge door that only Farin noticed at first.

“What’s that?” Farin said turning her flashlight towards the door. “Has that always been there?”

Torrado walked backed and looked at it. “I don’t know, I’ve never noticed it before!” Torrado said aiming his flashlight toward the door too.

“What’s the hold up?” Ziyran said running back.

“That!” Farin said turning Ziyran’s head the way Torrado and she was looking.

“Huh?” Ziyran then turned his flashlight and pointed at the door. “I say we check it out!” Ziyran said running toward it.

Ziyran then tried to open the door but it wouldn’t budge. Then he blasted a few spells at it but it still didn’t open.

“I have an idea!” Torrado said. He then turned and ran back toward his room. When he got half way there he fell through the trap door again and Farin and Ziyran (who could see him) just slapped their heads.

About fifteen minutes later Torrado ran back holding his and Farin’s weapons. When he reached Farin and Ziyran he said: “I got our weapons Farin!”

“Yay! Now we can bust open this door!” Farin loaded 5 arrows in the knock and was ready to fire.

“You read my mind Farin! Ok Ziyran when I say go shot your strongest spell at the door Farin will shot her arrows and I’ll slash at it!” Torrado ran towards the door and said: “GO!”

Farin shot her arrows that were in her knock at the door and Ziyran blasted the door with a fire blast spell, and Torrado franticly slashed the door. Then slowly but surly the door creaked open.

“Yes, it is open baby!” Torrado said jumping up and putting his sword away in its hilt.

“I knew we could do it!” Farin put her bow in its holder on her back next to her arrows. Then without thinking she ran up to Torrado and gave him a bear hug, and he hugged her back. When she realized what she was doing she jumped back and said: “ummm... sorry” and she blushed.

“It is ok” Torrado said clearing his throat and blushing also.

“Hey it may be dark but I can still see you!” Ziyran said waving his hands and shining the flashlight at the two.

“Calm down Ziyran!” Torrado yelled.

“Uh... guys can we just check in the room please?” Farin said interrupting the two boy’s argument.

“Yeah why not?” Torrado said turning to Farin.

“Sure, lets go in I’d like to see what is in this mysterious room” Ziyran said walking in through the door.

“Come on Farin lets go” Torrado said running into the room after Ziyran.

Farin followed them in but she didn’t run she walked carefully in. She was worried what was in there. So she walked in holding the flashlight in front of her. Wonder what is in there? It could be like gold or something! But what if it is like a torture room? I don’t know Farin thought. Farin’s mind was racing with thoughts of what could be in the room. I guess I’ll never know by waiting out here! But still thoughts evil and good things alike kept haunting her until...

“Farin come on in we need an extra flashlight in here!” Torrado said popping his head from the room.

“Oh! Sorry I’m coming.” Farin then ran in.

When she entered the room something came over her, but she couldn’t quite figure out what it was. She thought it was coldness but it felt more than ice than anything.

“Farin shine your light over here,” Ziyran’s voice came.

While she walked over to where she heard him, she shone her light every which way and she saw the most peculiar things. Like big pieces of machinery with cords of different colors hanging off of them. And some times she saw helmets hanging from the ceiling and sometimes she even ran into huge plugs that she tripped over. The room and all its items in it confused her because the room seemed small. But when she walked in the room seemed to jump up to a growing spree. What really puzzled her was how tall the ceiling was compared to the outside. Plus all the crazy shaped metal in that room.

“Farin! Where are you?” Torrado’s voice came from afar.

“Coming! Clam your little horses down!” Farin said taking off in a run towards the voice of Torrado.

When she reached them she saw the two boys standing at an odd capsule shaped machines.

“What is that?” Farin asked shining her light on the capsule.

“We don’t know that is why we asked you to get over here and give us more illumination on these!” Torrado said turning to Farin.

“Hey guys I found a little control box thing over here!” Ziyran said try to get the others attention.

“Really, where?” Farin said shining her light towards the voice of Ziyran.

“Right here” Ziyran said waving his light in the air.

Torrado and Farin ran over to check out the control box Ziyran said he saw over there. When they reached Ziyran they saw the control box. It was a rectangle shape with levers and buttons.

“This is odd, this looks like the control dad gave me for Christmas last year.” Torrado said touching the control box. “Hmm...” Torrado studied the control box up and down and didn’t miss one detail. “That is because it is! I wondered where it went” Torrado said trying to grab it and take it off. After a while Torrado gave up.

“I never noticed this button before!” Torrado saw a huge red button on the control box.

“Wonder what it does... Press it!” Ziyran said hitting the table next to the control box.

“Yeah!” Farin said jumping.

“Ok... I guess...” Torrado said lifting his finger from his side to press it.

When he reached it he pressed it down with great force. Then all of the sudden the contraptions sprang alive even the capsules.

The capsules seemed like they were the most effected when Torrado pressed the button, the reason why was when the room came to life the capsules started to move around and giant claws appeared from the sides. Then the capsule grabbed Ziyran with its huge claw a flung him into one of the capsules. Then another claw came and grabbed Torrado and flung him into one of the capsules. Then finally the last capsule grabbed Farin and flung her into the capsule. Then in the capsules they panicked. When the group was freaking out head bands came from the wall behind there heads and attached to them. After that lightning shocked the three and they passed out...

When they awoke again they found them selves lying in a desert of some sort.

“Ugh! What happened?” Ziyran said sitting up rubbing his head.

“The real question is where are we?” Torrado said getting up and dusting his clothes off.

“Huh?” Farin said come back from her unconscious state.
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Well hope you liek it yea I know I need to do ALOT of editing. BYE!








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